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话题写作（一）人物介绍【话题点睛】针对名人或周围熟悉的同学、朋友或家人进行描写。主要涉及人物的经历、变化或自己对该人物的看法等方面。Teenagers杂志邀请你参加他们组织的作文比赛,作文题目为“Mybestfriend”。请根据以下表格提示写一篇短文参赛。典例分析MaryAppearancetallandslim,prettyFacelongHairdarkbrown,shortEyesbig,brightNosesmallPersonalityhelpful,patient,hard-working…HobbiessinginganddancingWhatdoyouthinkofherandwhatcanyoulearnfromher?[要求]（1）短文须包含表格内的所有信息,可适当发挥以使文章通顺、连贯、完整;（2）词数:100左右。【思路点拨】1.找出关键点:主体部分是其外貌、性格特征、爱好;2.列出提纲:根据以上三个方面简单列出提纲;3.明确时态:主要使用一般现在时;4.确定人称:第三人称;5.重点词汇及句型:（1）tallandslim,bigandbright,liketwodiamonds,smallandshort,helpsb.withsth.,listentoothers'problemscarefully,offerthemsomeadvice,thetopstudent,takepartinafter-schoolactivities,such…that…（2）由连词and和but引导的并列句。【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句玛丽是我最好的朋友。她又高又瘦。（tallandslim）.→升格句（用who引导的定语从句表达）.2.基础句她的眼睛又大又亮。（bigandbright）.→升格句（加like比喻句）.Maryismybestfriend.Sheistallandslim.Maryismybestfriend.Sheisaprettygirlwhoistallandslim.Hereyesarebigandbright.Hereyesarebigandbright,liketwodiamonds.3.基础句她能认真聆听别人的问题。（listento）.→升格句（用offersomeadvice丰富句子）.4.基础句她是一个很好的朋友。我想和她成为永远的好朋友。（wantto）.→升格句（用such…that…改写句子）.Shecanlistentoothers'problemscarefully.Shecanlistentoothers'problemscarefullyandofferthemsomeadvice.Sheisagoodfriend,andIwanttobefriendswithherforever.SheissuchagoodfriendthatIwanttobefriendswithherforever.【连句成文】Maryismybestfriend.Sheisaprettygirlwhoistallandslim.Herfaceislongandshehasshortdarkbrownhair.Hereyesarebigandbright,liketwodiamonds,buthernoseissmall.Sheisahelpfulgirl.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.Sheisalsopatient.Shecanlistentoothers'problemscarefullyandofferthemsomeadvice.Sheworksveryhardandisthetopstudentinmyclass.Shelikessinginganddancing.Sheoftentakespartinafter-schoolactivities.SheissuchagoodfriendthatIwanttobefriendswithherforever.Iwanttobeapersonlikeher.【词汇集锦】1.年龄类—age;bebornon;one'sbirthdayis…;15yearsold;a15-year-oldboy…2.体貌类—身材:tall;short;beofmediumheight;fat;thin;slim;strong;weak…长相:beautiful;handsome;pretty;lovely;nice;cute;good-looking;ugly…头发:longhair;straighthair;curlyhair;blackhair;brownhair…面部:around/squareface;asweetface;abignose;twobrighteyes;smoothskin…拓展积累3.性格类—hard-working;helpful;clever;active;（im）patient;creative;confident;kind;（un）friendly;brave;outgoing;humorous;quiet;silent;serious;（im）polite;careful/careless;（dis）honest;shy;funny…4.兴趣类—habit;hobby;interest;（dis）like;hate;prefer;ratherthan;love;enjoy（doing）…;begoodat…【参考谚语】1.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。2.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者,事竟成。3.Allthingsintheirbeingaregoodforsomething.天生我材必有用。【亮点句型】人物外貌1.Myfavoriteteacherisa30-year-oldyoungladyofmediumheight,withbigeyesandlongstraighthair.2.Shewearsglassesandoftengetsdressedindifferentstylesofclothes.3.Shealwayswearsasmile.4.Shehasaroundfaceandoftenwearsapairofglasses.人物性格1.She'ssokindandfriendlythatshemakesfriendswitheachofherstudents.2.Thegirlsingsanddancessowellthatsheoftengivesperformancesattheschoolparty.3.Heoftenhelpshisclassmateswiththeirhomework,andalsohelpsthepeopleintrouble.4.Shegetsonwellwithherfriends.5.He'sveryoutgoingandbrave.其他经典表达1.Theherowonhighpraisefromthepublic.2.Ihopeshe'llfindwaystokeepusinterestedinEnglish.3.WhenwehaveproblemsinEnglish,wecanturntoher.4.Everyonehashisorherfavoriteteacheratschool,andsodoI.5.Inhersparetime,sheloveslisteningtomusic.A[2019·杭州]假定你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数80左右。实战演练…I'mreallylookingforwardtomeetingyourbrotherwhenhecomestoRomeinthesummer.Icanshowhimaroundthecity!Pleasetellmesomethingabouthim!Howoldishe?Whatdoeshelooklike?Whatkindofpersonisheandwhat'sheinterestedin?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Love,LindaDearLinda,Yours,LiPingOnepossibleversion:DearLinda,ThankyousomuchforagreeingtoshowmybrotheraroundRome.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutmybrother.Heisthirteenyearsold,easy-goingandhumorous—wegetalongreallywell.Helovesdifferentcultures.Heisinterestedinmuseumsandlikestryinglocalfood.Mybrotherisalsocute.He'sofmediumheightwithshortstraighthair.HeisgoodatChinesekungfu,andusuallywearsT-shirtsandjeans.Thanksagainforyourhelp.Yours,LiPingB[2019·台州]假如你是李华,一个英国游学团要来你们学校,学校需要一些志愿者,你想成为其中的一员。请读下面的招募启事,写一封应征邮件。VolunteersWantedSomestudentsfromtheUKwillcometoourschooltohaveastudytour.TheyareinterestedinChineseculture.We'relookingforsomevolunteerstohelpus.*Canyouintroduceyourself（Englishabilityandpersonality）?*CanyouplananactivityaboutChinesecultureandexplainyourpurpose?Ifyouareinterested,pleaseemailusatAndrew@163.com.[注意]（1）请回复招募启事中所提及的两个问题,可适当发挥;（2）应征邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;（3）词数:80—100;（4）邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearAndrew,I'mLiHua.Yours,LiHuaPossibleversion1:DearAndrew,I'mLiHua.I'mwritingtoaskforthepositionasastudentvolunteer.IlikeEnglishandI'mgoodatit.I'vewonthefirstprizeinourschoolEnglishspeechcontest.Asanoutgoingboy,Ialwaysgetalongwellwithmyclassmates.Ienjoycommunicatingwithpeople.Tohelpthemexperienceourtraditionalculture,I'llteachthemtomakedumplings.TheycanlearnhowtomakeChinesetraditionalfood.Thentheycaneatthedeliciousdumplingsmadebythemselves.I'msurethey'llhaveagoodtime.Ireallywanttogetthegreatchancetooffermyservice.I'llbethankfulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,L