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1短文改错专题突破练171Lastmonth,IvisitedtheGreatWallofChina.Itwaspackingwithmanytourists.Asagirlfromsmallvillage,Ifounditwasdifficultyformetogetascenicphotoopportunity.However,thesettingwasreallyattractive.Visitingthiswonderwasatiringandabsolutelyunbelievableexperience,easyprovenbythoselargecrowdsaroundme.TheymademerealizedjusthowluckyIwastobethere.Howlonghavetheyallbeenwaitingfortovisitthiswonder?SawafriendofmineinBeijinggaveusanopportunitythatotherswishtohaveintheirentirelives.Forthat,Iamforevergrateful.答案Lastmonth,IvisitedtheGreatWallofChina.Itwaswithmanytourists.Asagirlfromsmallvillage,Ifounditwasformetogetascenicphotoopportunity.However,thesettingwasreallyattractive.Visitingthiswonderwasatiringabsolutelyunbelievableexperience,provenbythoselargecrowdsaroundme.TheymademejusthowluckyIwastobethere.Howlongtheyallbeenwaitingtovisitthiswonder?afriendofmineinBeijinggaveanopportunitythatotherswishtohaveintheirentirelives.Forthat,Iamforevergrateful.2Mostpeopledirectlylinkseniorhighschoollifewithplentyofstressandendlesshomeworks.However,someinterestedactivitiesindeedcontributetoreducethepressure.LastweektheentertainmentdepartmentofourStudentUnionorganizedtheactivityinwhicheachclassshootashortmovie.OurclasschoseastorysettinginWorldWarⅡ,thatshowedthepreciousnessofpeace.Ithinkthisprocesswasagoodlessonthattaughttomehowtostrikeabalancebetweenstudyingorrelaxation.NowIamdeterminedthanevertotreasureeverythingIhaveandfightformyfuture.答案2Mostpeopledirectlylinkseniorhighschoollifewithplentyofstressandendless.However,someactivitiesindeedcontributetothepressure.LastweektheentertainmentdepartmentofourStudentUnionorganizedactivityinwhicheachclassashortmovie.OurclasschoseastoryinWorldWarⅡ,showedthepreciousnessofpeace.Ithinkthisprocesswasagoodlessonthattaughtmehowtostrikeabalancebetweenstudyingrelaxation.NowIamdeterminedthanevertotreasureeverythingIhaveandfightformyfuture.3Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,intelligentrobotswillbewideusedinthefuture.Athome,robotswillhelppeopledosomehouseworkandtakingcareoftheelderly,babiesandpatients.Inadditiontothesetask,robotswillevenbeabletoplaythechessanddoexercisewithpeople.Infactories,robotswillbeusedtoperformsomedangerousjobsavoidaccidents.Robotswillchangeourfuturelifebymanyways,whatwillmakeitmorecolorfulandcomfortable.Therefore,weshouldn’tdependonintelligentrobotstoomuch,fortheyweremadetohelphumansratherthanreplaceus.Ashelpersofwehumans,robotsshouldbeusedproperly.答案Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,intelligentrobotswillbeusedinthefuture.Athome,robotswillhelppeopledosomehouseworkandcareoftheelderly,babiesandpatients.Inadditiontothese,robotswillevenbeabletoplaychessanddoexercisewithpeople.Infactories,robotswillbeusedtoperformsomedangerousjobsavoidaccidents.Robotswillchangeourfuturelifemanyways,willmakeitmorecolorfulandcomfortable.,weshouldn’tdependonintelligentrobotstoomuch,fortheymadetohelphumansratherthanreplaceus.Ashelpersofhumans,robotsshouldbeusedproperly.43Nowadaysmanypeopledriveinsteadoftakingabusorwalkingtowork.Itcausesmoretrafficjamandaccidents.Asthestudent,whatcanwedotoguaranteeoursafe?Firstofall,thetrafficrulesmustbestrictobeyed.Whenwecrossstreets,waituntilthetrafficlightturngreen.Next,don’tforgetwalkonthepavement.Finally,Ithinkitverydangerouslytowearheadphoneswhilewalkingorcycling.Sincewecan’tpayenoughattentiononthetrafficaroundus,soaccidentsmayhappen.Takinggoodcareofourselvesanddon’tletourparentsworryaboutus.答案Nowadaysmanypeopledriveinsteadoftakingabusorwalkingtowork.Itcausesmoretrafficandaccidents.Asstudent,whatcanwedotoguaranteeour?Firstofall,thetrafficrulesmustbeobeyed.Whenwecrossstreets,waituntilthetrafficlightgreen.Next,don’tforgetwalkonthepavement.Finally,Ithinkitverytowearheadphoneswhilewalkingorcycling.Sincewecan’tpayenoughattentionthetrafficaroundus,accidentsmayhappen.goodcareofourselvesanddon’tletourparentsworryaboutus.5Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutcompass.Ifthereisnoaiminourlives,wewillgetlose.Lastterm,Icouldn’tacceptthetruthwhichIfailedinmymathexamination.Idecidedtogiveitup,soIskippedfromclassesfrequently.Consideredmycase,myteacherofferedmeseveraldetailedapproachandadvisedmetosetashort-termgoaltoimprovemymath.Finally,Iworkharderthaneverandmadegreatprogressinhermath.Inmyopinion,successliesinaseriesofgoals.However,weshouldremembertomakeourtargetsclearlyandsparenoefforttorealizeourdreams.答案Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutcompass.Ifthereisnoaiminourlives,wewillget.Lastterm,Icouldn’tacceptthetruthIfailedinmymathexamination.Idecidedtogiveitup,soIskippedclassesfrequently.mycase,myteacherofferedmeseveraldetailedandadvisedmetosetashort-termgoalto4improvemymath.Finally,Iharderthaneverandmadegreatprogressinmath.Inmyopinion,successliesinaseriesofgoals.,weshouldremembertomakeourtargetsandsparenoefforttorealizeourdreams.6LastweekendIwentonaeco-travelwithatravelagency.Allthewayweappreciatethebeautifulsceneryandfreshair,soafewofuspickedflowerswhilegoingsightseeing.Whatwasworse,manytouriststhrewrubbisheshereandthere.Idon’tthinkthatitisatrulyeco-travel.Aneco-travel