搜索
1活动与沟通【真题再现1】（2020.全国卷II）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受注意:1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。题目:MyWeekend_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[参考范文]MyWeekendLastweekend，wetookpartinapickingactivity.Wedrovefromtheschool,andthefarmwasabout2kilometersawayfromourschool.Whenwearrivedatthefarm,thereareallkindsofanimals,greenfreshvegetablesandfruittreesinthefarm.Weweredividedintotwogroups.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruits,theotherpackedupthefruits.Timeflyingquickly,theactivitywasover.Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit.Throughthisactivity,weknowhowhardthefarmersareandhowpreciousthefoodis.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplanted2bythefarmers.[写作分析]本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生为英语角写一篇关于和同学一起参加采摘活动的短文。[写作过程]第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受第二步：列提纲（重点短语）tookpartin；wasresponsiblefor；ameaningfulday；shouldtreasure第三步：连词成句1.Lastweekend,wetookpartinapickingactivity.2.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruitstheotherpackedupthefruits.3.Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit4.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。3第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍农场；描述采摘过程；个人感受2.表示并列补充关系：and;But;Through第五步：润色修改[范文点评]范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：Butitwasameaningfulday,whenwelearnalotformit.；非谓语动词：Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers；时间状语从句：Whenwearrivedatthefarm,thereareallkindsofanimals,greenfreshvegetablesandfruittreesinthefarm.Weweredividedintotwogroups…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。【真题再现2】（2016年，天津卷）假设你是某高中的学生会主席李华。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿:①回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；②谈谈收获或感想；③表达祝愿与期望。注意：①词数不少于100；②可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。Dearfriends，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.[参考范文]Dearfriends，Howtimeflies！Twoweekswentby,andourexchangeactivitiesended.Onbehalfofmyschool,Iwouldliketoexpressmyfeelings.Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveralinstructiveactivities.WelearntmanyChinesecharactersandtookplentyofexercisetogether.WewenttotherestauranttotastetheChinesetraditionalfood.Thefoodwasverydelicious.Whilevisitingtheartexhibition,wediscussedthegreatartists’works.Inmyopinion,everyonehereisamemberofourbigfamilyandwelearnalotfromeachother.AndatlastIsincerelywishyouapleasanttripbacktoyourcountry.Ihopewe’llgettogetheragainnextyear.Thankyou.[写作分析]这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。[范文点评]这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。范文流畅，使用了高级句型：定语从句Asscheduled；5状语从句的省略Whilevisitingtheartexhibition；短语onbehalfof；participatein；gettogether也为文章添彩不少。【经典演练】假如你是学生会学习部的部长李华，请你就学生会即将开展的“英语角”活动写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.活动目的2.活动时间3.活动要求注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[高分范文]Boysandgirls,Iamhonoredtotellyouapieceofgoodnewshere.InordertodevelopourinterestinlearningEnglish,ourStudents'Unionwillsetupan”EnglishCorner，whichcanimproveourspeakingandlistening.Thetimeisfrom5:30to6:20oneveryWednesdayafternoon.Ourforeignteacherswillbeinvitedtotakepart,whoaretobringmanyinterestingtopics.Throughcommunicatingwithforeignteachers,wecanbemoreawareofthecultureandcustomsoftheEnglish-speakingcountries.Bytheway,whoeveriswillingtojoinissupposedtoprepareatleastonequestionaheadtoask,andbringyournotebookssoastomakenotes.That'sall.Thanksforlistening.[句子改写]用sothat改写范文划线的句子6OurStudents'Unionwillsetupan”EnglishCorner,whichcanimproveourspeakingandlisteningsothatwecandevelopourinterestinlearningEnglish.[佳句临摹]佳句1:Ourforeignteacherswillbeinvitedtotakepart,whoaretobringmanyinterestingtopics.临摹1:欢迎大家积极参加这次英语演讲比赛，这将会对你们提高英语口语有帮助。WelcometotakepartintheEnglishspeechcontest,whichistohelpyouimproveyourspokenEnglish.佳句2:Bytheway,whoeveriswillingtojoinissupposedtoprepareatleastonequestionaheadtoask,andbringyournotebookssoastomakenotes.临摹2:我们应该帮助那些需要帮助的人。Wearesupposedtoofferhelptowhoeverneedshelp.【写作宝典】I.表示“起”的词语：用于开篇引出扩展句atfirst最初tobegin/startwith首先，第一first(ly)第一Firstofall首先，第一inthefirstplace首先，第一7inthebeginning起初atpresent现在，当今currently目前，当前recently/lately最近presently现在,此刻nowadays现在ingeneral通常,大体上，总的说来inrecentyears近年来generallyspeaking一般来说theformer..thelatter...前.....后.....foronething...foranother...首.....其......ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...一方面.....另一方面.....II.其他关联词表递进：besides，what’smore，what’sworse，furthermore，inadditionto等表并列:also，aswell(as)，or，either...or，neither...nor，notonly...butalso，both...and等表因果:therefore，thanksto，asaresult(of)，becauseof，dueto，owingto等表强调:aboveall，indeed，surely，certainly，o