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话题写作（五）日常生活【话题点睛】日常生活涉及的话题很广,你可以谈谈日常生活中的一些收获、困惑和感受。假如你是李华,上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹娜娜,请根据表格内容,写一篇短文,内容包括:周日一天你在家里照顾妹妹的活动及你的感受。典例分析LookingaftermysisterWhatIdidinthemorningtellstories…atnooncooknoodles…intheafternoonwatchcartoons…Myfeeling…[要求]（1）参考表格内容,可适当发挥;（2）语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;（3）文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）;（4）词数:不少于80词（开头已给出,但不计入总词数）。LastSunday,myparentswerenotathome,soIlookedafterNana,myyoungersister,whois5yearsold,athome.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是介绍上周日一天的活动以及感受。写作内容可以从以下几方面展开:（1）上周日我独自在家照看五岁的妹妹Nana;（2）周日上午、中午和下午各做了什么事情;（3）发表你的感受。2.确定时态:一般过去时3.确定人称:第一人称【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句我照顾娜娜。娜娜是我的妹妹。她五岁。.→升格句（用含同位语和非限定性定语从句的结构来表达）.2.基础句她喜欢午餐。我很高兴。（enjoy）.→升格句我很高兴她喜欢午餐。（begladthat）.IlookedafterNana.Nanaismyyoungersister.Sheisfiveyearsold.IlookedafterNana,myyoungersister,whoisfiveyearsold.Sheenjoyedthelunch.Iwasveryglad.Iwasverygladthatsheenjoyedthelunch.3.基础句在那之后,我们看动画片。（watchcartoons）.→升格句在那之后,我们看动画片直到我的父母回来。（until）.Afterthat,wewatchedcartoons.Afterthat,wewatchedcartoonsuntilmyparentscameback.【连句成文】LastSunday,myparentswerenotathome,soIlookedafterNana,myyoungersister,whois5yearsold,athome.Inthemorning,Itoldhermanyfunnystoriesfirst.Thenwesanganddancedhappilytogether.IalsotaughthertospeakafewsimpleEnglishwordsandshelearnedwell.Atnoon,Icookednoodleswithtomatoesandeggs.Shesaidtheyweredelicious.Iwasverygladthatsheenjoyedthelunch.Thenwehadarest.Intheafternoon,weplayedgamestogether.Afterthat,wewatchedcartoonsuntilmyparentscameback.Ifelttiredbuthappy.【参考谚语】1.Timeandtidewaitfornoman.岁月不待人。2.Neverdothingsbyhalves.做事不要半途而废。3.AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。4.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上无难事,只要肯攀登。5.Timeflies.时光易逝。拓展积累【亮点句型】日常活动及购物1.Wearehavingagoodtimehere.2.Iusuallywatchmoviesandplaygameswithmyfriends.3.Theyoftengobikeridingonweekends.4.Ioftenstayathometoreadandrelax.5.Iwouldliketobuyadressformymumbecauseshelikeswearingadress.体育锻炼1.Ioftenexerciseinthemorning.Itcanmakemehealthy,strongandfullofenergy.2.Weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsandcorrectbadonesinourlife.3.We'dbetternotspendtoomuchtimeonline.4.Theycaneasilybeshort-sightedafterplayingcomputergamesforalongtime.饮食健康1.Tokeepahealthylifestyle,weshouldgetawayfromjunkfood.2.Takemorefruitsandvegetableswhichcanprovidewhatweneed.3.Inaword,abalanceddietcanhelpmakeusstrongerandhealthier.生活感悟1.Youcanlearnalotfromyourexperiences.2.Asthesayinggoes,failureisthemotherofsuccess.3.Studyplaysanimportantroleintheirlife.4.Readingcanmakeourlifecolourful.5.Youshouldstudyhardatknowledge,payattentiontosocialnewsanddevelophobbies.A假如你是韩林,请你对你加拿大朋友Rick的邮件进行回复,词数80左右。实战演练To:HanLinFrom:RickHi,HanLin,Howareyou?ThesedaysIfeelboredabouttherulesinmyhouse.Whataboutyou?Couldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutyourfamilyrules?Whatdoyouthinkofthem?Andwhatareyourreasons?RickTo:RickFrom:HanLinHi,Rick,HanLinOnepossibleversion:Hi,Rick,I'mfinethesedays.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamilytoo.Forexample,Ihavetogetupat6o'clockandgotobedbefore10o'clock.Imustgobackhomeat6:30pm.Onschoolnights,hangingoutandsurfingtheInternetarenotallowed.ButIdon'tagreewithsomeruleswhicharetoostrict.BecausesometimessurfingtheInternetisgoodformystudyandIalsoneedtospendmoretimewithmyfriends.Bestwishes!HanLinB英语课上,你们开展了一次以“Whatcanwedotomakehomeahappierplace?”为主题的讨论,同学们把自己的想法写在卡片上。请结合卡片信息,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊EnglishLearning投稿。[注意]（1）短文必须包括卡片所给的信息,适当发挥,并谈谈自己的想法;（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息;（3）词数:80—100。短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。短文首句:InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecandotomakehomeahappierplace.Onepossibleversion:InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecandotomakehomeahappierplace.Weshareddifferentideas.Somesayit'sbettertospendmoretimewithfamily.Themorewegettogether,thebetterweunderstandeachother.Familymembersshouldsharehappinessandworries.Forexample,whentheyhaveproblems,weshouldtrytocheerthemup.Othersbelieveit'simportanttogivesmallpresentstoourfamilyontheirbirthdays.Ithink,showingloveforfamilyisnecessary.Ifwehelpwithhousework,theymayfeelwarmer.Sometimes,eventhesmallestthinglikewalkingwithfamilymakesthemhappier.Thoughwe'reyoung,wecandomuchtomakeahappierhome.