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词汇使用出彩攻略---词汇妙用的黄金法则1切忌“人云亦云”写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。①tell→inform/share告诉·(2019·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)I'mwritingtoinformyouthatwewillhaveavolleyballmatchnextmonth.我写信告诉你我们下个月有一场排球赛。②proper→appropriate合适的·(2018·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)Inmyview,you'dbetterbringanappropriategifttoyourChinesefriend.我认为，你最好给你的中国朋友带一份合适的礼物。③chance→opportunity机会·(2019·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)Ifofferedtheopportunitytobeavolunteer,Iwilldoitwellandliveuptoyourexpectations.如果提供给我这个做志愿者的机会，我会努力做好以不辜负你的期望。④besureto→beboundto一定·(2018·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)Youareboundtohaveagoodknowledgeofthehistoryofourschool.你一定会了解我们学校的历史。2.提倡短语优先在写作中，要想吸引阅卷老师，就要多使用短语来代替一些单词，这样会使表达更生动。满分攻略①should→besupposedto应该·(2018·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)Youaresupposedtoarriveontimeoralittleearlier.你应该按时或早点儿到达。②believe→beconvinced(of)相信·(2018·天津高考满分作文)Iamconvincedyourparticipationwillsurelycontributetoourwinningthecompetition.我相信你的参与肯定会助我们赢得比赛。③master→haveagoodcommand/knowledgeof精通·(2019·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)IhaveagoodcommandofspokenEnglish，thusmakingiteasyformetocommunicatewithvisitors.我精通英语口语，因此我很容易与游客交流。④about→concerning/regarding/relatedto关于·(2018·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)I'dliketosharewithyousomedetailsconcerning/regarding/relatedtoChinesetablemanners.我想向你讲述一些与中国餐桌礼仪相关的细节。⑤therefore→asaresult/consequence因此·(2018·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)Therearenotenoughseatsavailable,asaresult/consequence,justarrivealittleearlier.因为座位不多，因此，早点到场。3.表达手法多样在表达相近或相同意思时，要尽量避免重复使用相同的词汇，而是灵活运用其他恰当的同义词、近义词或利用构词法进行词形转换，从而给阅卷老师耳目一新之感。·(2018·北京高考满分作文)Whatameaningful/rewardingexperienceitistopromotetraditionalChineseculture!传播中国传统文化是多么有意义的经历啊！·(2018·天津高考)Wehavebeenoccupied/engaged/buriedinmakingpreparationsforthecompetition.我们一直忙于准备比赛。4.用词准确恰当在写作时，不能为了一味追求高级词汇而堆砌高级词汇或使用难词和生僻词汇，应根据写作要求选用恰当的词汇，以完成规定的写作任务。高级词汇升级句子表述。1.Besides,youmayhavethechancetoplaywithoutstandingplayers.In_addition;_opportunity2.I'llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.delighted3.Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant.of_importance4.Weallhavethesameopportunity.possess5.Theansweriscertainlythelatter.definitely6.IhavedecidedtobeateacherwhenIgrowup.determined/made_up_my_mind7.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyadvice.take_my_advice_into_account/consideration佳句展示8.Finally,Ifoundthebookreallyinterestingandthatitwaswellworthreading.Eventually;_absorbing/striking/appealing(2020年，全国卷I）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右；2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllisten真题演练tomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）Asforme；sparesometime；listentomepatiently;第三步：连词成句1.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmostly.2.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.3.Myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系：Asfor;and;but;So第五步：润色修改【范文点评】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch；非谓语动词：Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents；时间状语从句：WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。