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1Unit24Society写作园地-如何写议论文[感悟范文]你们班同学以“什么是幸福”为主题举行了一场讨论会，请根据以下不同观点，以“Onhappiness”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对幸福的看法。1．有人认为有钱就是幸福；2．有人认为健康就是幸福；3．有人认为从父母那里得到财富就是幸福；4．你自己的观点。要求：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数100左右。[范文]Happinessmeansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Somestudentsbelievethatpossessingagreatdealofmoneyisthesecrettohappiness.Theythinkiftheyhavemuchmoney,theywillbeabletobuyanythingtheywant.Somestudentsthinkhappinessmeansgoodhealth.Ifapersonisingoodhealth,hewillenjoywhateverhelikes.Manyotherstudentswishtohavemuchwealthfromtheirparents.Inthiswaytheydon'thavetoworkhardandcanhaveeverything.Idon'tagreewiththeabovepoints.Wecan'tbuymanyimportantthingswithmoney,suchashealth,loveandknowledge.Ivalueknowledge,whichmakesmehappy,forIcandomuchformankindwithknowledge.Althoughdifferentpeoplevaluehappinessdifferently,my“wealth”ofhappinessisinmystudy.[技法讨论]写议论文时，要明确写作的主题和对象，掌握正确的用词和格式。写作时一般遵循以下几个步骤：(1)提出论点。首先要仔细审题，在此基础上根据对题目的理解和要求提出论点。论点要简明扼要、旗帜鲜明、通俗易懂、富有理性。(2)给出论据。论据是用来说明论点的，要从各个不同的角度和层次给出论据，层层展开，步步深入。论据要典型，说理性要强，既可以是身边的实例或可靠的报道，也可以是名人名言等。总之，论据要充分，这样才能说明问题。(3)得出结论。有了论据，就要围绕论点进行合理的分析，作出恰当的逻辑推理和判断，以此证明论点的正确性，最后推出结论。黄金表达2(1)相关的连接词有：onthecontrary,allinall,inshort,generally,worsestill,ontheotherhand,inconclusion,asaconsequence,also,personally,furthermore,definitely,surely,undoubtedly,obviously,inaddition,moreover,consequently,clearly,besides,aswell,inmyopinion,forthesakeof,lastbutnottheleast,tobeginwith,firstly(first)．..(2)句式：Themainreasonisthat...Ican'tagreemore.Anotherthingwecan'tforgetisthat...Thereiseveryreasontobelievethat...Asweallknow...黄金格作文导入：第一段：Recentlywe'vehadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshould...(导入话题)Ouropinionsaredividedonthistopic.(观点有分歧)正文：第二段：Mostofthestudentsareinfavourofit.(正方观点)Herearethereasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2～3个赞成的理由)第三段：However,theothersarestronglyagainstit.(反方观点)Theirreasonsareasfollows.Inthefirstplace...What'smore...Inaddition...(列出2～3个反对的理由)结论：第四段：Personallyspeaking,theadvantagesoverweighthedisadvantages,foritwilldousmoregoodthanharm,soIsupportit.(个人观点)亮点分析：亮点一：本文具有论点、论据和论证三个要素，符合议论文的写作特点。既有广度，也有深度和力度，同时加入了个人观点。亮点二：作者在写作过程中使用了很多复合句式，如：Somestudentsbelievethat...;Theythinkifthey...,theywillbeableto...Ivalueknowledge,whichmakesmehappy,forIcando...等等。[类文演练]上个星期你们班同学就“现代社会是否需要孔子思想”进行了一次讨论。讨论结果如下表所示。请根据表中内容写一篇英语短文。正方大约60%的同学认为，世界各国对孔子的研究愈来愈热，反映了人们对其思想的重视；孔子思想为世界和平做出了巨大贡献。3反方大约40%的同学认为孔子思想诞生于几千年前，早已过时；孔子思想在某种意义上限制了社会的发展。你的观点……参考词汇：孔子思想Confucianthought注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[联想词汇]1．一方面____________onething答案：for2．为……做出巨大贡献makegreatcontributions________答案：to3．某种意义上____________away答案：in4．对……有积极影响havepositiveeffects____________答案：on[连词成句]1．Lastweekwehadadiscussionabout____________westillneedConfucianthoughtinmodernsociety.上星期我们班就“现代社会是否需要孔子思想”进行了一次讨论。答案：whether2．About60%ofthestudentsinmyclassthink____________necessary__________________Confucianthought.大约60%的同学认为，学习孔子思想是必要的。答案：it；tostudy3．Buteverycoinhas________________________.任何事物都具有两面性。答案：twosides4．IthinkConfucianthoughtstill____________some____________________________oursociety.我认为孔子思想仍对我们的社会有积极影响。答案：has；positiveeffectson[连句成章]___________________________________________________________________________4___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：LastweekwehadadiscussionaboutwhetherwestillneedConfucianthoughtinmodernsociety.About60%ofthestudentsinmyclassthinkitnecessarytostudyConfucianthought.Foronething,moreandmorepeopleindifferentcountriesareburstingtostudyit,showingthatitisstilltreasuredintheworld.Foranother,Confucianthoughtisbelievedtohavemadegreatcontributionstothepeaceoftheworld.Buteverycoinhastwosides.About40%ofthestudentsinmyclassinsistConfucianthoughtisoutdated.Inawayitlimitsthedevelopmentofthesociety.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.IthinkConfucianthoughtstillhassomepositiveeffectsonoursociety.