高考英语二轮复习资料ppt第四板块书面表达7步成文第五步靓词佳句升级完衔接顺畅修一番

7步成文第五步靓词佳句升级完，衔接顺畅“修一番”习作的润色主要包括两方面，一是词句的美化，着眼于句子内部；二是语句的衔接，着眼于句子与句子之间、段与段之间。一篇100词左右的文章，几个衔接词看似微不足道，其实不然，缺乏有效衔接的文章就如同缺乏粘合的墙壁一样——松散、易垮。一、“四档”“五档”差在哪[典例感悟](2018·浙江高考写作)假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1．口语能力；2.相关经验；3.应聘目的。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。“冤屈的”四档作文(得分11分)DearSir/Madam，I'velearnedthattheEnglishAssociationofourschoolisnowinneedofsomevolunteerstoreceiveforeignstudentsvisitingourschool.I'mwritingtoapplytojoinit,thinkingthatI'mwellqualifiedforthejob.IhavedevelopedfluencyinspokenEnglish.Ihavenodifficultycommunicatingwiththem.Ihaveaccumulatedrelatedexperiencebyworkingparttimeinatravelagency,accompanyingsomeforeigntourists.ItreasurethisasagoodchancetobroadenmyperspectiveaswellasimprovemyspokenEnglish.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourconvenience.Yours，LiHua升格后的五档作文(得分14分)DearSir/Madam，I'velearnedthattheEnglishAssociationofourschoolisnowinneedofsomevolunteerstoreceiveforeignstudentsvisitingourschool.I'mwritingtoapplytojoinit,thinkingthatI'mwellqualifiedforthejob.Foronething,IhavedevelopedfluencyinspokenEnglish.Asaresult,Ihavenodifficultycommunicatingwiththem.Foranother,Ihaveaccumulatedrelatedexperiencebyworkingparttimeinatravelagency,accompanyingsomeforeigntourists.Moreimportantly,ItreasurethisasagoodchancetobroadenmyperspectiveaswellasimprovemyspokenEnglish.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourconvenience.Yours，LiHua名师点评左栏的文章运用了现在分词作状语、宾语从句、非谓语动词等；inneedof,bewellqualifiedfor,developfluencyin,accumulated,broadenmyperspective,aswellas等的应用也恰到好处；文章采用了三段式，分段合理，总体来说是一篇不错的作文。但美中不足的是缺少了语句间的连接成分，感觉好像只是一些句子的简单堆砌，使得文章读起来稍欠流畅，故勉强归入四档。右栏的作文加上一些连接词后使文章结构紧凑，过渡自然，从而上升了一个档次，从四档跨入了五档。二、如何由“四档”升“五档”四档作文与五档作文在衔接过渡方面的差别在于：一个是应用简单的语句间的连接成分；一个是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。一个“简单”，一个“有效”，凸显写作功底、凸显档次差别。有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“起、承、转、合”四种方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达跨进五档线的必备条件。[常用开头词汇]表示“起”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first,firstly,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,aboveall,tobegin/startwith,today,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto等。First,Ithinkeveryoneneedsfriendsandiseagertogetfriendship.Firstofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45­minutelesson.Nowadays/Recently,peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplainingabouttheheavytraffic.Tobegin/startwith,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.Generallyspeaking,themoreyoupractise,themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.[常用开头句式]Astheproverbsays/Asthesayinggoes,“Timeismoney.”WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,computersplayanimportantroleinpeople'slife.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.Thereisnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.Itiswell­knownthatanelephantisaverykindandgentleanimal.I'mexcitedtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazine.[满分作文选粹]Generallyspeaking,yourarrivalshouldn'tbelaterthanthefixedtime.(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Foronething,IhavedevelopedfluencyinspokenEnglish.(2018·浙江高考写作)NowI'mwritingtotellyoutheplanforthenextclass.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I'mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou'recomingtoChina.(2017·北京高考书面表达)Asisindicatedinthegraph,thebox­officeincomeofChinesefilmsincreasedconstantlyfrom2012to2015.(2017·江苏高考书面表达)[常用顺承词汇]表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly,also,besides,inaddition,soonafterwards,afterthat,what'smore,furthermore,moreover,what'sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,meanwhile,atthesametime等。Also,doletmeknowifyouneedmoreinformation.Secondly,weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.Obviously,agoodlearninghabitcanhelpustospeeduptoreachourdestinations.Besides,developingagoodhabitoflearningcanhelpyouimproveyourlearningeffectively.What'smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.Inaddition,weshouldn'tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.Meanwhile/Atthesametime,Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentcleanandtidy.[常用顺承句式]TakeBeijingforexample,itisoneofthebiggestcitiesintheworld.Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon'tcherishwildlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.[满分作文选粹]What'smore,itisbigenoughtoholdalltheteachersandstudentsinourschool.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)WhatIwanttostressisthatourgroupislookingfornewmembersrightnow.(2018·天津高考书面表达)Inaddition,therearefamousartistswhowillperformhowtocutpaperonthespot.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Atthesametime,wewilldividethemembersintoseveralgroupstopracticeat5：00pmafterschool.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)AsfarasI'mconcerned,everysummerIstayatmyuncle'shouseinthecountryforthreeweeksandenjoyawonderfullifethere.(2016·四川高考书面表达)[常用转折过渡词汇]表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but,yet,however,while,otherwise,or(else),onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,contraryto,inanycase,though,although,as,evenif/though,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof等。ButunfortunatelyImindmyownbusinesswithoutconsideringmyparents.However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Onthecontrary,thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth.ContrarytowhatIhadoriginallysaid,thetripturnedouttobefun.[常用转折过渡句式]Whatever/Nomatterwhatyousay,hewon'tbelieveyou.Whetheryoubelieveitornot,itistrue.Asamatteroffact,Ididn'tagreewithyou.[满分作文选