第一节应用文写作专题五写作布局谋篇遣词造句实战演练四、建议信建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构,信的内容要包括写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。PART1布局谋篇具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等依次陈述建议,具体为:第一段:表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。第二段:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉,而不是提建议。第三段:对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌,使读者容易接受。注意事项:1.注意时态和人称的正确使用。2.注意论点和论据之间的衔接过渡。3.注意英文标点符号的正确使用和流利的书写。PART2遣词造句(一)一定要背下来的词汇1.mentionv.提到2.situationn.情况;形势3.furthermoreadv.此外4.meanwhileadv.同时5.discussionn.讨论6.proposaln.建议7.advisev.建议8.suggestv.建议9.wiseadj.明智的10.inmyopinion在我看来(二)一定要背下来的套用句型1.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto...andIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestions.你来信询问我关于……的意见,我会尽量提出一些有用的建议。2.I’vebeenthinkingaboutthequestionyouwroteintheletter.Inmyopinion,youshould...我一直在思考你来信中提到的问题。在我看来,你应该……3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto...,andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestionsforyou.就……一事你曾征询过我的意见,我会尽量给你提出一些有建设性的建议。4.Tosolvethisproblem,inmyopinion...为了解决这一问题,我的看法是……5.Astotheproblemyoumentionedinthelastletter,herearemysuggestions.至于你上次信中提到的问题,以下是我提供的建议。6.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif...我认为如果……,那将是有益的。7.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful.我希望你会觉得这些建议有用。PART3实战演练假定你是李华,你校交换生Betty下个月即将回国,但是她不知道该给家人带些什么礼物。请你用英语写一封信,给她提一些建议。主要内容包括:1.推荐几个具有中国特色的礼物;2.简要陈述推荐的理由。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。句式升级1.ItisknowntoallthatChinesesilkenjoysagoodreputationforitshighqualityandvariouscolorshomeandabroad.(用定语从句改写句子)_________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Inaddition,comparedwithotherthings,Chineseteaisanothergoodoptiontorecommend,makingyourmindrefreshedaftertastingit.(用定语从句改写句子)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asisknowntoall,Chinesesilkenjoysagoodreputationforitshighqualityandvariouscolorshomeandabroad.Inaddition,comparedwithotherthings,Chineseteaisanothergoodoptiontorecommend,whichmakesyourmindrefreshedaftertastingit.用恰当的过渡词和句式完成写作___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearBetty,ThemessageconcludedfromyouremailisthatyouwouldratherbringsomegiftswithtypicalanduniqueChinesefeaturesforyourfamilywhenheadinghomenextmonth.Therefore,Ideliverthisemailtoofferyousomeadvice.Asisknowntoall,Chinesesilkenjoysagoodreputationforitshighqualityandvariouscolorshomeandabroad,whichisworthbuying.Inaddition,comparedwithotherthings,Chineseteaisanothergoodoptiontorecommend,whichmakesyourmindrefreshedaftertastingit.Allinall,Isincerelyhopetoseethesurprisedandjoyfulexpressionsappearingonyourfamily’sfacesthemomenttheyunwrapthegifts.Yours,LiHua_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________