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07书面表达之读后续写Passage1（2021·广东广州市·高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Devilookedthroughtheobservationwindowatthekidsbelow,allwaitinginlinetogetintothepool.Sheturnedtohermotherwithafuriousfrownonherface.“Mom,they’realllittlekids!I’m15already!Thisisridiculous!”“Iknow,Devi,”repliedhermother,“butyou’reabeginner,too,andyouhavetostartsomewhere!”Devihadneverbeentoaswimminglessoninherlife.Betweenschoolworkandhelpingonhergrandfather’sfarm,shehadn’thadtimeforlessons.TheclosestswimmingpoolDevihadbeentowasthealligatorpoolhermotherboughtherwhenshewasfive.NowthatDeviwasolder,hermotherhadfoundanewjobinthecity,andDevifacedanewchallenge—schoolfieldtripstothelocalpool.ThefirstdaythatDeviwentwithherclasstothepool,shehadnoideawhatshewasinfor.Whatcouldbesodifficultaboutswimming?Deviconfidentlyslippedintothewaterandheldontothesideofthepool,expectingtobeabletotouchthebottomwithherfeet.ButwhenDeviletgoofthesideofthepool,sheslippedunderthewater—thewholepoolwasonebigdeepend!Devithrewherarmtowardthesideofthepoolandgrabbedtheledge(池壁),outofbreath.“Ireallycan’tswim!Everyone’sgoingtolaughatme!”shethoughttoherselfinapanic.Onthenextfieldtriptothepool,Devisatonthesideonabench,paralyzedwithfear.Shehuddledwithatoweloverhershoulders,tooembarrassedtotryagain.Whenshecamehome,hermothernoticedrightawaythatDeviwasupset.“Honey,I’vesignedyouupforAngela’sswimminglessonsatthelocalpool.Soonyou’lllearnhowtoswimjustlikeeveryoneelse,”sheassuredDevi,showingphotosofAngelawithherprize-winningstudents.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.Paragraph2SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.【答案】Paragraph1ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.Shedraggedherfeettothesideofthepoolandsatdown,indoubtwhetherlessonswouldbehelpful.Scanningaround,Devispottedherinstructoracrossthepool,togetherwiththelittlekidswhojumpedintothewaterlikefishleapingintotheocean.Shewatchedinamazement.EnviousasDeviwas,aflushofembarrassmentsooncrepttohercheekswhenalittlegirlpassedby,askinghernottobescared.Howembarrassing!Shehungherhead.Paragraph2SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.DeviwasastonishedtobemadeawarethatAngelahadneverlearnedswimminguntilshewas20.Greatlyinspired,Devinowregainedhope.SheenteredthepoolasecondtimeinthecompanyofAngela,severalcheerfulkidsfloatingneartocheerheron.Devibegantofeelmoreatease,hermovementlessstiffandherbreathmoreeven.Withagratefulheart,Devirealizedthatshemightnotbeafearlessswimmer,butshewouldsurehavefuntrying.【分析】本文讲述了黛维因为学业和在农场帮助祖父而一直没有时间去游泳，妈妈给黛维在当地找了游泳池学习游泳，黛维初次学习的时候感觉很自信，但是真正进入到水里的时候发现游泳比想象中难，不小心呛水的黛维觉得自己很尴尬，恐惧去学游泳，这时黛维的母亲给她报了一个游泳班。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“接着，轮到黛维上她的第一节课了。”可知，第一段描写黛维去上游泳课的情况。②由第二段首句内容“不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐的地方，做了自我介绍”可知，第二段可描写安吉拉老师和黛维的相处。2.续写线索：怀疑课程——看别人跳水——感到尴尬——和老师交流——尝试游泳——喜欢上游泳3.词汇激活行为类①.和：togetherwith/aswellas②.路过：passby/gopast③.鼓励：cheeron/encourage情绪类①.感知：feelmoreatease/feelrelaxed；astonished/surprised/shocked；inamazement/insurprise②.积极：fearless/brave【点睛】[高分句型1].Shedraggedherfeettothesideofthepoolandsatdown,indoubtwhetherlessonswouldbehelpful.（由连接词whether引导同位语从句）[高分句型2].Devispottedherinstructoracrossthepool,togetherwiththelittlekidswhojumpedintothewaterlikefishleapingintotheocean.（由关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）Passage2（2021·浙江高三月考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasabeautifulSundayinearlyDecemberTen-year-oldRileyChristensenandhermotherLynn,werehuddledinfrontofthefamilycomputer,checkingoutmodelsandpricesofbikes.Let'spickoneoutforDad'sbirthday.Mothersuggestedtoherdaughter.Rileynoddedhappily.ShecouldevenimaginehowexcitedDadwouldbewhenreceivingsuchabigsurprise,andmaybetheywouldrideintheparktogether.RileywaslookingthroughthehomepageoftheBikeRack,ashopintheirtownofSt.Charles,Illinois,whenavideolinkforProjectMobilitycaughttheireye.Outofcuriosity,sheclickedonit.TheshortvideotoldhowHalHoneyman,aBikeRackCo-owner,hadcreatedanorganizationtoprovidespeciallyengineeredbicyclestopeoplewithdisabilities.Itshowedthehappyfacesofthosewhowerenowridingthem-accidentvictims,injuredsoldiers,andchildrenwithdisabilities,includingHal'sson,whohadbeenbornwithcerebralpalsy.Therewassilenceformoments.Suddenly,therecameRiley'sdeterminedvoice.Mom,I'mgoingtobuysuchabikeforoneofthosekids.Abitsurprised,MotherpulledRileyintoherarms,andkissedherontheforehead.Sweetheart,itmaybeabigchallengeforus!Mothersaid.Butforakidwhocan'twalk,suchabikewouldbeamarvelousChristmaspresent!Rileysmiled.Twodayslater,Rileyranintothekitchenjustlikeagustofwind,andcheerfullyshowedhermotheralettershehadwrittenaskingfordonations.“Ithinkit'samazingthattherearesuchspecialbikesforkidswhocan'twalk,”thelettersaid,“IsawontheNethowhappyaboywaswhenhegotone...I'mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.Motherwasdeeplytouchedbyherdaughter'seffort,butdoubtsquicklyoccurred.Thecostofjustoneofthosespecialbikescouldbeashighas$4,000.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:“Rileycouldneverraisethemoney.”Motherthoughttoherself.Paragraph2:Rileyfinallyraisedmorethan$12,000,enoughtopayforthreebikes.【答案】Paragraph1:“Rileycou