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高考新题型之概要写作SummaryWriting黄石二中陈灿Whatisasummary?Asummaryisabriefstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails(牛津高阶英汉双解词典)Howmuchdoyouknowaboutsummarywriting?《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数少于40的和多余80的，从总分中减去2分《考试说明》中评分标准规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档（21-25points）：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。complete(内容完整)coherent(衔接连贯)correct(语言正确)评分原则concise(用词简洁)60词左右completecorrectcoherentconcise“4C”principle(“4C”原则)Howtowriteagoodsummary?1.Read2.Paraphrase3.Polish4.Revise——structure,keypoints——rewriteinyourownwords——makeitcoherent——spelling、grammar、vocabulary、words、punctuation（标点）概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para1)Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.(Para2)Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofmakingmistakesinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry,theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,“Hastemakeswaste.”Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.(Para3)Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.(Para4)Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.(Para5)Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Yet,muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.Step1:Read①readforstructureSkimthepassageandanswerthefollowingquestions.Q1:Isitthepassagea(an)A.narration(记叙文)B.exposition(说明文)C.argumentation(议论文)Q2:Howmanypartscanthepassagebedividedinto?A.3(para1;para2--4;para5)B.4(para1;para2--3;para4--5)C.2(para1;para2--5)√√Step1:ReadSupportingideas:Conclusion:Topic:Argumentation(议论文）Para1Para2--Para4Para5Step1:Read②readforkeypointsUnderlinethetopicsentenceorkeypointsofeachparagraphfocusonthefirstsentenceandpayspecialattentiontosuchwordsas:however,onthecontrary,but,yet,therefore(Para1)Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para2)Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofmakingmistakesinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry,theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,“Hastemakeswaste.”Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para3)Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para4)Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para5)Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Yet,muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.①Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.gotaccustomedtoliveaslowerlife策略2：简化句子▲Althoughpeoplehavegotaccustomedtobeinginahurry,leadingaslowerlifeisbetter.策略3：句型转换▲Althoughpeoplehavegotaccustomedtobeinginahurry,it'sbettertoliveaslowerlife.Step2:Paraphrase策略1：同义转换②Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofmakingmistakesinarush.Step2:Paraphraseslowdowncommittingerrors▲Themai