书面表达(课本作文规章制度9PPT)

为了你的健康成长，家里父母会给你制定一些规矩，或许你会认同或者不满，请你以“myfamilyrules”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，写出你家里的制度（包括穿衣，饮食，作息时间，上网，看电视以及交友等方面），并发表你的观点，开头已给出。参考词汇：first，then,what’smore,inmyopinion,beallowedto,haveto…参考句型：Ihavetogetupat…Ican’tgooutatnight.Myparentsworryaboutmysafety.IamnotallowedtowatchTVonschoolnights.Ishouldbeallowedto…文体：议论文人称：以第一人称为主时态：一般现在时PART01列提纲找思路①开头：开门见山提出在我家有很多的家规alotofrules,follow,②具体写出有哪些规章制度③结尾：我的感受watchTV,surftheInternet,makefriends,wear.Inmyopinion,obeythemPART01满分作文欣赏TherearealotofrulesthatIhavetofollowinmyhome.Letmetellyousomeofthem.First,IamnotallowedtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfingtheInternetonschoolday,andImustgotobedbefore10:00,becauseIhavetodohomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.ThenIhavetocleanmyroomeverymorning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewiththem,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.Besides,IamalsonotallowedtoweartheclotheswhatIwant,itmakesmeunhappy.What’smore,I’manoutgoinggirl,butmyparentsdon’tallowmetomakefriendswithpeopleIknow.Iknowtheybothcaremuchaboutme.However,Iamallowedtomakemyowndecision.EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,Iwillobeythem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.总-分-总Beginning（引出话题）：TherearealotofrulesthatIhavetofollowinmyhome.Letmetellyousomeofthem.Body（talkaboutsomeoftherules）：First,IamnotallowedtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfingtheInternetonschoolday,andImustgotobedbefore10:00,becauseIhavetodohomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.ThenIhavetocleanmyroomeverymorning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewiththem,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.Besides,IamalsonotallowedtoweartheclotheswhatIwant,itmakesmeunhappy.What’smore,I’manoutgoinggirl,butmyparentsdon’tallowmetomakefriendswithpeopleIknow.Iknowtheybothcaremuchaboutme.However,Iamallowedtomakemyowndecision.Ending（feelings）：Youfeeling…EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,Iwillobeythem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.1.TherearealotofrulesthatIhavetofollowinmyhome.Letmetellyousomeofthem.高分句型：3.Besides,IamalsonotallowedtoweartheclotheswhatIwant.4.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.2.IamnotallowedtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfingtheInternetonschooldays.谢谢！放映结束感谢各位批评指导！让我们共同进步知识回顾KnowledgeReview