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1观点与建议【真题再现1】（2020年，天津卷，第二次高考）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；(2)对活动的感受；(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼thecoming-ofageceremony新冠脑炎COVID-F9DearChris,I’msogladtohearfromyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin[参考范文]DearChris,Iamsogladtohearfromyou.Thecoming-of-ageceremonywasheldinourschool2onJune8ththismonth.Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.Afterthat,weallwatchedthevideoofalumnusfightingagainsttheepidemic.Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.Inthefuture,Iwillbeagooddoctortohealthewoundedandrescuethedying,devotingmyselftomywork.Bestwishes！Yours,LiJin[写作分析]这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2.对活动的感受。3.对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulatesbonsth.,befacedwith,healthewoundedandrescuethedying,devoteoneselftodoingsth.；第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,3reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.that引导的表语从句Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.时间状语从句的省略句Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Afterthat,besides,however.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。[范文点评]文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.that引导的表语从句Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.时间状语从句的省略句Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。【真题再现2】（2014·安徽卷）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数120左右；42.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：tempern.脾气，情绪HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Yours,Jamie[参考范文]HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobewrong,soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips:First,talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriends，asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours,Jamie[写作分析]5本篇书面表达属于提纲作文。内容是用英文写一封回信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示：为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意写信格式。[范文点评]文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的宾语从句I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.定语从句so…that引导的目的状语从句Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。【经典演练】随着智能手机以及电脑的普及,人们越来越喜欢自拍，然后将自拍照上传到社交网站上和朋友分享。请结合下面的提示,以“WhydoPeopleLikeSelfie?为题写一篇文章，向某英文报刊投稿。内包括：1.自拍的现状(人群、特点)；2.说明自己的情况；63.分析这种现象的原因。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。[高分范文]WhydoPeopleLikeSelfie?Witheasieraccesstosmartphonesaswellascomputers,selfiehasbecomemoreandmorepopularamongpeoplerecently.Withregardtothisphenomenon,myopinionsareasfollows.Tostartwith,ifyouareateenagerwholovestakingselfies,itcan'tbedeniedthatyouarefollowingthetrend.Besides,itistheyoungergenerationthataccountsforthemajorityofselfielovers.Equippedwithmoderndevices,theyalwayshavenewideasandtendtobeself-centered.However,itisapitythatIhavenevertriedtakingaselfiebefore,butasateenager,Icanstillunderstandtheirfeelings.Toconclude,itisreasonableforthemtoappreciatethemselveswiththecomingofsmartphones.Moreimportantly,takingselfiesandpostingthermonlineisreallyconvenientandamusing.[句子改写]用what引导的从句改写范文划线的句子What'smoreimportantisthattakingselfiesandpostingthemonlineisreallyconvenientandamusing.[佳句临摹]佳句1;...itcan'tbedeniedthatyouarefollowingthetrend.临摹1:不可否认他是最伟大的科学家之一。Itcan’tbedeniedthatheisoneofthegreatestscientists.佳句2:...itisapitythatIhavenevertriedtakingaselfiebe