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Unit4HistoryandTraditionsPeriodFivePART1技法点拨PART2写作训练PeriodFiveWriting—AdescriptionofaplacePART1技法点拨文体分析把握写作动脉描写一个城市或地点是一种描述性的说明文。它主要说明或解释某一城市或地点的地理位置、外貌、环境、经济、文化、交通、历史演变、发展展望等，使读者获取信息。一般来说，描述性的说明文写作顺序主要有三种形式：时间顺序、空间顺序和逻辑顺序。◆写作指导在写作时要注意：1.客观、科学地介绍某一个城市或地点，内容应该突出特点，给人以可信的感觉；2.层次清楚，条理分明；3.注意合理地运用过渡词语，将各自然段有机地结合在一起，使整篇文章过渡自然、条理清晰；4.要准确使用表示方位的词和短语，同时注意详略得当。1.Itislocated/liesin...，withanareaof...2.Itcoversanareaof...，withahistoryof...3....，locatedin...andcoveringanareaof...，isoneofChina’smostfamousscenicspots.4.Thehistoryof...datesbackto...5.Ithasbecomethemostpopulartouristattractionsince...◆常用表达PART2写作训练弄清文络写作妙笔生花假如你是李华，你收到了你的网友Jack的email。请你根据下面的汉语提示给他回一封电子邮件。DearLiHua，I’mgoingtothecomingWeifangInternationalKiteFestival.AndI’dverymuchliketoknowsomethingaboutWeifanginadvance.Wouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutit？Thanks.Seeyouthen.Yours，Jack1.位置：山东半岛(ShandongPeninsula)中部2.人口：900多万3.面积：15859平方公里4.省级历史文化名城；工农业发展迅速；以蔬菜、蜜桃、花卉闻名5.交通便利；有很多旅游景点，吸引八方宾客注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。◆审题谋篇1.一座历史和文化名城__________________________2.发展迅速_______________3.作为……而闻名________________4.非常想见到______________5.当面；本人_________核心词汇◆遣词造句ahistoricalandculturalcitydeveloprapidlybewell-knownasbedyingtoseeinperson连词成句1.潍坊位于山东半岛中部。(locate)____________________________________________________2.潍坊是一个历史和文化名城，面积15859平方公里。(and连接并列句)____________________________________________________________________________________3.作为国际风筝大都市，潍坊还以蔬菜、蜜桃和花卉闻名。(and连接并列句)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________WeifangislocatedinthemiddleofShandongPeninsula.Weifangisafamoushistoricalandculturalcityandcoversanareaof15,859squarekilometers.Weifangisworld-famousasaninternationalkitecityandalsowell-knownforitsvegetables，sweetpeachesandflowers.4.潍坊有900多万人口，在工农业方面发展都很迅速。(with短语)，Weifangisdevelopingrapidlyinagricultureandindustry.5.潍坊有很多的旅游景点，吸引着来自世界各地的游客。(定语从句)Weifanghasmanytouristattractions，_________________________________.Withapopulationofmorethan9millionwhichattractvisitorsfromallovertheworld1.用过去分词作状语改写句1和句2。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用现在分词短语作状语改写句3。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.把句5改为一个带有with短语的句子。_________________________________________________________________________________句式升级Beingworld-famousasaninternationalkitecity，Weifangisalsowell-knownforitsvegetables，sweetpeachesandflowers.LocatedinthemiddleofShandongPeninsula,Weifangisafamoushistoricalandculturalcitywithanareaof15,859squarekilometers.Withmanybeautifultouristattractions，Weifangattractsvisitorsfromallovertheworld.用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。◆组句成篇DearJack，I’msogladtoknowthatyouarecomingtoChinaforWeifangInternationalKiteFestival.LocatedinthemiddleofShandongPeninsula，Weifangisafamoushistoricalandculturalcitywithanareaof15,859squarekilometers.Withapopulationofmorethan9million，itisdevelopingrapidlyinagricultureandindustry.Besidesbeingworld-famousasaninternationalkitecity，itisalsowell-knownforitsvegetables，sweetpeachesandflowers.Inaddition，peopleherecaneasilyenjoyconvenientaccesstoitstransportationsystem.Withmanybeautifultouristattractions，itattractsvisitorsfromallovertheworldeveryyear.参考范文Ibelievethatyouwillenjoyyourselfhere.AndI’mdyingtoseeyouinperson.Yours，LiHua