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专题18新高考英语读后续写典例分析18新高考英语Santa’sHelper目录01表达积累02原文分析03续写扩展04续写赏析01表达积累表达积累1.带着胜利的微笑2.带着迷人的微笑3.感激地对某人笑着4.热情地欢迎某人5.用手捂着脸withasmileoftriumphwithaengagingsmilesmilegratefullyatsbgreetsbwarmlysink/buryhisfaceinhishands表达积累6.扬起眉毛;竖起眉毛7.举起他的手，好像要打他父亲8.我站在那里凝视着那扇门9.紧紧抓住我裙子10.我打开了门，溜了进去raiseone'seyebrowsraisehishandasiftostrikehisfatherIstoodgazingatthedoorcluthcingattheskirt.openthedoorandslipthrough表达积累11.使我感到一阵寒意12.看到那可怕的动物13.衣着朴素但整洁14.在他耳边低语15.他的脸上掠过一丝得意的冷笑sentachilltomyheartThesightofthatdreadfulanimalplainlybutneatlydressedwhisperedinhisearAfaintsneerofsatisfactioncrossedhisface.表达积累16.布朗的脸因愤怒而变红17.他眼睛里流露出愉悦的神情18.她一直挂念着家人19.失望得说不出话来20.他停下来向我眨眼Brown'sfacereddenedwithfuryHiseyesgleamedwithamusementShethoughtconstantlyaboutherfamilyhewastoodisappointedtospeakhestoppedandwinkedatme02原文分析Santa’sHelperChristmasDaywascoming.Iwasjustakidthen,andmybigsistertoldmetherewasnoSantaClaus.IfledtomyGrandmabecauseshewouldbestraightwithme.IknewGrandmaalwaystoldmethetruth.Grandmawashome,andItoldhereverything.Shewasreadyforme.“NoSantaClaus!”Sheshouted.“Ridiculous!Don’tbelieveit.”Thatrumorhasbeengoingaroundforyears,anditmakesmemad,plainmad.原文分析世上没有圣诞老人的谣言让我痛苦不堪。逃离对我坦诚“Now,putonyourcoat,andlet’sgo.”“Gowhere,Grandma?”Iasked.“Where”turnedouttobeKerby’sGeneralStore,theonestoreintownthathadalittlebitofjustabouteverything.Aswewalkedthroughitsdoors,Grandmahandedmetendollars.“Takethismoney,”shesaid,“andbuysomethingforsomeonewhoneedsit.I’llwaitforyouinthecar.”ThensheturnedandwalkedoutofKerby’s.原文分析奶奶带我去商店，叫我自己买别人需要的礼物。Iwasonlyeightyearsold.I’doftengoneshoppingwithmymother,butneverhadIshoppedforanythingallbymyself.Thestoreseemedbigandcrowded,fullofpeoplecompetingtofinishtheirChristmasshopping.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere,confused,holdingthatten-dollarbill,wonderingwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.IsuddenlythoughtofBobbyDecker,whowasakidwithbadbreathandmessyhair.HesatrightbehindmeinMrsPollock’sgrade-twoclass.BobbyDeckerdidn’thaveacoat.Iknewthatbecauseheneverwentoutforrecess(放假)duringthewinter.原文分析否定词放句首的倒装句的积累运用现在分词做状语Hismotheralwayswroteanote,tellingtheteacherthathehadacough,butwekidsknewthatBobbyDeckerdidn’thaveacough,andhedidn’thaveacoat.IwouldbuyBobbyDeckeracoat!Isettledonaredone,whichlookedreallywarm,andhewouldlikethat.“IsthisaChristmaspresentforsomeone?”theladybehindthecounteraskedkindly,asIlaidmytendollarsdown.“Yes.”Theniceladysmiledatme,putthecoatinabagandwishedmeaMerryChristmas.原文分析我决定送BobbyDecker一件外套。细节动词的妙用Paragraph1：Thatevening,GrandmahelpedmewrapthecoatinChristmaspaper._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：GrandmaandIwaitedbreathlesslyforBobbyDecker’sfrontdoortoopenandfinallyit_______________________________________________________________________原文分析根据上下文分析，可以判断这一段应该是讲奶奶带着我如何把礼物以圣诞老人的名义送出去的。最后们终于开了，BobbyDecker走了出来，看到礼物，很高兴，后面我应该也是很高兴的。我明白Santa’sHelper的意义了。03续写扩展Paragraph1Paragraph1：Thatevening,GrandmahelpedmewrapthecoatinChristmaspaper.MygrandmotherwritealettersignedSantaClaus…ShedrovemetoBobbyDecker’shouseAndIputthecoatinfrontofthehouseParagraph2Paragraph2：GrandmaandIwaitedbreathlesslyforBobbyDecker’sfrontdoortoopenandfinallyitBobbycameouttoseethepresent,hewasamazing…Hecalledhismotherouttoseethegifts..TheythankedSantaClausandIfeltgood…句子润色她在上面写了“致鲍比，来自圣诞老人”，之后她开车送我去了博比·德克尔的家，并解释说我正式成为圣诞老人的助手之一。Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit,afterwhichshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker’shouse,explainingIwasofficiallyoneofSanta’shelpers.drovemeoverto句子润色奶奶把车停在博比家的街上，我深吸了一口气，冲向他的前门。GrandmaparkeddownthestreetfromBobby’shouse,andItookadeepbreath,anddashedforhisfrontdoor.parkeddownthestreettookadeepbreathdashedfor句子润色见没有其他人注意到我们，我放下圣诞礼物，敲了敲他的门铃，然后我和奶奶躲在车里。PutdownSeeingnootherpeoplenoticeus,IputtheChristmaspresentdown,poundedhisdoorbellandthenGrandmaandIhidinthecar.poundedhisdoorbellhidinthecar句子润色鲍比·德克尔出来了。OutwentBobbyDecker.句子润色看到包里的外套，他看起来很惊讶，然后叫妈妈出去。Seeingthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthencalledhismothertogoout.lookedveryastonished句子润色听到他们对圣诞老人说“谢谢”后，我为自己所做的一切感到非常自豪。Afterhearingthemsay“Thanks”toSantaClaus,IfeltveryproudofwhatIhaddone.feltveryproudof句子润色那时我决定永远做圣诞老人的助手。AtthattimeIdecidedtobeSanta’shelperforever.句子润色就在那天晚上，我意识到一个事实：心中没有圣诞节的人，永远不会在树下过圣诞节。ItwasonthatnightthatIrealizedthetruththathewhohasnoChristmasinhisheartwillneverfindChristmasunderatree.Itwasonthatnightthat04续写赏析续写赏析Thatevening,GrandmahelpedmewrapthecoatinChristmaspaper.Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit,afterwhichshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker’shouse,explainingIwasofficiallyoneofSanta’shelpers.GrandmaparkeddownthestreetformBobby’shouse,andItookadeepbreath,anddashedforhisfrontdoor.Seeingnootherpeoplenoticeus,IputtheChristmaspresentdown,poundedhisdoorbellandthenGrandmaandIhidinthecar.高级句型续写赏析GrandmaandIwaitedbreathlesslyforBobbyDecker’sfrontdoortoopenandfinallyitopened.OutwentBobbyDecker.Seeingthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthencalledhismothertogoout.Afterhearingthemsay“Thanks”toSantaClaus,IfeltveryproudofwhatIhaddone.AtthattimeIdecidedtobeSanta’shelperforever.ItwasonthatnightthatIrealizedthetruththathewhohasnoChristmasinhishe