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1Unit5MUSICSectionⅦReadingforWriting2有关音乐对生活影响的演讲稿本单元的读写任务是读一篇关于音乐对生活影响的演讲稿后，写一篇同样话题的演讲稿。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearningtowritefromthemodelGoodmorning,mynameisSarahWilliams,It’sanhonourtobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.3篇章结构Paragraph1：Introducemyselfandpointoutthetopicofmyspeech.4[A]Haveyoueverfacedatimewhenthingslookeddarkandyouhadnohopeatall?Twoyearsago,IwastoldIhadaseriousdiseasewhichwasdifficulttocure.MybodyachedallthetimeandthusIthoughtIdidn’thavemuchlongertolive.IwasveryafraidandIfeltsoaloneanddiscouraged.Thenoneday,Ihadtogothroughatwo-hourmedicaltreatment.Thedoctorwantedmetorelax,sohehadmelistentosomemusic,andoneofthesongswas“Happy”.ThesongmademefeelsomuchbetterthatfromthenonIbegantolistentomusicallthetime.[B]JohnA.Logansaid,“Musicisthemedicineofthemind.”Andit’strue.Musichelpedmerecover.5Paragraph2：Myexperiencewithmusic—Musichelpedmerecover.6[C]Musicgavemehappiness.WhenIlistenedtomusic,[D]itmademyspiritsflylikeakiteinthewind.[C]Musicgavemestrengthandbroughtmerelief.[E]ItwastherockIleantontobecomestrongandtogetthroughthosehardtimes.Moreover,[C]musicgavemehopeandasenseofsatisfaction.[F]Itbecamemybestfriend.Itspokewordsofencouragementtothedeepestpartofmybeing.7Paragraph3：Howmusicmademefeel.8Ofcourse，IhopenoneofyouhavetogothroughthesamekindofsufferingthatIdid.Atthesametime,weallgothroughvariousperiodswhenwefeelsadoralone.Duringthosetimes,musiccanhelpyouinthesamewaythatithelpedme.Ihopeallofyouwillsomehowbegintotreasuremusicandmakeitapartofyourlife.Thankyou.9Paragraph4：Sumupandofferasuggestion.10(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—wordsandphrases①________________对……有影响②________________一段……的时光③________________没有希望④________________一直⑤________________感到沮丧haveanimpactonatimewhenhavenohopeallthetimefeeldiscouraged11⑥__________________________两个小时的治疗⑦________________给予某人幸福⑧________________听音乐⑨______________________像风筝一样在空中飞舞⑩____________________满足感⑪________________感到伤心⑫________________珍爱音乐atwo-hourmedicaltreatmentgivesbhappinesslistentomusicflylikeakiteinthewindasenseofsatisfactionfeelsadtreasuremusic12Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李华，打算参加学校组织的一场以“音乐”为主题的演讲比赛。请根据下面提示写一篇演讲稿。1.曾经考前紧张，无法入眠；2.音乐改变状况。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：__________________________________________________________Paragraph2：__________________________________________________________Paragraph3：__________________________________________________________Paragraph4：__________________________________________________________Introducemyself；pointoutthetopicofmyspeechMyexperiencewithmusicHowmusicmademefeelSumupandofferasuggestion13Step2Listthewords,phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①____________adj.紧张的②____________v.到达；来临③____________过去常常④____________睡觉⑤____________和往常一样⑥______________感到气馁⑦_______________________别无选择只有做……⑧______________让我吃惊的是⑨____________n.焦虑nervousapproachusedtofallasleepasusualfeeldiscouragedhavenochoicebuttodo...tomysurpriseanxiety142.Sentences①很荣幸能在这里与大家分享音乐对我生活的影响。(it’sanhonourtodosth)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________②老师建议我听音乐。(suggest)________________________________________________________________________③音乐给我力量，给我安慰。(relief)________________________________________________________________________④有机会的时候为什么不试试呢？(whynot)________________________________________________________________________It’sanhonourtobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.Myteachersuggestedmelisteningtomusic.Musicgivesmestrengthandbringsmerelief.Whynothaveatrywheneveryouhaveanopportunity?15Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.inaddition，then，asaresult，asyouknowHello,mynameisLiHua.It’sanhonourtobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.Areyounervouswiththeexamapproaching?Iusedtobe.Icouldnotfallasleepasusual.Asaresult,Ifeltdiscouraged.Then,myteachersuggestedmelisteningtomusic.Ihadnochoicebuttotry.Tomysurprise,myanxietydiedout.Asyouknow,musicgivesmestrengthandbringsmerelief.Inaddition,listeningtomusicgivesmeasenseofsatisfaction.Musiccanchangethelifeofus.Whynothaveatrywheneveryouhaveanopportunity?Thankyou!16Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartnerandpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Doesthewriterexplainhowmusichaschangedhis/her/someoneelse’slife?□2.Aresomeoftherhetoricaldevicesincludedandusedproperly?□3.Doesthewritertalkabouthowmusicmakeshim/her/someonefeel?□4.Isthefirstwordineachsentencecapitalised?□5.Doesthewriterusecorrectpunctuation?17常用词汇1.havetheopportunitytodo...有机会做……2.honorn.荣幸3.sharewith分享4.opinionn.观点5.topicn.主题6.aspectn.方面7.concentrateon集中8.conclusionn.结束9.quotev.引用18亮点表达1.开头部分常用语①Mynameis...TodayIamverygladtohavetheopportunitytomakethispresentation.Ishallbespeakingabout...我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……②Goodmorning,everyone!Itismygreathonortosharewithyoumyopinionson...大家上午好！很荣幸能和你们分享一下我关于……的看法。③It’smygreathonortobehere/tohavetheopportunitytosaysomethingabout...很荣幸能在这里/能有机会谈论一下关于……192.主体部分常用语①Thetopicofmyspeechis...我演讲的主题是……②I’lldivide