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1短文改错专题突破练161(2018河北石家庄教学质量检测)DearMom,I’mnowintheUnitedStates,acountrysodifferentlyfromChina.Everythingisfreshbutinteresting!Ihavemadesomefriendsthereandtheyareverykind.Still,youknowhowmuchImissyouandyourcooking.Themerethoughtofthedishesyoupreparemakesmymouthtowater.Myfriendshadsomestrangewaysofdescribingtheirhungry.Forinstance,“Icaneatahorse!”It’salittleconfused,hmm?I’malsosendingyouafewrecordofourdailyconversations,fromthatyoucanhearrealAmericanEnglish.ItmaybeusefultoyouasEnglishteacher.答案DearMom,I’mnowintheUnitedStates,acountrysofromChina.Everythingisfreshinteresting!Ihavemadesomefriendsandtheyareverykind.Still,youknowhowmuchImissyouandyourcooking.Themerethoughtofthedishesyoupreparemakesmymouthwater.Myfriendssomestrangewaysofdescribingtheir.Forinstance,“Icaneatahorse!”It’salittle,hmm?I’malsosendingyouafewofourdailyconversations,fromyoucanhearrealAmericanEnglish.ItmaybeusefultoyouasEnglishteacher.2(2018河北石家庄二模)WhenIwasinhighschool,Iwantedtogetascholarshiptoauniversity.Ilikedsinging,soItryoutforascholarshipformusic.ButIfailedtogetone.Iwasrealupset.Ifeltlikefailure.Ijustkeptfeelingsorryforme.However,afterafewday,IdecidednottoletonesinglelosstokeepmefromdoingwhatIlove.ButIcheeredup2anddevotedmyselftosingagain.Ithinkthatacceptingfailureisthatweneedtodofirstbeforewesuccesseventually.答案WhenIwasinhighschool,Iwantedtogetascholarshiptoauniversity.Ilikedsinging,soIoutforascholarshipformusic.ButIfailedtogetone.Iwasupset.Ifeltlikefailure.Ijustkeptfeelingsorryfor.However,afterafew,IdecidednottoletonesinglelosskeepmefromdoingwhatIlove.Icheeredupanddevotedmyselftoagain.Ithinkthatacceptingfailureisweneedtodofirstbeforeweeventually.3IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtonlyinEnglish.Asweareallknow,agoodlearningenvironmentisvitalunlesswewanttostudyEnglishwell.ClassesteachinginEnglishprovidestudentswithgoodenvironment.However,therearealsosomeproblemwiththisteachingmethod.Aswehadn’tmasteredenoughEnglishwords,sometimeswemayfindthatdifficulttofollowtheteacher.SlowlearnersmayevenloseinterestonEnglish.Practicemakesperfect.TolearnEnglishwellrequirealotofpractice.Therefore,IlikemyEnglishclassestobetaughtcompleteinEnglish.答案IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtonlyinEnglish.Asweallknow,agoodlearningenvironmentisvitalwewanttostudyEnglishwell.ClassesinEnglishprovidestudentswithgoodenvironment.However,therearealsosomewiththisteachingmethod.AswemasteredenoughEnglishwords,sometimeswemayfinddifficulttofollowtheteacher.SlowlearnersmayevenloseinterestEnglish.Practicemakesperfect.TolearnEnglishwellalotofpractice.Therefore,IlikemyEnglishclassestobetaughtinEnglish.4ItwasonawarmautumndaythatmyfatherandIwalkintomynewhighschool.Afterregisteredintheclassroom,thevolunteertookmetomydormitory.AltogetherIhadfiveroommates,twoofwhicharrivedlater.Igottoknowmynewroommate3immediately.AlthoughIwasquiteunwillingtosay“Goodbye”tomyfather,buthehadtoleavetohome.IsuddenlyrealizedIhadgrownupandthatIhadtolookaftermeandliveindependently.NotuntilthenIknowmyseniorhighschoollifehadrealbegun.答案ItwasonawarmautumndaythatmyfatherandIintomynewhighschool.Afterintheclassroom,volunteertookmetomydormitory.AltogetherIhadfiveroommates,twoofarrivedlater.Igottoknowmynewimmediately.AlthoughIwasquiteunwillingtosay“Goodbye”tomyfather,/buthehadtoleavehome.IsuddenlyrealizedIhadgrownupandthatIhadtolookafterandliveindependently.NotuntilthenIknowmyseniorhighschoollifehadbegun.5Oneday,Iwascookinginthekitchenwhenthetelephonerings.Iwenttoansweritimmediately.Shewasmyclosefriend,Lisa.Whenweweretalkingonphone,thefirealarmsounded.Iranbacktothekitchenonlytofindtheroomfullofsmokeandthebeefbadburnt.Iquicklyturnedoffthegas,openingallthewindows,butthenwentoutofthehouse.Inmysurprise,twofireenginewereoutsidemyhouse.Iwasquiteworry.Itoldthefirementhatitwasmycarelesscookingthatitcausedtheheavysmoke.答案Oneday,Iwascookinginthekitchenwhenthetelephone.Iwenttoansweritimmediately.wasmyclosefriend,Lisa.Whenweweretalkingonphone,thefirealarmsounded.Iranbacktothekitchenonlytofindtheroomfullofsmokeandthebeefburnt.Iquicklyturnedoffthegas,allthewindows,thenwentoutofthehouse.mysurprise,twofirewereoutsidemyhouse.Iwasquite.Itoldthefirementhatitwasmycarelesscookingthatcausedtheheavysmoke.46DearJacob,Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoclimbMountQianshan.Youhadalreadybeenhereforamonth.Sowethinkit’sthegoodopportunityforusgetfamiliarwitheachother.MountQianshanhasagoodreputationfortheirbrilliantsceneryindifferentseason.Myfriendsandfamilyisplanningtomakeitat8o’clockinthisSaturdaymorningattheschoolgate.Wearewonderingthatitisconvenientforyou.Whenarrivedthere,we’llclimbmountainsandadmirethebeautifulsceneryinwinter.Thatwillcertainleaveadeepimpressiononyousinceeverythingiscoveredbysnow.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.LiHua答案DearJacob,Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoclimbMountQianshan.Youalreadybeenhereforamonth.Sowethinkit’sgoodopportunityforusgetfamiliarwitheachother.MountQianshanhasagoodreputationforbrilliantsceneryindifferent.Myfriendsandfamilyplanningtomakeitat8o’clockthisSaturdaymorningattheschoolgate.Wearewonderingitisconvenientfory