英语作文构思技巧

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无话可说?英语作文构思技巧!一、三点展开法在谈到某一讨论对象的结果、影响、意义或重要性时,可以按照“个体(自己)→社会(他人)→整体(国家、国际、世界、人类)”的思路逐层进行展开。当然,根据个人需要,在实际写作过程中可以根据题目字数要求选取其中的一到两点来写。ShouldParentsSendTheirKidstoArtClasses?1.现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班;2.对这种做法有人表示支持,也有人并不赞成;3.我认为……在对第2项进行展开时,可以采用三点法。Pros:1.Attendingartclassesbenefitstheall-sideddevelopmentofthekids.2.Attendingartclassesbenefitstheenhancementofsocialcompetitiveness.3.Attendingartclassesbenefitstheimprovementofthecountrycitizens’overallquality.Cons:1.Attendingartclassesinfringesuponthekids’righttoplay.2.Attendingartclassescoststhefamilyalotofmoney.3.Attendingartclassesdeviatesfromthecountry’spurposeofrelievingthestudents’burden.OntheImportanceofaName.1.有人说名字或名称很重要;2.也有人觉得名字或名称无关紧要;3.我认为……对第一项进行展开:Pros(Anameisveryimportant):1.Itisnotsimplyaword,butrathertheembodimentofthenamed,whocanbeeasilyidentifiedwithhisname.2.Namesensurethenormalrunningofsociety.Withoutnames,therewillbechaoseverywhere.Justimaginehowauniversitywillmanageitsthousandsofundergraduateswithoutrecordingalltheirnames?3.Namescontributetointernationalexchanges.Differentcountrieshavedifferentnamingsystems,whichprovidetheoutsidersawindow,thoughnotlarge,togetaglimpseofothercountries’culture.对第二项进行展开:Cons:1.Anameismerelyacodeforthenamed.Withoutitthepersoncouldstillbeeasilyrecognizedthroughotherways,suchashisappearance.2.Besidesnames,thesocietycanalsouseassortedmethodsofmanagingitsmembers.Forexample,digitalnumbers,fingerprints,iris-codeetc.3.Nameshavenoinfluenceoninternationalexchangesowingtotheaforementionedreasons.二、关键词切入法不管是写作还是平常对社会现象的分析,切入点或落脚点不外乎有限的一些关键词:time,money,right,mind。如果能把这些关键词牢记于心,那么写作实践中搜肠刮肚也挤不出几个字的尴尬现象将会有所缓解。核心关键词一:MONEY【论据举例】1.Attendingartclassescoststhefamilyalotofmoney.2.Spaceexplorationisawasteofthetaxpayers’money.3.E-commercesavesagreatamountofmoney.【例】WillE-booksReplaceTraditionalBooks?1.随着信息技术的发展,电子图书越来越多;2.有人认为电子图书将会取代传统图书,理由是……3.我的看法。对于第二项的论证:E-booksaremuchcheaperthantraditionalbooks,becauseitcostslittle.核心关键词二:TIME【论据举例】Attendingartclassesintrudesonthekids’playingtime.【例】TheDigitalAge.1.如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用,并举例。2.数字化产品的使用对人工作,学习,生活产生的影响。以电脑为例:Computersmakeofficeworkfarmoreconvenientthanitusedtobe,sincetheysavemuchtime.以电邮为例:E-maillettershavegreatlyshortenedthecontacttime,comparedwiththesnailspeedoftraditionalletters.或者反过来:Thepracticeofwritingandpostingtraditionallettersisbeinggraduallydiscardedbecauseit’srathertime-consuming.核心关键词三:RIGHT【论据举例】1.Attendingartclassesinfringesuponthekids’righttoplay.2.Capitalpunishmentdeprivesthecondemnedofhisrighttolive.3.Themedia’snotcoveringcrimesindetaildeprivestheaudienceoftheirrighttoknowthetruth.核心关键词四:MIND/HEART/SOULmind/heart/soul—whatisaboveourphysicalexistence,characterizedbysuchwordsasfeeling,thought,understanding,perceptionetc.【论据举例】1.Attendingartclasseshelpcultivatethekids’turnofmind.2.Bycoveringthecriminalactsindetail,themediamaycastashadowtotheheartofthevictim.3.Studyingabroadbroadensthestudents’horizon.一般关键词五:EFFICIENCY【例】TheDigitalAge.以电脑为例:Theadventofcomputershassignificantlyimprovedworkingefficiency.以手机为例:Mobilephoneshaveenhancedworkingefficiencytoagreatextentaspeoplecanusethemtocontactothersanytimeanywhere.【论据举例】E-commerceenhancestheefficiencyoftransactions.一般关键词六:HEALTH【论据举例】Attendingartclassesaddstothekids’burden,whichwillexertmuchphysicalstrainonthemandimpairtheirhealth.Digitalproductsmaydoharmtotheuser’shealth.Forexample,theflashingscreenofthecomputerposesgreatthreattotheuser’seyes.一般关键词七:CULTURE【论据举例】1.Namesprovidepeopleawindowtogetaglimpseofothercountries’culture.2.Studyingabroadisbeneficialforstudentstolearnexoticcultures.3.Cultureconflictsmayarisebecauseofthestudents’ignoranceofnativecustomsandtraditions.一般关键词八:ENVIRONMENT【论据举例】1.E-booksdon’tgeneratesomanypollutantsastraditionalbooksare,asthemakingofthelatterinvolvescuttingplentyoftreestomakethepaperandthenemittingthesewagetotheenvironment.2.Caruseshouldbelimitedasthetailgasesreleasesfromcarspollutetheair.

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