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-1-SectionⅣ—Writing针对训练写作指导写作模板阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Jack,aclerkatthelocalbank,waswanderingaloneonthestreet.Itwasacold,silentwinternight.HismindwasonhiswifeLinda,whohadbeeninacaraccidenttwomonthsagoandwasnowlyinginahospitalbed,waitingformoremoneyforheroperation.Jackhadsoldeverythinghehad,andhehadtriedhisbesttoborrowmoneyfromallthepeopleandbankshecould.Buttherealworldiscruel.Alotofmoneywasstillneeded.ToJack,itwouldmeanagreatdealofsufferingtoseehiswifediewithoutanyhelp.“Ihaveonlyonechoiceleft,”Jacksaidtohimself.Thenhewenttothebank,hisworkplace,again.Forseveraldays,heobservedthebankandplannedatheft.针对训练写作指导写作模板Thenextday,hewenttoworkasusual.Everythingseemednormal:hejokedwithhisworkmatesandhelpedhisclientsashealwaysdid.Butnoonenoticedthathehadbroughtabiggersuitcasetowork,insteadofthesmallonehealwayscarried.At5:00pm,thebankclosed,andtheclerksandtheguardshadallgonehome.However,atthatmoment,Jackwasinthebathroom,andtheguardsdidn’tnoticehim,ofcourse.Whenthenoisescomingfromthestreetwerereplacedbysilenceandeverythingturneddark,Jackcameoutfromthebathroom.Hefirstcutthelinesofthealarmsandmonitorswithtoolsfromhisnewsuitcase.针对训练写作指导写作模板Hewasalltoofamiliarwiththeequipmentsincehehadbeenworkingtherefor8yearsandhadbeenstudyingthesecuritysystemforthepast30days.Usingaspecialkeyandsomeothertools,hetheneasilyopenedthedoorsofthesafes.Thebank’ssecuritysystemwasn’tverygood,whichallowedJacktotakealotofmoney.Severalminuteslater,Jackleftthebankwithaheavybagfilledwithmoney.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。针对训练写作指导写作模板Paragraph1:AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring.Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.针对训练写作指导写作模板1.理解全文,把握主线。本文为记叙文,文中的主要人物是Jack,围绕“Jack想偷银行的钱给妻子治病”展开。理清故事发展脉络,把握文章主线。2.分析关键词及段首提示,展开想象进行合理推测。文章最后一段提到,Jack带着一大箱子钱离开了银行;再根据续写第一段的提示内容可知,银行失窃,警报响起,续写第一段应该是写警察到了,开始调查这起离奇的银行失窃案,这里可能会描述大众以及银行职员对此事的反应;再根据续写第二段的提示内容可以推测,银行失窃,追查责任人,应该是银行经理负主要责任。再根据文章都是有教育意义的这个特点,第二段应该是写Jack用偷了的钱救了妻子,但是看到经理受过,良心受到折磨……针对训练写作指导写作模板3.逻辑推理,巧定结局。文章都是宣传正能量、具有教育意义的,所以故事的结局应该是Jack看到年老的经理代人受过,良心受到折磨而主动到警察局自首。针对训练写作指导写作模板Paragraph1:AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring.Thepolicearrivedatthebankveryquickly,1.(却发现)noonethere.Thenextdaywasareallyspecialdayforthetown,which2.(充满)newspaperandTVreporterscoveringthestrangetheft.Theclerksatthebank3.(忙着讨论)thecase,ofcourse,includingJack.Thepolicecouldonly4.(答应抓住小偷)assoonaspossible,eventhoughnoclueshadbeenfoundyet.onlytofindwasfilledwithwerebusydiscussingpromisetocatchthethieves针对训练写作指导写作模板Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.Heseemedtobe5.(唯一受责备的)andwasremovedfromhisposition.Atlast,withenoughmoneyforheroperation,Jack’swife6.(得救).However,Jack7.(对……感到有罪恶感)themanagerofthebank.Hecouldnotforgetwhathehaddonetotheoldman.Hisguiltdeepened8.(随着时间的流逝).Finally,heturnedhimselfintothepoliceand9.(接受惩罚).theonlypersontoblamewassavedfeltguiltyaboutastimewentbyacceptedhispunishment