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Unit5MusicPeriod6ReadingforWriting学习目标1.Tofigureouttheorganizationofthespeech.2.Toknowaboutthelanguagefeaturesofthespeech.3.Towriteagoodspeech.课堂探究PartⅠReadingforinformationReadthespeechandanswerthequestions.1.WhatwasSarahsproblem?2.Howdidmusichelpherduringherdifficulttime?3.Whatisheradvicetoothers?PartⅡReadingforstructureReadthespeechagainandfigureoutthestructure.PartⅢReadingforlanguagefeaturesActivity1Matchthenamesofrhetoricaldevicestotheletteredsentencesinthespeech.metaphorpersonificationquoterepetitionrhetoricalquestionsimileActivity2Furtherlearnaboutrhetoricaldevices.(1):Itisaquestionthatisntmeanttogetananswer,butisaskedtomakeapoint.E.g.Haveyoueverfacedadifficulttime?(2):Athing,anideaorananimalisgivenhumanfeatures.E.g.ThecityofWuhancries.(3):Toquoteistorepeatashortpassage,word,phrase,orsentencethatcamefromsomewhereorsomeoneelse.E.g.AsLongfellowsays,“Musicistheuniversallanguageofmankind.”(4):Itreferstotheuseofthesamewordorphraseinapoem,aspeech,etc.E.g.Icame,Isaw,Iconquered.(5):Asimilecomparestwothingsbyusingwordssuchas“like”or“as”.E.g.Johnisascunningasafox.(6):Metaphoriswhenyouusetwonounsandcomparethemtooneanother.Unlikesimile,youdontuse“like”or“as”inthecomparison.E.g.Asasoldier,youcantbeamouse.Youhavetobeatiger.Activity3Readthefollowingpoemandfindoutthesentencesthatuserhetoricaldevices.Ifyouwanttobea...IfyouwanttobeaspylikeJamesBond007,youneedtobeascoolasacucumberandasslyasafoxandyouneedcast-ironnerves.Ifyouwanttobeamodel,youneedtobeastallasatreeandeatlikeabird.IfyouwanttobeanactorandamartialartsexpertlikeJackieChan,youcannotbeaweed.IfyouwanttobesuccessfullikeBillGates,youneedtohaveamindlikeacomputerandbeassharpasaspearinbusiness.IfyouwanttobeamagicianlikeDavidCopperfield.youneedtomakepeopleseethatblackiswhiteandwhiteisblack.Ifyouwanttosucceedinlife,youneedtobeashungryasalion.PartⅣPreparingforwritingWorkingroups.Thinkofwaysthatpeopleexperiencemusicandhowmusiccanhelppeople.WayspeopleexperiencemusicHowmusiccanhelppeoplesinginggiveencouragementPartⅤWritingaspeechActivity1Completetheoutlineanduseitalongwithrhetoricaldevicestodraftyourspeech.•Introduceyourself.•Writeabouthowmusicmadeyou/him/herfeel.•Givethetopicofyourspeech.•Relateyour/his/herexperiencetotheaudience.•Writeaboutyourexperiencewithmusic,ortheexperienceofsomeoneyouknow.•Closethespeech.Hello,mynameis,andImheretotalkabout.yearsago,Activity2Exchangedraftswithyourpartner.Usethechecklisttohelpyourevisethedraft.√Doesthewriterexplainhowmusichaschangedhis/her/someoneelseslife?√Aresomeoftherhetoricaldevicesincludedandusedproperly?√Doesthewritertalkabouthowmusicmakeshim/her/someonefeel?√Isthefirstwordineachsentencecapitalised?√Doesthewriterusecorrectpunctuation?核心素养专练Appreciateyourclassmatesgoodworksandtrytolearnfromthem.参考答案PartⅠ1.Sarahhadaseriousdiseasethatwasdifficulttocure.2.Itmadeherfeelmuchbetterandhelpedherrecover.3.Heradvicetoothersistousemusictohelpwhentheyhaveproblems.PartⅡPart1GreetingIntroduceyourselfIntroducethetopicPart2(body)TellyourstoryStateyouropinionPart3(Closingthespeech)GiveyouradviceSummarizeyourspeechPart4ThankyouraudiencePartⅢActivity1metaphorEpersonificationFquoteBrepetitionCrhetoricalquestionAsimileDActivity2(1)Rhetoricalquestion(设问)(2)Personification(拟人)(3)Quote(引用)(4)Repetition(重复)(5)Simile(明喻)(6)Metaphor(隐喻)Activity3Simile/repetition:Youneedtobeascoolasacucumberandasslyasafox.Youneedtobeastallasatreeandeatlikeabird.Youneedtohaveamindlikeacomputerandbeassharpasaspearinbusiness.Youneedtobeashungryasalion.Metaphor:YoucannotbeaweedPartⅣWayspeopleexperiencemusicHowmusiccanhelppeoplesinging(inachoir)•giveencouragement•providejoy•expressemotions...listeningtoapieceofmusicorasong•sharesimilarfeelings•bringabouthappiness•makelistenersstronginmind...playingthepiano/guitar/guqin...•expressfeelingsfromheart•imagineadreamworld•havefun...PartⅤActivity1Answersmayvary.Thisisoneoftheversions.Hello,mynameisJane,andImheretotalkabouthowmusicinfluencedmyfatherslife.Haveyoueverencounteredatimewheneverythingwentwrongandyouwerediscouraged?Fiveyearsago,myfatherwasdiagnosedtodevelopaseriousdisease,whichwashardtocure.Itseemedasiftheworldwasatanend.Thedoctorsuggestedthatweshouldkeepcalmandhelpmyfatherfightwiththediseasebravely.Healsoadvisedmyfathertolistentomusicoften.JustasWalterHaddononcesaid,“Musicisthemedicineofatroubledmind.”Myfatherfollowedthedoctorsadviceandlistenedtosoftmusicfromtimetotime.Musicgavemyfatherencouragement,musicgavemyfatherstrengthandmusicgavemyfatherconfidence.Musicbecamemyfathersbestfriend,helpinghimgetthroughthehardesttime.Idohopenoneofyouhavetomeetwithtoughtimesinyourlife.Incaseyoucomeacrossthesamesituation,Iadviseyoutoturntomusic,foritdoeshelp.Thankyouforlistening.