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RefereeReport2012-4-151审稿意见要求:1简单综述本文工作,可从文章中直接摘取。2提出论文的问题,包括内容,推导,格式,图表,语法等。例子1Inthispaper,thedistributionsynchronizationproblemisstudiedforcoupledneuralnetworkswithmultiplerandomlyoccurringnonlinearities(MRONs),multipleRandomlyoccurringcontrollers(MROCs),andmultiplerandomlyoccurringupdatinglaws(MROULs).Themotivationbehindtheprobleminvestigatedinthismanuscriptisinterestingandmeaningful,themanuscripthaslittleexpositoryandtechnicalshortcomings,asdetailedinthefollows.(1)TheconsiderationoftheMROULsisoneoftheinnovationsofthispaper,theauthorstatedthattheROULsinadaptivecontrollersiswidelyneglectedintheexistingliterature,howeverthemeaningoftheMROULsisnotdescribedindetail,itisnecessaryfortheauthortoillustratewhichapplicationcontainstheMROULs?Furthermore,itisbettertogivethereadersoneortwoexamplesforthiscase.(2)Somegrammarandspellingerrorsneedtobecheckedcarefully.Suchasinfigure1theijeforverticalcoordinatesshouldbetypedbyLatexformat.(3)Ingeneral,itislackofexplanationsandanalysisforsimulationresultsinthestudy,somoreexplanationsisneeded.Inconclusion,themanuscriptisinnovatedandinteresting,itcouldbepublishedwithminorchanges.例子2Thismanuscriptmainlyconsidersfinite-timeinput-to-state-stabilityforthemultiagentsystemswithcommunicationnoiseunderswitchinginteractiontopologies.Thisstudyhasmorepracticalvaluebecauseitdealswiththefinite-timeconsensusproblemsofthegroupsofagentsusingadifferentmethodtoprooftheresultsfromthereferencesinthismanuscript.Howeverthereexistsomeexpositoryshortcomingsasdetailedinthefollows.1Therearesomeconceptsintroducedbeforethemainresults,someofthemarenotclearbecauseitdoesnothavedetailedexplanationaboutsomesymbolssuchasD+inthedefinition2.2Thismanuscriptislackofsimulationtoillustratetheeffectiveness.IsuggestthattheauthorgivessimulationandexplaintheconstructionoftheISS-LyapunovfunctionandtheselectionsofsomeK-functionsandK-functionsindetails.3Therearesomesmallmistakesinthismanuscriptandneedmorecorrections.Oneoftheobviouserrorsisinthelineabovetheformula(9).RefereeReport2012-4-152例子3Thispaperinvestigatestheproblemofdynamicfeedbackcontroloverunreliablecommunicationchannelswithnonstationarypacketloss.Thezeroinputschemeandtheholdinputschemeareusedtosolvethisproblemrespectively.However,Idon’tthinkthemanuscriptisconstructiveforthezeroinputschemeandtheholdinputschemeareinvestigatedinmanyreference.Finally,therearenotenoughinnovatoryideasinthismanuscript.Thedetailedcommentsareasfollows.1thequalityoffigure1istoopoortoread.2thedefinitionofequation7isconfused,whytheauthorgivethisdefinition.3equation15iswrong,infactitisaninequality.4wedon’tthinkthevariablebelowequation17canbegottenbyequation75wewanttoknowwhattherelationbetweenthezeroinputschemeandtheholdinputis.Therelationandthecompareshouldbeproposedindetailbetweenthetwoschemesinthismanuscriptifitcanbeaccepted.

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