九年级U2-My-favorite-Chinese-festival作文课件

写作话题：Festivals,holidaysandcelebrations(节假日活动)1.能介绍自己喜欢的中国传统节日，会使用复合句表达自己的观点。2.学会通过思维导图或者列出框架的方法整理自己的写作思路。3.要充分地认识中国传统节日，珍惜与家人一起过节的时间，热爱生活，热爱家人。Lookatthepicturesandsaywhatfestivalstheyare.探究1：Brainstorm(头脑风暴)WhatChinesetraditionalfestivalsdoyouknow?(你知道有哪些中国节日吗？)TheDragonBoatFestivalTheMid-AutumnFestivalTheSpringFestivalTheLanternFestivalLet’smakealist!thepopularfestivalsinChinaWhenisit?TheSpringFestivalTheLanternFestivalTheDragonBoatFestivalTheMid-AutumnFestivalbeginsonJanuary1stofthelunarcalendaronJanuary15thofthelunarcalendaronMay5thofthelunarcalendaronAugust15thofthelunarcalendarLet’smakealist!thepopularfestivalsinChinaWhatdopeopleeat?TheSpringFestivalTheLanternFestivalTheDragonBoatFestivalTheMid-AutumnFestivalabigmeal(chicken、duckmeat、fish…….）YuanxiaoorriceglueballzongzimooncakesLet’smakealist!thepopularfestivalsinChinaWhatdopeopledo?TheSpringFestivalTheLanternFestivalTheDragonBoatFestivalTheMid-AutumnFestivalsetofffireworksgetLuckymoneyvisitrelativesandfriendswatchlanternsguesslanternriddleswatchdragonboatracesmakezongziadmirethemoonsharemooncakeswithfamiliesWhenwetalkaboutafestival,wecantalkabout…ChinesefestivalbeginningnameofthefestivalWhenisitcelebrated?bodythingstoeatthingstodoendingWhatdoyouthinkofthefestival?Whydoyoulikeitsomuch?Extensivelanguages（拓展性语言）Famoussaying(1)Eastorwest,homeisthebest.金窝，银窝，不如自家的草窝。(2)Homeiswheretheheartis.心之所在，家之所在。(3Asthenewyearbegins,letusalsostartanew.一元复始，万象更新Writealettertoyourpenpalandtellhim/heraboutyourfavoriteChinesefestival.MyfavoriteChinesefestivalis…Itiscelebratedin/on…Duringthisfestival,people…It’smyfavoritefestivalbecause…Itmakesmefeel…Thefollowingexpressionscanhelpyou:MyfavoriteChinesefestival主要人称：_________主要时态：_________体裁：_____________一般现在时第一人称说明文小声朗读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。自我欣赏与修正ExercisesAfterwritingAppreciating&Evaluating欣赏与评价①请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对不足的地方进行适当修改。(A1—A6;A2—A5;A3—A4)②你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？③根据评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。ExercisesAfterwriting我欣赏，我快乐ExercisesAfterwriting注意：作文通用修改字符：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处○；去掉／;语法错误G;人称错误P;时态错误T书面表达总分25分，分为五档，每5分为一个档次。一档（0-5分）只有短语、单词，完全没有可读性，只有2-3个不成形的句子形态。二档（6-10分）有一定的可读性，文章是以句子形态呈现，只是所写的句子都不正确。三档（11-15分）可读性较强，要点齐全，有三个或以上句子正确，文章完全是围绕话题来写的。（有不少单词或语法错误）四档（16-20分）语言流畅，逻辑关系正确，有4个及以上句子正确，有4-5个单词或2-3处语法错误。五档（21-25分）语言优美，逻辑明了，语言表达正确，有1-2个单词或语法错误，但文中有不错的句式。（虽有2-3个错误，但语言素养很好，语句确实优美，书写漂亮，卷面整洁，可大胆打满分）WeareChinese!Weloveourfamily!Weloveourmotherland!Rewritethearticles.