高中英语高考作文读后续写之对话描写

读后续写之对话描写一.利用对话描写需要注意的3个原则1.控制对话的比重，对话促进情节的发展，但不能代替故事情节，1到2处即可。即：简短+地道+量少。2.对话内容应符合人物性格特点。3.对话内容应紧扣原文主题和中心。不要脱离文章主线，说一些不着边际的话。二．对话的3种表现形式1.对话标签在前Shesaid,“Iwouldliketogowithyou,butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”2.对话标签在后“Iwouldliketogowithyou,butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”Shesaid.3.对话标签在句子中间“Iwouldliketogowithyou,”shesaid,“butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”注意：对话标签在后或者在句子中间时（第2,3种情况），如果主语是名词，则可以倒装。而代词不可以倒装(saidshe是错误的)。“Iwouldliketogowithyou,butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”saidEmily/Emilysaid.“Iwouldliketogowithyou,”saidEmily/Emilysaid,“butIhaven’tfinishedmyhomework.”三．让你的对话标签不平庸的小技巧在对话标签中加入语气，嗓音，情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。①“Iwouldloveto,”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.愉悦的语气用...的语气ina/an+形容词+tone如：inapleasant愉悦的/firm坚定的/rude粗鲁的/sad悲伤的tone也可以用inatoneof+名词的搭配如：inatoneofsurprise/curiosity/impatience/regret/command命令/sarcasm讽刺②“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.小声地说道用...的声音ina/an+形容词+voice如：inahigh/low/sweet/loud/soft/weakvoice③“I...I..don’tthinkI’mrightforthepart,”Irepliedwithembarrassment.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”Iansweredfirmly坚定地.=Firmly，Ianswered，“Iwillneverdothatagain.”可将副词提到句首用介词短语或者副词来表达情感介词短语有：in:insurprise/shock/sorrow伤心/horror害怕with:withdelight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/caution/care/patience/certainty坚定等等副词有：firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully等等④⑴“Well,”saidthefarmer,asherubbedthesweatofthebackofhisneck.此处在说的动作后，紧跟了as引导的状语从句，翻译成“一边，一边”。他一边擦脖子后面的汗水一边说“好啊。”⑵“Iwantthatone,”theboysaid,pointingtothelittledog.=Pointingthelittledog,theboysaid,“Iwantthatone.”此处在说的动作后，紧跟了doing的非谓语结构，表伴随。⑶Thefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It’syoursnow.”=Thefarmerpickedupthedogandkneltdown,saying,“It’syoursnow.”此处是拿起狗，蹲下并温柔地说的三个并列动作，可以用并列谓语，也可以用第二条中的非谓语。⑷Withherheaddown/Withtearsinhereyes,shesaid,“Sorry.”小结：在说的同时，可以加入伴随动作，即说话的同时（自己/别人）在做什么，用动作描写来辅助对话。可以用as引导的从句，非谓语，并列谓语以及with的复合结构。四．多种多样的“说”那表示“说”的具体词汇有哪些呢？下面是读后续写中常用的各种各样的“说”。1.喊叫：shout大喊；scream尖叫；yell大喊；exclaim惊叫（因高兴、愤怒、痛苦、惊讶等发生的喊叫）；cryout喊叫；call喊叫如：Heyelledather,“Youareanidiot.”2.问与答：ask询问；reply回复；answer回答；如：Sheansweredinafirmtone,“Thatdoesn’tmatter.”3.建议：propose；suggest；offer如：Sheoffered,“Howaboutgoingtothebeachthisweekend?”4.其他的说：add补充说道=continue继续说道；retort反驳道；explain解释道；state陈述道；protest抗议道；sob哭诉道；agree同意地说；comfort安慰道；promise承诺道；assure保证道；insist坚持说；announce宣布道;mumble/whisper/murmur/grunt嘟囔；stammer/stutter结巴地说如：Afteraslightpause,sheadded,“Thankyou.”Jamescomfortedher,“Don’tworryaboutyourson.”“S-s-sorry,”shestammered,“Ididn’tmeantohurtyou.”