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句内过渡自然攻略---过渡词语的妙用一篇好的文章需要衔接来实现文义的起、承、转、合，通过衔接来抹平句与句、段与段之间的“棱角”，让文章圆润、流畅，读起来朗朗上口。1.表递进关系的过渡词汇：what'smore、furthermore、moreover、besides、what'sworse、stillless、tomakemattersworse、worsestill、on(the)onehand...ontheother(hand)...、foronething...foranother...等。·Ononehand,Icanearnsomemoneybydoingittohelpmyparents.Ontheotherhand,Icangainsomeexperiencefromit,whichwilldogoodtomyfuturelife.一方面，我能通过做这样的事赚些钱来帮助父母；另一方面，我能从中获得一些经验，这会对我将来的生活有益。2.表示转折对比的过渡词汇：but、yet、however、while、otherwise、onthecontrary等。·However,whenitissomethingbeyondmycompetence,Iturntomyclassmatesorteachersforhelp.然而，当我做不了某事时，我会求助于我的同学或老师。3.表特定的顺序关系的过渡词汇：first、firstly、second、secondly、third、thirdly、aboveall、firstofall、then、afterthat、next、finally、intheend、atlast、eventually等。·Firstly,Icollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.ThenIwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.Afterthat,Isweptandmoppedthefloors.首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，接着我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，然后我扫地、拖地。4.表因果关系的过渡词汇：because、as、since、for、thanksto、dueto、asaresult满分攻略of、so、therefore、sothat、asaresult/consequence、consequently等。·Therefore,thereisnoreasonforustolookdownuponordinaryjobs.因此，我们没有理由轻视普通的工作。·Asaresult,Ihavemadegreatprogressinmystudies.结果，我在学习上取得了很大进步。5.表换一种方式表达的过渡词汇：inotherwords、thatistosay、toputitanotherway等。·Thatistosay,youshouldbelieveinyourselfifyouwanttosucceed.也就是说，如果你想成功，必须相信自己。6.表示观点的过渡性词汇：inmyopinion、inmyview、inmypointofview、asfarasIamconcerned、asforme、personally、Ithink...等。·Inmyopinion,they'reheroesfromordinarypeople.我认为他们是平民英雄。7.表示总结的过渡性词汇：inshort、inbrief、inconclusion、ina/oneword、tosumup、allinall、onthewhole、ingeneral、generallyspeaking等。·Allinall,travelingisthebestchoicetorechargeourselvesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.总的来说，旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新的挑战的最好的方式。过渡词汇让句子更自然。1.Swimmingnot_only(不但)benefitsourhealth,but_also(而且)helpsushaveastrongwill.2.On_the_contrary(正相反),smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime,butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.佳句展示3.As_far_as_I_am_concerned(在我看来),onlybystudyinghardatordinarytimecanyousucceedeventually.4.Therefore(因此),Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.5.In_a_word/In_conclusion/In_short/In_brief(总之),weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment.6.First/Firstly(首先),we'dbetterformthehabitofkeepingadiary.Second/Secondly(其次),weshouldreadasmanybooksaspossibleandmakenotes.Third/Thirdly(再次),wecancopyafamoussayingonthenotebookeveryday.利用适当的过渡衔接词汇补全下面的申请信，并背诵成文DearSir，I'mLiHua.I'mwritingtoapplytobeoneofthevolunteersofCultureFestival.①To_begin_with,_IspeakfluentEnglish,whichwillplayanimportantroleincommunicatingwithforeigners.②Additionally/In_addition,_IhavearichknowledgeofChinesehistory,enablingmetomakeadetailedintroductionofoursplendidculture.③What's_more/Moreover,_thisactivityprovidesuswithanopportunitytopromoteabetterunderstandingamongstudentsfromaroundtheworld.④Hopefully，Iwillbroadenmyhorizonsandimprovemyabilitybymakingsomecontributionstotheactivity.I'dappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.Yours，LiHua佳作示例真题演练(2020年，全国卷III）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。注意:1.词数100左右;2.结束语已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教MissEvans对于《theSteamboat》改编短剧的支持。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【范文点评】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。