2020年中考英语 书面表达写作指导课件

中考英语专题复习书面表达写作指导美化篇章高分写作DearJenny,IwanttosharesomethingaboutJeanwithyou.SheistheteacherIwillneverforget.Sheteachesmemanythings.Shesmilesalot.Iwastooshytomakefriendswithothers.WhatshouldIdo?Ididn’tknow.Shetaughtmetosmilemoreandenjoylife.Itriedandfoundmanyfriends.Ifelthappy.Sheispatientandcaring.Englishusedtobehardforme.SoIdecidedtogiveitup.Shedidn’tgivemeup.Shetriedherbesttocareforme.Shetriedherbesttoencourageme.Shetriedherbesttochangeme.Iwasmoved.Iworkedharder.MyEnglishhasimprovedalot.Workhardatschool.Itwasimportant.Irealizedit.Ithinkagoodteachershouldbringoutthebestinastudent,justlikeJean.Doyouagree?Pleasereplysoon.JackBeginningDearJenny,IwanttosharesomethingaboutJeanwithyou.SheistheteacherIwillneverforget.Sheteachesmemanythings.Shesmilesalot.Iwastooshytomakefriendswithothers.WhatshouldIdo?Ididn’tknow.Shetaughtmetosmilemoreandenjoylife.Itriedandfoundmanyfriends.Ifelthappy.Sheispatientandcaring.Englishusedtobehardforme.SoIdecidedtogiveitup.Shedidn’tgivemeup.Shetriedherbesttocareforme.Shetriedherbesttoencourageme.Shetriedherbesttochangeme.Iwasmoved.Iworkedharder.MyEnglishhasimprovedalot.Workhardatschool.Itwasimportant.Irealizedit.Ithinkagoodteachershouldbringoutthebestinastudent,justlikeJean.Doyouagree?Pleasereplysoon.JackExampleBeginningDearJenny,IwanttosharesomethingaboutJeanwithyou.SheistheteacherIwillneverforget.Sheteachesmemanythings.Shesmilesalot.Iwastooshytomakefriendswithothers.WhatshouldIdo?Ididn’tknow.Shetaughtmetosmilemoreandenjoylife.Itriedandfoundmanyfriends.Ifelthappy.Sheispatientandcaring.Englishusedtobehardforme.SoIdecidedtogiveitup.Shedidn’tgivemeup.Shetriedherbesttocareforme.Shetriedherbesttoencourageme.Shetriedherbesttochangeme.Iwasmoved.Iworkedharder.MyEnglishhasimprovedalot.Workhardatschool.Itwasimportant.Irealizedit.Ithinkagoodteachershouldbringoutthebestinastudent,justlikeJean.Doyouagree?Pleasereplysoon.JackExampleExampleEndingBeginningDearJenny,IwanttosharesomethingaboutJeanwithyou.SheistheteacherIwillneverforget.Sheteachesmemanythings.Shesmilesalot.Iwastooshytomakefriendswithothers.WhatshouldIdo?Ididn’tknow.Shetaughtmetosmilemoreandenjoylife.Itriedandfoundmanyfriends.Ifelthappy.Sheispatientandcaring.Englishusedtobehardforme.SoIdecidedtogiveitup.Shedidn’tgivemeup.Shetriedherbesttocareforme.Shetriedherbesttoencourageme.Shetriedherbesttochangeme.Iwasmoved.Iworkedharder.MyEnglishhasimprovedalot.Workhardatschool.Itwasimportant.Irealizedit.Ithinkagoodteachershouldbringoutthebestinastudent,justlikeJean.Doyouagree?Pleasereplysoon.JackShesmilesalot.Tip1:Usevividwordsandphrases.用生动的词Shealwayswearsabright/big/…smileonherface.Shealwayswearsasmileonherface.Sheworkedharder.Sheworkedhardereven/muchharder.Sheisateacherwho/thatalwayswearsasmileonherface.Shealwayswearsasmileonherface.Englishusedtobehardforme.WhatshouldIdo?Idon’tknow….Workhardatschool!Itwasimportant.Irealizedit.PartsofBody:正文(节选)Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddo.Irealized(that)itwasimportanttoworkhardatschool.Tip2:Usecomplexsentences.(运用复合句）haveproblems/difficulties/trouble/ahardtimedoingsth.Doing/Todo…be+adj.forme.Itbe+adj.+forsb.todosth.findit+adj.+forsb.todosth.Englishusedtobehardforme.WhatshouldIdo?Idon’tknow.Idecidedtogiveitup.….PartsofBody:正文(节选)Tip3:Usedifferentexpressions.句子表达方式多样，不单一。….Shetriedherbesttocareforme.Shetriedherbesttoencourageme.Shetriedherbesttochangeme.Shewentoutofherwayto….Shemadegreateffortsto….….PartsofBody:正文(节选)Ifelthappy.HowhappyIfelt!YoucanneverimaginehowhappyIfelt!….SheistheteacherIwillneverforget.Sheteachesmemanythings.Sheisateacherwhoalwayswearsasmileonherface.Iwastooshytomakefriendswithothers.Ididn’tknowwhatIshoulddo.Shetaughtmetosmilemoreandenjoylife.Itriedandfoundmanyfriends.HowhappyIfelt!Sheisalsopatientandcaring.IusedtohaveproblemslearningEnglish.Idecidedtogiveitup.Shedidn’tgivemeup.Shetriedherbesttocareforme.Shewentoutofherwaytoencourageme.Shemadegreateffortstochangeme.Iwasmoved.Iworkedevenharder.MyEnglishhasimprovedalot.Irealizedhowimportantitwastoworkhardatschool!Ithinkagoodteachershouldbringoutthebestinastudent,justlikeJean.Doyouagree?Pleasereplysoon.Tip4:Uselinkingwordsproperly连接词使用恰当()Coherent(连贯的)?Coherent(连贯的)?写作当中句子和句子之间比较常用的连接词1.表示并列/递进关系：2.表示转折关系：3.表示因果关系：4.表示结果：5.其它常用连词：and,besides,what’smore,also,notonly…,butalso…,atthesametime,…but,however,…because,since,so,therefore,…asaresult,so…that…,…ofcourse,infact,actually,afterthat,fromthenon,…….SheistheteacherIwillneverforget.Sheteachesmemanythings.Sheisateacherwhoalwayswearsasmileonherface.Iwastooshytomakefriendswithothers.Ididn’tknowwhatIshoulddo.Shetaughtmetosmilemoreandenjoylife.Itriedandfoundmanyfriends.HowhappyIfelt!Sheisalsopatientandcaring.IusedtohaveproblemslearningEnglish.Idecidedtogiveitup.__,shedidn’tgivemeup.Shetriedherbesttocareforme,shewentoutofherwaytoencourageme.,shemadegreateffortstochangeme.IwasmovedIworkedevenharder.__________,myEnglishhasimprovedalot.Irealizedhowimportantitwastoworkhardatschool!Ithinkagoodteachershouldbringoutthebestinastudent,justlikeJean.Doyouagree?Pleasereplysoon.ButHoweverandsothatAsaresultso…that…;besides;a