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话题写作（三）校园生活【话题点睛】该话题主要包括学生在学校的生活和学习情况。涉及的要点:（1）学校一天的学习时间安排;（2）学习过程中遇到的学习问题、交友问题;（3）国内外校园生活的异同;校园活动、事件等;（4）校园生活中的一些学习或生活规则,如带手机问题和穿校服问题等。你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。典例分析Ben'sproblemsYouradviceReasonsfewfriends,lonely1.joinclubsmakefriends2.……It'sdifficulttorememberEnglishwords.1.readmoreEnglishstoriesandnewslearninapracticalway（在运用中学习）2.…[注意]（1）回信应包括所有要点;（2）词数:80左右（信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数）;（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。DearBen,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublegettingusedtolifeinmiddleschool.InyourletteryousaidthatGoodluckwitheverything!LiHua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题要求就Ben在交友和学习中遇到的问题给予建议,主要从以下两个方面展开:（1）朋友少,感觉孤单:参加学校社团,结识更多朋友;（2）英语单词难记:多阅读英语故事、新闻,在运用中学单词。2.确定时态:一般现在时。3.主要句式:提建议的句式,如:Youshould…;Youcan…;It'sagoodideato…等。【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句我很遗憾听说你不习惯中学生活。（getusedto）.→升格句我很遗憾听说你在习惯中学生活上有困难。（havetroubledoingsth.）.2.基础句你可以加入你学校的一些俱乐部。（can）.→升格句加入你学校的一些俱乐部是个好的选择。（agoodchoiceto…）.Iamsorrytohearthatyoudon'tgetusedtolifeinmiddleschool.Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroublegettingusedtolifeinmiddleschool.Youcanjoinsomeclubsinyourschool.Itisagoodchoicetojoinsomeclubsinyourschool.3.基础句用这种方式,你可以交更多的朋友。（makefriends）.→升格句（用定语从句修饰friends）.4.基础句要对他人友好。（befriendlyto）.→升格句此外,你最好对他人友好。（hadbetterdosth.）.Inthisway,youcanmakemorefriends.Inthisway,youcanmakemorefriendswhosharethesameinterestwithyou.Befriendlytoothers.Besides,you'dbetterbefriendlytoothers.5.基础句你发现记住英语单词很难。（itdifficult）.→升格句（用ontheotherhand结构表达）.YoufounditdifficulttorememberEnglishwords.Ontheotherhand,youfounditdifficulttorememberEnglishwords.【连句成文】DearBen,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublegettingusedtolifeinmiddleschool.Inyourletter,yousaidthatyoualwaysfeltlonelybecauseyouhadfewfriends.Ithinkitisagoodchoicetojoinsomeclubsinyourschool.Inthisway,youcanmakemorefriendswhosharethesameinterestwithyou.Besides,you'dbetterbefriendlytoothers.Smileatothersandyouaresuretogetasmileinreturn.Ontheotherhand,youfounditdifficulttorememberEnglishwords.ReadingmoreEnglishstoriesandnewscanhelpyoulearnEnglishwordsinapracticalway.Inaddition,ifyoucandevelopahabitofkeepinganEnglishdiaryeveryday,itwillbeeasierforyoutoremembermorewords.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful.Goodluckwitheverything!LiHua【相关短语】withone'shelp在某人的帮助下;begoodat擅长;eachother相互,彼此;makesb.dosth.使某人做某事;continuedoingsth.继续做某事;makeprogress取得进步;littlebylittle渐渐地;keepdoingsth.坚持做某事;juniorhighschool初中;what'smore而且;befullof充满;getonwellwithsb.与某人相处融洽;thanksto多亏,由于;seniorhighschool高中拓展积累【参考谚语】1.Wastingtimeisrobbingoneself.浪费时间就是掠夺自己。2.Ayoungidler,anoldbeggar.少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。3.Custommakesallthingseasy.习惯成自然。【亮点句型】校园课程1.WehaveChineseateighto'clockandscienceatfivetonine.2.OnTuesday,wehaveartandhistory,butwedon'thavemaths.同学交往1.Theygototheplaygroundandplayfootball,butIdon'tlikefootball.2.Youarenotthesameasyouweretenyearsago,andyourfriendisn'tthesame,either.师生交往1.ThankstomyPEteacher,lastmonthIpassedtherunningtestsuccessfully!2.MyPEteacheradvisedmetowalkfirstandthentryrunning.校园生活和活动1.Wearegraduatingfromourschoolsoon.2.Threeyearsago,Iwasanewstudentinourclass.3.Atthemomentoflookingbackatthethreeyears,manywordshavecometomymind.A[2019·德州]假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生,你的学校正在参加全市文明校园的评选。以下内容是学校根据《山东省中小学文明校园评比细则》列举的部分信息。请你根据表格内容,写一篇短文,向社会宣传自己的学校,并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事,为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。实战演练1.Teachers'team（师资）①experiencedteachershelpusmakeprogress②friendlyhead-teachersgrowasaperson2.Schoolfacilities（设施）①abiglibraryreadbookstolearnmore②aplaygrounddosports③somesciencelabsfindsomethingnew3.Schoolenvironment（环境）①differentkindsoftreesandflowersbecleanandbeautiful②safetyeducationclassesprotectourselves4.?……[要求]1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;3.词数:80—100,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。I'mfromNo.3MiddleSchool.Myschoolismakingitsefforttobeacivilizedschool.Letmeintroduceit.Therearemanyexperiencedteachersinmyschool.Theyhelpusmakeprogressinmanyways.Let'stryourbesttomakeourschoolmorebeautifulandmakeitacivilizedschool.Onepossibleversion:I'mfromNo.3MiddleSchool.Myschoolismakingitsefforttobeacivilizedschool.Letmeintroduceit.Therearemanyexperiencedteachersinmyschool.Theyhelpusmakeprogressinmanyways.Ourfriendlyheadteachersoftencommunicatewithourparentsandteachustogrowasaperson.Abiglibrarystandsinthecenterofmyschool.Itholdsalargenumberofbooks.Wecanenjoybookshereandlearnmoreabouttheworld.Aplaygroundandsomesciencelabsareinmyschool.Wecandosportsandfindsomethingnewafterschool.Ithelpsuskeepfitandhaveacolorfullife.50%ofourschooliscoveredwithplants.Therearedifferentkindsoftreesandflowers.Itiscleanandbeautiful.Weoftenhavesafetyeducationclasses.Wecanlearnhowtoprotectourselves.Asstudents,wemustrespectourteachersandbepolitetoothers.Let'stryourbesttomakeourschoolmorebeautifulandmakeitacivilizedschool.B[2019·乐山]为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品,政府出台了陪餐制,要求从4月1日起,学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。1.学生吃得健康、安全;2.及时发现就餐问题;3.食堂提供食品多样;4.父母更加放心。[注意]1.词数:80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。[参考词汇]规定regulation（n.）;食堂cafeteria（n.）;营养的nutritious（adj.）AnewfoodsafetyregulationwasputintouseonApril1toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolleaderstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias.