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话题写作（四）旅行交通【话题点睛】旅行交通包含两个方面的话题:旅行和交通。旅行话题通常涉及景点介绍、旅行计划、行程安排、游记等;交通话题通常涉及个人出行方式、各种交通方式的比较、交通安全、交通与环保的关系等。有的中考作文会同时涉及这两个话题。英语课上,老师组织了“Atriptothecountrysideortothecity”的话题讨论。请根据讨论结果写一篇英语短文,介绍两者的不同特点,并写出你的选择与理由。典例分析CountrysideCityrelaxing,freshair…noteasytotakepublictransportation…exciting…crowded,expensive…[注意]（1）短文必须包含记录表中的信息,并作适当发挥;（2）文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息;（3）词数:80—100,所给的文章开头仅供选择,不计入总词数。IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:文章主要围绕“Atriptothecountrysideortothecity”展开,介绍两者的不同特点,并写出你的选择与理由。表中要点已列出,具体如下:（1）开门见山:交代讨论的话题;（2）分开阐述:城市或农村各自的优缺点;（3）最后点题:权衡利弊,做出选择。2.确定时态:一般现在时【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句在英语课上,我们讨论了是去乡下还是城里进行一次旅行。（discuss）.→升格句（用含haveadiscussionon和thetopicof结构表达）.2.基础句这样的一次旅行可能花费很多。（such）.→升格句然而这样的一次旅行可能花费很多。（nevertheless不过）.IntheEnglishclass,wediscussedatriptothecountrysideortothecity.IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.Suchatripmightcostmuch.Nevertheless,suchatripmightcostmuch.3.基础句在那里,你将学到很多。（alot）.→升格句在那里,你将学到你从未想过的。（whatyouthinkof）.4.基础句我认为去乡下的旅行更好。（think）.→升格句（用含inone'sopinion的结构表达）.There,you'lllearnalot.There,you'lllearnwhatyou'veneverthoughtof.Ithinkatriptothecountrysideisbetter.Inmyopinion,atriptothecountrysideisbetter.【连句成文】IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.Takingatriptothecountrysidecanrelaxyoubyfishingorswimming.Andthefreshairmightbeyourfavourite.Yet,youmightnothavemanychoicesintransportation.Ofcourse,atriptothecityalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ifyoulikeshopping,it'sveryexcitingtotravelbackandforthinlargemalls.Youcanvisitmuseumstobroadenyourmind.Nevertheless,suchatripmightcostmuch.Andthetrafficjammightletyoudown.Ifyou'refromthecountryside,atriptothecityisbetter.There,you'lllearnwhatyou'veneverthoughtof.Inmyopinion,atriptothecountrysideisbetter.There,youcanlieunderthestars,enjoyingthequietnight.【相关短语】enjoythesunshine享受阳光;oneofthebiggestmountains最大的山之一;haveapicnic野餐;aseveryoneknows众所周知;befamousfor因……闻名;haveagoodtrip旅途愉快;havefundoingsth.做某事很开心;haveagoodtime玩得愉快拓展积累【参考谚语】1.Travelbroadensthemind.旅游开阔思维。2.Hewhotravelsfarknowsmore.远行者见识广。3.Readtenthousandbooksandtraveltenthousandmiles.读万卷书,行万里路。【亮点句型】旅途经历1.Yangzhoudishesmaybeoneofthereasonswhysomanypeopleareattractedbythecity.2.Whenwestayedthere,wegotlotsofhelpfromlocalpeople.Theywereveryfriendlytous.3.Onlyinthiswaycanyouenjoyyoursummerholidayhappily.4.ItissaidthatHawaiiismorebeautifulthananyotherplaceintheworld.旅途收获1.Travelingcannotonlyhelpusseethebestsightsbutalsobroadenoureyestotheoutsideworld.2.Travelingislikeastory.Wecanmakefriendswithothersandgethelpandlovefromothers.3.Travelingislikeawar.A[2019·湖州]5月18日是国际博物馆日,下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受,写一份报告,并在英语课上汇报。实战演练[注意]1.词数:80—100（短文首句已给出,不计入总词数）;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。Visitingmuseumshasbecomeoneofthemostpopularwaysforusstudentstospendoursparetime.Onepossibleversion:Visitingmuseumshasbecomeoneofthemostpopularwaysforusstudentstospendoursparetime.Accordingtothesurveymadeinourclass,almostallthestudentshavebeentomuseums,suchassciencemuseums,teamuseumsandfilmmuseums,etc.Amongthem,thesciencemuseumisourfavorite.I'vebeentoHuzhouScienceMuseumandLuYuTeaMuseum.Iliketheteamuseumverymuch,becauseIcanlearnaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofteaandwatchtheteaartperformancesthereaswell.WhatI'minterestedinmostistheshowofbeautifulteasets,whichhasleftadeepimpressiononme.Museumsmakeitpossibleforusstudentstolearnknowledgeandexperienceculturesatthesametime.Whynotvisitmore?B[2019·淄博]假定你是李明,你的英国朋友约翰想了解你参加社会实践活动或研学旅行方面的情况。请用英文给他写一封100词左右的电子邮件,介绍一次你参加的这样的活动。要点如下:1.你参加了什么活动;2.你做了什么;3.你学到了什么。[注意]1.书写规范,表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名;3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJohn,Thanksforyourlaste-mail.Yours,LiMingOnepossibleversion:DearJohn,Thanksforyourlaste-mail.NowI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutatripcalled“BeaKidintheMountains”Ihadlastsummer.Aftertheend-of-termexamination,MrLi,ourheadteacher,tookustojoininatripcalled“BeaKidintheMountains”.Westayedinamountainforfivedays.Inthedaytime,wecouldgohikinganddosometeamwork.Intheevening,wecoulddosuchactivitiesaspopulargamesandgroupdancearoundthefire.Itwassuchanunusualexperiencethatweforgotaboutcomputers,homeworkandevenourparents.Fromthetrip,Ilearnedhowtoteamwithothersandwecouldachievewhatwewantbyourselves.Whatdoyouthinkofmytrip?Pleasewritetomeandsharesomethingunforgettablewithme!Yours,LiMing