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Part2亮点词汇,追求卓越效果-2-亮点1亮点2亮点3亮点1:使用高级词汇1.“告诉”→用informsb.of/that替换tellsb.sth./that【秒杀】请提前告知我们你的决定。2.“表达”→用convey替换express【秒杀】我写这封信是要表达对您真诚的感谢。3.“想要做”→用intendtodo替换wanttodo【秒杀】我们打算充分利用这次旅行来开阔眼界。Pleaseinformusofyourdecisioninadvance.I’mwritingtoconveymysincerethankstoyou.Weintendtotakefulladvantageofthistriptobroadenourhorizons.-3-亮点1亮点2亮点34.“意识到”→用beaware替换realize【秒杀】作为社会的一员,我意识到负责任是很重要的。5.“认真地”→用attentively替换carefully【秒杀】当我详细解释传统的泡茶程序时,外国学生仔细地观察我每一个动作。(2018·北京,书面表达)6.“对……有好处”→用beofgreatbenefit/beverybeneficial/berewarding替换begood/behelpful【秒杀】体育运动有助于增强我们的体质。Asamemberofsociety,Iamawarethatbeingresponsibleisveryimportant.AsIexplainedthetraditionalprocedureofmakingteaindetail,theforeignstudentswatchedeverymoveofmineattentively.Sportsareverybeneficialtobuildingourbodies.-4-亮点1亮点2亮点37.“结果”→用asaconsequence替换asaresult【秒杀】结果,孩子们变得很依赖他们的父母。8.“得到”→用acquire/obtain替换get【秒杀】我们应该不遗余力地获取知识,绝不轻易气馁。9.“擅长,精通”→用haveagoodcommandof/haveagoodknowledgeof替换begoodat【秒杀】我精通英语。Asaconsequence,childrenbecomeveryreliantontheirparents.Weshouldsparenoefforttoacquireknowledgeandnevergetdiscouragedeasily.IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.-5-亮点1亮点2亮点310.“要求”→用request替换ask【秒杀】所有的游客都被要求不能在公园里乱扔垃圾。11.“越来越……”→用increasingly替换moreandmore【秒杀】羽毛球运动日益盛行。12.“记住”→用keep/bearsb./sth.inmind替换remembersb./sth.【秒杀】我会一直记住我们的友谊。Allthevisitorswererequestednottothrowwasteawayinthepark.Badmintonisbecomingincreasinglypopular.Iwillkeepourfriendshipinmindalltheway.-6-亮点1亮点2亮点313.“参加”→用participatein/getinvolvedin替换takepartin【秒杀】我们应该经常参加户外活动。14.“在我看来”→用personally(speaking)替换inmyopinion【秒杀】在我看来,看原版书比看这部电影好。15.“努力做某事”→用makeeveryefforttodosth./sparenoefforttodosth.替换trytodosth.【秒杀】我会不遗余力地帮助你。Weshouldparticipateinoutdooractivitiesfrequently.Personally,itisbettertoreadthebookintheoriginalthantoseethefilm.I’llsparenoefforttohelpyou.-7-亮点1亮点2亮点316.“各种各样的”→用various/varietiesof/avarietyof/awiderangeof替换allkindsof【秒杀】有种类繁多的图书供我们选择。17.“由于”→用dueto替换becauseof【秒杀】由于天气不好,我们学校的运动会推迟了。18.“导致(某人做)某事”→用contributeto(doing)sth.替换leadto(doing)sth.【秒杀】勤奋和智慧造就了他的成功。Thereareavarietyof/awiderangeofbooksforustochoosefrom.Ourschoolsportsmeetinghasbeenputoffduetothebadweather.Diligenceandwisdomcontributedtohissuccess.-8-亮点1亮点2亮点319.“忙于……”→用beoccupiedindoingsth./withsth.替换bebusyindoingsth./withsth.【秒杀】我忙于研究,很少关注我女儿的感受。20.“好”→用outstanding/extraordinary替换good【秒杀】作为一位杰出的科学家,屠呦呦受到了政府的奖励。Iwasoccupiedinmystudyandseldompayattentiontomydaughter’sfeelings.Asanoutstandingscientist,TuYouyouwasrewardedbythegovernment.-9-亮点1亮点2亮点3亮点2:表达求新求异1.“改善”→用better替换improve【秒杀】应该立即采取行动来改善环境。2.“承担责任”→用shouldertheresponsibility替换taketheresponsibility【秒杀】作为社会的一员,你要乐于承担责任。Immediateactionshouldbetakentobettertheenvironment.Asamemberofthesociety,youmustbewillingtoshouldertheresponsibility.-10-亮点1亮点2亮点33.“即将来临”→用aroundthecorner替换becomingsoon【秒杀】我们的期末测试即将来临。4.“重要”→用count/matter替换beimportant【秒杀1】不是到达目的地而是旅程本身才是最重要的。【秒杀2】最重要的是你如何看待自己。5.“使某人做某事”→用enablesb.todosth.替换makesb.dosth.【秒杀】我在找一份能充分发挥我才能的工作。Ourfinaltestisaroundthecorner.Itisnotthearrivalbutthejourneythatcounts.Whatmattersmostishowyouseeyourself.I’mlookingforajobwhichwillenablemetomakefulluseofmytalent.-11-亮点1亮点2亮点36“未能”→用failto替换beunableto【秒杀】我没能说服她和我一起去听音乐会。7.“想到”→用occurto替换thinkof【秒杀】你需要解释一下你是如何想到这个主意的。8.“越来越多的”→用agrowingnumberof/anincreasingnumberof替换moreandmore【秒杀】买车的人越来越多。Ifailedtopersuadehertogototheconcertwithme.Youneedtoexplainhowtheideaoccurstoyou.Anincreasing/Agrowingnumberofpeoplearebuyingcars.-12-亮点1亮点2亮点39.“必须要做的事”→用amust替换somethingthatyoumustdo【秒杀】英语对我来说是日常生活中与他人交流所必备的。10.“对……感兴趣”→用appealto(sb.)/(sb.)takeagreatinterestin替换(sb.)beinterestedin【秒杀】这份工作深深地吸引了我。Englishisamustformetocommunicatewithothersinmydailylife.Thenewjobappealstomegreatly.-13-亮点1亮点2亮点3亮点3:习语短语优先1.“应该”→用besupposedto替换should【秒杀】在校期间,我们应该衣着整洁。2.“令人担忧”→用ofgreatconcern替换worrying【秒杀】假期期间孩子们的安全问题令人担忧。3.“常常”→用tendto替换usually【秒杀】我常常醒得很早。Wearesupposedtobeneatlydressedwhenatschool.Thesafetyofkidsduringtheholidaysisofgreatconcern.Itendtowakeupearly.-14-亮点1亮点2亮点34.“至关重要”→用vital/ofgreatsignificance/ofgreatimportance替换important【秒杀】因此,学生们在课余时间做什么是至关重要的。5.“帮助”→用lendahelpinghandto替换help【秒杀】在几次英语活动中,我成功地帮助了她。Sowhatthestudentsdointheirsparetimeisofgreatimportance.Successfully,IhavelentahelpinghandtoherinseveralEnglishactivities.-15-亮点1亮点2亮点36.“解释”→用accountfor替换explain【秒杀】他无法说明他旷课的原因。7.“面临”→用befacedwith替换face【秒杀】更重要的是,我们可以倾诉我们面临的困难。8.“相信”→用befully/firmlyconvinced替换believe【秒杀】我坚定地认为游客的数量应得到限制,理由如下。Hecouldnotaccountforhisabsencefromschool.What’smore,wecanpouroutthetroubleswearefacedwith.Iamfirmlyconvincedthatthenumberoftouristsshouldbelimitedforthefollowingreasons.-16-亮点1亮点2亮点39.“有时,偶尔”→用occasionally/onceinawhile替换sometimes【秒杀】有时,我们通过网上聊天来交流观点。10.“非常,极其”→用morethan替换very【秒杀】得知你将来北京进修的计划,我非常高兴。(2018·北京,书面表达)Onceinawhile,wechatonlinetoexchangeouropinions.I’mmorethangladtolearnyourfutureeducationplaninBeijing.-17-亮点1亮点2亮点311.“疲惫”→用wornout替换tired【秒杀】清扫公园后,我非常累。12.“此外”→用inaddition/what’smore替换besides【秒杀】此外,在困难面前我们应该坚持不懈。Iwaswornoutafterdoingtheclean-upinthepark.Inaddition,weshouldholdoninthefaceofhardships.