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Section1GuidedWritingGettingAlongwithOthers写作任务:在日常生活中,我们每天都要与人打交道,而说到与人打交道,我们更多想到的是如何处理好与同学、老师以及朋友的关系,而往往忽略了与我们每天都要面对的、最亲近的父母之间的关系。不少同学以代沟为借口,拒绝与父母交流沟通。你怎样看待这个现象？说说你的看法以及你与父母融洽相处的小秘诀。分析:1.写作任务要求大家根据某一话题发表自己的看法,根据所给题目,我们可以提炼的信息是,该习作要求对一种社会现象进行分析,然后给出自己的见解。写作任务部分已经对这种现象进行了描述,因而写作重点是你对该现象的看法。我们可以从自己的日常生活中总结经验,提出自己的观点:多和父母交流才能促进理解,进而融洽相处。2.确立写作重点之后,就要考虑文章的结构。该习作可以分三部分来完成:首先,简要描述当前同学们在与父母相处过程中遇到的问题；其次,就这些问题阐明你的观点,论述时要注意条理性和逻辑性；最后,再次强调一下文章的主题思想,突出中心。3.注意语言的流畅性和上下文之间的连贯性。初稿:HowtoGetAlongwithYourParentsNowadays,manyteenagersarehavingproblemsgettingalongwithparents.Somequarrelwiththeirparentsfromtimetotime.Someevenhavenegativeattitudeto-wardstheirparents.Nobodywantstohaveproblemswithhisorherparents.First,Ithinkbecauseoftheagegapdifferentgenerationsmayhavedifferentpointsofview.Andweshouldtrytotalkwithparentsmore.Second,Ithinkwekidsshouldtrustourparentsandturntothemwhenweareintrouble,becausetheyaremoreexperiencedandtheymayhelpusout.Third,wekidsshouldthinkmoreaboutourparents’lives.Ourparentshavemuchpressureonthemfromsocietyandthey’reverybusy.Sometimestheymayscoldusandmaynothavethepatiencetolistentous,butweallknowourparentsloveus.Finally,Iwanttoemphasizethatcommunicationisthebestsolutionforgettingalongwithothers,includingthemostintimatepeople--ourparents.教师点评:1.该篇习作的整体结构安排较为合理,开篇描述了当前青少年在与父母相处过程中存在的问题,然后针对问题提出了自己的建议,并且分三点进行叙述,条理比较清晰。最后作者对整篇文章进行了总结。因此,从整体上看,这篇习作基本完成了写作任务的要求。2.语言表达基本通顺,运用了一些复杂句式。3.文章的不足之处在于:(1)有些部分不够连贯。如第一段中最后既没有给出衔接上下文的句子,也没有明确提出问题,第二段开篇直接论述自己的观点显得有些突兀。(2)文章主体部分在论述自己的观点时,条理性还有待提高。如第二部分,第二点和第三点都是先提出观点,随后展开论述,第一点最好跟后面两点保持一致。(3)文中有些句子显得很突兀,如第一段中最后一句Nobodywantstohaveproblemswithhisorherparents以及第二段中最后一句Sometimestheymayscoldusandmaynothavethepatiencetolistentous,butweallknowourparentsloveus.建议将这些句子去掉或是整合到其他部分。(4)此外,文中有些地方用词不是很恰当,如最后一句中,bestsolutionfor建议改成bestwayof。成稿:HowtoGetAlongwithYourParentsNowadays,manyteenagersfindithardtogetalongwiththeirparents.Indailylife,theymayquarrelwiththeirparentsandevenhaveanegativeattitudetowardstheirparents’opinions.So,howcanweteenagersgetalongwellwithourparents?First,Ithinkweshouldspendmoretimewithourparentsandcommunicatewiththem.Differentgenerationsmayhavedifferentviewstowardsonething,butweshouldnotusethatasanexcusetorefusetotalkwithourparents.Second,weshouldtrustourparentsandturntothemwhenweareintroublebecausetheyaremoreexperiencedandmayhelpussolveourproblemsquickly.Third,wemustunderstandourparentsbetter.Theyhavealotofpressureintheirwork,buttheystillhavetospendtimetakingcareofus.Themostimportantthingforustorememberisthatourparentsloveusdeeply,soitshouldnotbesodifficultforustounderstandandcommunicatewitheachother.Powerfulsentences:1.Nowadays,manyteenagersfindithardtogetalongwiththeirparents.2.Ithinkweshouldspendmoretimewithourparentsandcommunicatewiththem.3.Weshouldtrustourparentsandturntothemwhenweareintroublebecausetheyaremoreexperiencedandmayhelpussolveourproblemsquickly.巩固练习每个人都有自己的朋友,有时候朋友在遇到困难时可能会向我们求助,如果能办到,我们当然应该尽最大努力去帮忙,但如果朋友提出的某些要求不是我们力所能及的,这时我们就要学会说不。不少人往往不知道该如何开口拒绝,尽管明知道有些事情自己做不到,却害怕伤了朋友之间的感情。那么,究竟该如何开口拒绝,才不会伤害对方呢？请就此以如何正确说'不’为题来谈谈你的看法。词数120-150。Section2GuidedReadingA本文词数:304参考时间:2′01″Alreadynervousaboutyourfirstweekonthejob,youspillcoffeeonthereportyouhaveworkedonallmorning.Yourcoworkers(同事)lookatyoubutdon’thelp.Thephoneisringingandyouarenotsureifitisyourturntoanswerit.Howwillyougetusedtoitall?●Bereadytolearnanewcultureatwork.Eachworkplacehasadifferentwayofdoingthings.Youmayneedtolearnnewwaysoftalkingandactinginordertogetbyinthenewsituation.Everyday,youwilllearnmoreabouttheworkplaceandfeelmorecomfortablethere.Watchyourco-workersandmanagercarefullytofindouthowtheydothings.Youcanalsoaskthemquestionsifyouarenotsureaboutsomething.●Askyourquestionsinaclear,direct,andpositiveway.Forexample:Thanksforshowingmehowtofilloutthatform.Couldyouexplaintheseotherformstome,too?Listenverycarefullywhenothersaretalkingtoyou.Givethemyourfullattention.Thinkabouttheirneedsandfeelings.●Learntodealwithcriticism（批评）andconflict（矛盾，摩擦）.Don’ttakecriticismaboutyourworkperformancepersonally.Whensomeonecriticizesyourperformance,theyarenotsayingsomethingbadaboutyouasaperson.Theyaresayingsomethingaboutacertainbehaviorofyours,whichyoucantrytochange.●Beateamplayer.Rememberthatyouareworkingaspartofagroup.Trytobeanactiveandhelpfulpartoftheteam.Giveyourideasandsuggestionstoothers.Theywillappreciate（欣赏，感谢）yourinterestandhelp.Tellyourco-workerswhenyouliketheirworkortheirworkstyle.Gettingalongwithothersisveryimportantinyoursuccessonthejob.Taketimetobepatientandunderstandwhatisexpected.词数:147处理时间:2′59″Readthepassageandchoosethebestanswerforeachquestion.1.Thispassageisprobablywrittenfor________.A.peoplewhocan’tgetalongwellwithothersB.peoplewhoarestartingtoworkinanewplaceC.peoplewhocan’tgetusedtoofficelifeD.peoplewhowanttobesuccessfulonthejob2.Whenotherstalktoyou,youshouldlistentothemcarefullybecause_______.A.theywilltellyouhowtodothingsindetailB.theyareveryhelpfulwhenyouareintroubleC.youneedtocareabouttheirneedsD.youneedtoknowhowtheydothings3.Togetalongwellwithothers,youshould________.A.observecarefully