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Writing:Lead-in:Goodmorning,boysandgirls!Wow,fromyourvoice,Iknowallofyouarereadyforthenewclass,right?OK,todaywearegoingtohaveawritinglesson.Firstofall,whatfestivalhaveyoujustcelebrated?ItistheNewYear’sDay.OK,wheredidyougoandwhatdidyoudo?Please,Mike.Youonlystayedathomeandfinishedyourhomework?Whatahardworkingboyheis!Then,Judy.YouhavebeentoHuangshan.Itisaniceplace.Actually,Ispentthepastthreedaysonamysteriousthing.DoyouwanttoknowwhatIhavedone?PleaselookatthevideoItookandguesstheanswer.So,asyoucansee,Ihavebeentoatrip.Andtodaywewilllearnhowtodescribeatripindetail.Pre-writing(Brainstormandinputofsentences&words):Ithinkeveryonehassuchanexperiencethatyouinviteyourbestfriendsandbuykindsofsnackstogetreadyforatrip.Duringthetrip,youmaymeetwithsomanyunforgettableandimpressedthings.Now,pleasediscussinpairsandtrytorecallyourwhatyouhaveexperiencedinatripasmuchaspossible.OK,whocantellmeyourmemories?(板书，旅行在当中，周围延伸八根线)Anyvolunteer?OK,Lucy.Youcan’tforgetthedeliciouscuisineandspeciallocalclothes,right?Great,foodandcustommakeacertainpartofourvacation.Isthereanythingelse?En,Jacky,oh,thefive-starhotelandbeautifulsceneryreallymakesyoufeelrelaxed.Great!Oh,Jason,what’syourmemory?Wow,youhavemetwithabeautifulgirlandyoutwobecomebestfriendsnow?Wow,it’sanawesomeexperience!Iamsoadmireyouforyourhappymemories.WhatIcouldrecallwasthecoldweatherandtherunningnoseduringmytripinHarbin.YouknowHarbin,right?Reallyacoldcityitis.So,itcanbeconcludedintothetroubleinthetrip.Now,whocanfinishthiswithme?En,Diana.Transport,衣食住行,right,andimpression…andsoon.Class,whenwegotoatrip,wemayexperiencesomanyaspectsofthelife,right?Thesmilesandthetearsaswellasthegotandthelostappear.So,doyouwanttorecordthesespecialmemories?En,let’stakeoutthematerialandlearnhowtowritearecallofonetrip.Then,pleasetakeoutyourpentounderlinesomephrases.At7:20a.m./after2hours/afterthat/intheafternoon…whocantellmewhatthesephrasesare?You,Mary,OK,thesewordsareaboutthetime.Whenweseethesewordsinonearticle,whatdoyoufeel?Good!Thewritertriestotellussomethinginalogicalway.So,couldyoufindmorephraseslikethem?OK,next/then/before/atp.m.…Great!Pleassitdown.OK,class,whenwewanttowriteacompositionaboutatriporanaffair,wecanrecorditinatimelinetomakethearticlesmoothlyandlogically.Clear?Great!Now,aswehavecollectedsomanyaspectsaboutanexcellenttripandlearnsomanyphrasesabouttime,couldyoutrytowriteacompositionaboutonetrip?Afteryoufinishit,Iwilldoacompetition.Thewinnerwillgetapresent.Ready?Go!While-writing(Omit):Pleasekeepquiet.Post-writing:Now,class,timeisup.Then,wewillhaveacompetition.Now,allofyouaredividedintotwogroups.YouareGroup1andyouareGroup2.CouldyoubetheGroup1leader,Diana?OK,andJacky,youareGroup2leader,OK?OK!Now,firstly,pleaseworkinpairstoreadyourpartner’sarticleandtrytocorrecthisorhergrammarorspellingmistakes.GO!Haveyoufinishedyet?OK!Secondly,youtwogroupneedtodoadiscussionandchoseabest-writtenarticle.Pleaseremembertofocusonthephrasesabouttime,OK?GO!Don’tbeshyandshowyourarticletoothers.It’salright,OK?En,istheworkfinished?OK!Andthebestcompositionhasbeenchosen.Now,thelaststep,thegroupleaderpleasereadthisarticleoutinfrontofourclass.Let’swelcomeDianaandJacky.Nowthetwoarticleshavebeenread.Whichonedoyouthinkisbetter?Judy,please,youlovetheonefromGroup1.Why?Couldyoutellmeyourreasons?Ok,itisfulloflovetothenatureandlocalcustoms,right?Soyouloveit.Good!Isthereanyotherideas?Ok,Mike,youlovetheGroup2’s,why?Becauseitiswritteninalogicalwayandwecanseesomanykindsofclausesinthisarticle,right?OK!Now,class,haveyoufoundamethodtowriteawonderfularticle?OK,Diana.Yes,weneedtofocusonthewritingskillsaswellastheemotionalpart.Agoodcompositionshouldhavethesetwoaspects,right?Great!Now,class,asitisacompetition,pleaseraiseyourhandstovoteforthebetterarticleyouthink.TheonefromGroup1,pleaseraiseyourhand.OK,26.Then,theonefromGroup2,25!So,thewinnerisGroup1!Thewriterpleasecomeshere,andthissouvenirIgotduringmytriptoHongKongisforyou.Pleasewritemoreexcellentarticles,OK?Congratulations!Claups!Homework:OK,class,ourlessonisgoingtobeover,yourhomeworkistopreparearoleplay.Youneedtoactastoryorascenarioduringyourtrip.Whathappenstoyouandwhatdoyouthink?PleaseworkingroupsandIwillinvitesomeofyoutoshowtheplayinthenextclass.RemembertouseatleastthreeXX(relativeclauses).Nowclassisoverandyoucanhavearest.