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Throughtheice读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Aboutahalf-milebehindourMinnesotafarmlayapond.Insummer,mybrotherHarryandIwouldrunthroughastandofoaktreestoskipstonesthere.Thepondworeacollarofblackmud.Itwasnotaplaceforswimming.Inlatesummer,thepondwouldbecoveredbyagreenandbubblyscum(起泡的浮渣).Sometimesastrong,unpleasantsmellrosefromit.Westayedaway.Whenwintercame,thepondwasonceagainaninvitingplace.Onedaywhenicecoveredit,Harrysaidtome,“Trywalkingacross.”Theicelookedsolid.Nowatershowedthroughit,butIhesitated.“Goahead.”Harryurged.“Tryit.You’relighterthanIam.Iftheiceholds,wecanrunandslidecarefullyonit.It’llbefun.”IwantedtopleaseHarry,andIthoughtaboutthefunofalongslideontheice.Ibegantoslideacrossthepond.Inthemiddleofthepond,theicegavewaywithasuddencrack(裂缝)!Istretchedout(伸展)myarms.ThenextthingIknewIwashangingontotheedgeofaholeintheicebyarmsoutstretchedontheice.FrommyshouldersdownIhunginicywater.Ithoughtofthebottomofthepond.Iknewitwouldbeblackandawfuldownthere,fullofmudandmayberottingcreatures.Itriedtoclimboutofthehole,butwhenIgotakneeontheice,itbrokelikewindowglass.AgainandagainItriedtogetout.Againandagaintheicebrokeintopieces.Theholewidened.Iwaswearingacoatofheavymaterial.Asitbecamecompletelywet,itdraggedmedown.Iwastiredofthestruggleandrestedwithmyarmsstretchedoutontheice.IlookedatHarryonshore.Heseemedrootedtothespot.“Ican’tgetout!”IscreamedwhenIcaughtsomebreath.•注意：•1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；•2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；•3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；•4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Harryturnedandranfromthepond.Paragraph2:ThemomentIcrashedthroughthekitchendoor,sobbing,mumrushedover.AstorywhenwherewhowhathowwhyReadingforastoryReadingforsettingIHarryapondlaybehindourfarmworeacollarofblackmudagreenandbubblyscumsometimesmellyunsuitableforswimmingstayawayaninvitingplacebrothersskipstonesInsummerInwintercontrastovertplotSettingIncitingincidentClimaxResolutionDenouementEventsA.ThepondinwinterwassoinvitinginwinterthatIdecidedtoslideacrossitattheinstigationofmybrother.B.Istrivedtoclimboutoftheicywaterbymyself,butinvain.C.Withtheicecracking,Ifellintoaholeintheice.D.Thepondbehindourfarmwasnotsuitableforswimminginthesummer.DAReadingforplotCovertplotTimeEventsMoodBeforeIslidacrossthepondHarry_____metogofirstbecauseofmylighterweight.Inorderto______himandhavefun,I______.Ifelt_________but_______.WhenIwasinthemiddleofthepondWithice________suddenly,Ifellintoahole.Arms___________ontheiceandbody________intheicywater,Iwas___________inthehole.Igot_________and________.WhenItriedtosavebymyselfIattemptedtoclimboutoftheicyholeseveraltimesbut______.Theheavycoat,_____________________________________worsenedtheterriblesituation.Iwas__________and_________.WhenIlookedatHarryHarrywas________________.I_________athimfor________.Iwas________but__________.urgedhesitatedcrackingshockedhanginginvainexhaustedbecomingwetthroughanddraggingmedownwillingagreedoutstretchedtrapped/caughtrootedtothespotscreamedhishelpscaredanxiouspleaseHowaboutHarry?hopefulnervousInferringthedevelopmentParagraph1:Harryturnedandranfromthepond.Paragraph2:ThemomentIcrashedthroughthekitchendoor,sobbing,mumrushedover.InferthedevelopmentfromthegivensentencesIwasrescued.InferringthedevelopmentParagraph1:Harryturnedandranfromthepond.Paragraph2:ThemomentIcrashedthroughthekitchendoor,sobbing,mumrushedover.Iwasrescued.RaisequestionsaboutthedevelopmentInferringthedevelopmentParagraph1:Harryturnedandranfromthepond.Paragraph2:ThemomentIcrashedthroughthekitchendoor,sobbing,mumrushedover.Iwasrescued.RaisequestionsaboutthedevelopmentWhatwasmyresponsetohisleaving?Didhereallyleavemealone?HowwasIrescued?Whatdidmumreacttotheaccident?Howcanthestorybeendedrationally?InferringthedevelopmentParagraph1:Harryturnedandranfromthepond.1Whatwasmyresponsetohisleaving?2Didhereallyleavemealone?3HowwasIrescued?Feeling:dismay;disappointment;despairAction:wonder;exclaimLet“bodylanguage”speak!Way:withthehelpofanoakbranchAction:push;wriggle;grab;dragLet“action”speak!Howtoexpressdisappointment/dismay:•皱眉“Wherecouldhego?”Imurmuredwithafiercefrown.•失望地看Ishot/threw/castafrustratedlookathim.•摇头Ijustshookmyheadinhopelessness.•哭Tearsofgrievance(委屈)/ˈɡriːvəns/cameintomyeyeswiththefigureofmybrotheroutofsight.Staringatthefamiliarfigureoutofsight,Iwastremblingwithrageandchill.•颤抖Let“bodylanguage”speak!Tipsforwriting•_____________________________byastrongsenseofnervousnessandanxiety,Harrydidn’tknowwhattodo,hisheart________________wildly.•Aflushoffrustration_______fromthebottomofmyheart,Ifrozewithterror,tremblinginicywaterandhardtobreathe.•Thethoughtofbeingabandoned/desertedbyHarry_________mymind,dismayanddespair___________inmyheart.•Theicywater________myskinwithneedle-likechillasIwas______(湿透)totheskinand__________________(颤抖).•Desperateandexhausted,Iwasonthevergeof________(奔溃).“Harry.Don’tleavemealone.”I_________atthetopofthelung.•AsIlookedathisback,I_________,“Isherunningforhelp,orisherunningwayandleavingmealone?”Seized/Consumed/Overwhelmedsurgingoccupyingbeating/poundingaccumulatedShowmorethantell!piercedsoakedtrembling/shiveringcollaps