状元坊-高考英语作文PPT教案

千里之行，始于足下高考英语作文精讲Thegreatestthingmusthavethesmallestbegin.状元坊黄敏达高考英语档次划分第五档次（很好）：完全完成了试题规定的任务。•-覆盖所有内容要点。•-应用较多的语法结构和词汇。•-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构•或较高级词汇所致；具备较强•的语言运用能力。•-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。•完全达到了预期的写作目的。•第四档（好）•完全完成了试题规定的任务。•-虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。•-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。•-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试•复杂语法结构或词汇所致。•-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。•达到了预期的写作目的。2011四川卷高考英语作文最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-classActivities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。1.你校开展课外活动的情况；2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议注意：1.词数100左右；2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名3.稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）After-classActivitiesNowadays,after-classactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.Goahead!（建议用时）审题：5分钟打草稿：15分钟誊写：5分钟检查：5分钟共计：30分钟漏要点了吗？本文共五个要点•具体描述你校开展课外活动的情况•具体描述你参加过的课外活动及益处•为同学选择课外活动提出建议•为学校开展课外活动提出建议•鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。Nowadays,after-classactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.Inourschool,therearevariouskindsofactivities,forexample,artsandsports.Weenjoythemverymuch.Playingfootballandreadingstoriesaremyfavoriteswhichdomelotsofgood.Besidesbuildingmybodyandenrichingmyknowledge,theyalsofreemefromtheheavyworkofstudy.HereIhavesomesuggestions.Tostudents,you’dbetterchoosetheactivitieswhichinterestyouandsuityou;toschools,theyshouldorganizemoreactivitiesforstudentsandleavestudentsmoretimeforactivitiesbygivingthemlesshomework.Dearfriends,pleaseactivelytakepartinafter-classactivities,whichwillnotonlymakeyourschoollifecolorful,butalsoimproveyoulearning.高考范文（一般得分为80%）此处红色标出来的是要点高分作文一Nowadays,after-classactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.Myschoolisnoexception,whichhasofferedavarietyofsuchactivitiestousstudents.Takemeforexample,Ihavefoundgreatpleasureinplayingtabletennis,asitcanbuildupmymystrength,whichinturnenabledmetostudymoreefficiently.Besides,Itakegreatpleasureinreadingclassicliterature.Asforwhatkindofactivitiesweshouldchoose,Ifeelthatwhatwechooseshouldsuitourinterest.,Anditcan'tbebetterifourschoolcanorganizemoresuchactivities,thusprovidingsomerelieffromourdailylessonsandstudies.Anyhow,Ithinkitagoodthingthatwehavesomanyafterclassactivities,whichsurelywillmakeourschoollifemoreenjoyableandimproveourlearning.28分/35分重复词语是硬伤！红色是有谬误之处紫色是用法精妙之处高分作文二Nowadays,after-classactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.Thesameholdstrueinourschool,wheremanysuchactivitiesareoffered,rangingfromsportslikeballgamestoreadingandspeechcontest.Myfavouritesportisplayingfootball,whichcanmakemefeelrelaxedandrefreshed.AsfarasIknow,almosteverystudentcanfindthekindofactivitiestheyareinterestedin.Whenchoosingactivities,weshouldfocusonwhatmakesusinterested,sothatwecanenjoyitmore.Ontheotherhand,Ihopethatschoolwillprovidemoresuchactivitiesforustochoosefrom,inwhichwecanoccasionallytakesomerelieffromourdailystudyandenrichourknowledge.Inaword,suchactivitiesisagoodchancetomakeourschoollifemoreenjoyable,soIhopeallofuscantakeanactivepartinit.31分/35分一个长句，先声夺人which不宜使用过多但只使用一次也可增添效果再次尝试最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-classActivities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。1.你校开展课外活动的情况；2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议注意：1.词数100左右；2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名3.稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）After-classActivitiesNowadays,after-classactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.谢谢光临