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话题写作（八）学习提高【话题点睛】针对的话题主要关于课堂学习方式与方法、课堂学习情况的评价、课外学习与提升等方面。主要涉及描述学校学习情况、帮助同学解决学习问题、通过阅读或其他方式进行自我提升等方面。请以“Let'sReadMore!”为题,参照下表写一篇短文。内容包括:阅读的重要性、阅读的好处、阻碍阅读的原因以及在阅读方面的建议。典例分析Let'sReadMore!TheimportanceofreadingGetknowledge…TheadvantagesofreadingOpenoureyes;…Thereasonswhyyoureadlessmanyactivitiestakeupmuchtime,suchus…Suggestionsonreading…[写作要求]（1）表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;（2）所写内容必须包括图表中所提供的信息,并适当发挥;（3）词数:不少于80（开头已给出,不计入总词数）;（4）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。[参考词汇]getknowledge,makeuscleverandhappy,encourage…toLet'sReadMore!Readingisveryimportantinourdailylives.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是号召大家阅读,结合参考词汇,写作内容可以从以下几方面展开:（1）开门见山,指出阅读的重要性,号召多读书;（2）具体阐述阅读在学习和生活方面给我们带来的好处;（3）拓展造成阅读少的原因,并提出克服的建议。2.确定时态:一般现在时3.确定人称:第一人称【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句它能帮助我们开阔眼界并使我们聪明和快乐。（and）.→升格句（使用notonly…butalso…结构表达）.2.基础句如果我们读更多的书,我们的学习能得到更好的提高。（improve）.→升格句（使用被动结构表达）.Itcanhelpusopenoureyesandmakeuscleverandhappy.Itcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsomakeuscleverandhappy.Ifwereadmorebooks,wecanimproveourstudybetter.Ourstudycanbeimprovedbetterifwereadmorebooks./Ifwereadmorebooks,ourstudycanbeimprovedbetter.3.基础句真可惜。（apity）.→升格句（使用感叹句表达）.4.基础句每个人应该读一些好书。（should）.→升格句因此我想建议每个人读一些好书。（wouldliketosuggest）.It'sapity.Whatapityitis!Everyoneshouldreadsomegoodbooks.SoI'dliketosuggesteveryonereadsomegoodbooks.【连句成文】Let'sReadMore!Readingisveryimportantinourdailylives.Wecangetknowledgebyreadingalotofgoodbooks.Itcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsomakeuscleverandhappy.Ourstudycanbeimprovedifwereadmorebooks.Readingalsohelpsusgrowupbetter.However,manyactivitiestakeupmuchofourreadingtime,suchaslisteningtomusic,watchingTVandsurfingtheInternet.Whatapity!SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldreadsomegoodbooks.Theywillbeveryhelpfultous!Let'sstartreadingnow!【相关短语】behelpfulto有助于;asmuchaspossible尽可能多地;beafraidof害怕;makemistakes犯错误;makegooduseof充分利用;openone'seyes开阔眼界;haveachancetodosth.有机会做某事;tryone'sbesttodosth.尽某人最大努力做某事拓展积累【参考谚语】1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。2.Nopain,nogain.没有付出就没有收获。3.Geniusisnothingbutlaboranddiligence.天才不过是勤奋而已。4.Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。5.Itisnevertoooldtolearn.活到老,学到老。【亮点句型】学习方法1.Wecangetknowledgebyreadingalotofgoodbooks.2.I'mwritingtoofferyousomeadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.3.ItishelpfultoreadsomegoodChinesenewspapersandmagazines.4.TrytospeakChineseasmuchaspossibleanddon'tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.5.We'dbettermakegooduseoftime.学习体验1.Itcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsomakeuscleverandhappy.2.Readingalsohelpsusgrowupbetter.3.Inthiswayyourreadingabilitycanbeimproved.4.Themoreyouspeak,thebetteryourspokenChinesewillbe.5.Notonlycantheyhelpdevelopourabilityofstudyingindependently,butalsowecanhavemorechancestoshowourselves.A5月7日就要参加体育学科中考了,你一定有好多话要说。无论成绩怎样,我们的身体都得到了锻炼,意志品质也得到了提升。某英文网站正在开展以“我与体育测试”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈平时你是怎么加强锻炼的,以及这样做的意义。实战演练[提示词语]PEExamination,encourage,practise,goodfor[提示问题]·Whatdoyoudoinyourdailylife?·Whydoyoudoso?[要求]（1）根据中文和英文提示,写一篇110词左右的英语短文。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;（2）所给提示词语仅供选用;（3）请不要写出你的校名和姓名。ThePEExaminationiscominginMay.Onepossibleversion:ThePEExaminationiscominginMay.IamtryingmybesttopractisesothatIcangetasatisfyingresult.AlthoughIrealizeitwon'tbeeasy,thereisnodoubtwherethereisawill,thereisaway.Ipractisedoingexercisehardinmydailylife.Tobeginwith,Imakeupmymindtocatchupwithmyclassmates.What'smore,Itrymybesttokeeprunningeverydayandpractiseplayingvolleyball.Myteachersandclassmatesencourageandsupportmeallthetime.Tobehonest,Itrymybesttopractise,notonlybecauseIcanpasstheexam,butalsoIwanttobestrong.B“书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟”。成功不会从天而降,美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英文写一篇短文投稿,讲述你通过勤奋取得进步甚至成功的经历,并谈谈你的感受。[提示词语]diligence（勤奋）,makeprogress,effort,proud[提示问题]•Whatdidyouachievebyworkinghard?•Whatdidyoudotomakeit?•Howdidyoufeelaboutit?Diligenceisamustforustoreachourgoals.Onepossibleversion:Diligenceisamustforustoreachourgoals.IneverrealizedituntilItriedeveryefforttowintheEnglishspeechcompetitionlastyear.ItwasquiteabigchallengeformebecauseIwasnotthatconfidentaboutmyoralEnglishandIwasshytospeakinpublic.Togiveabetterperformance,Imadefulluseofmysparetimetoprepareforit.Irecordedmylinesandaskedmyforeignteachertocorrectmypronunciation.ThenIkeptpractisingdayandnight.Besides,Iseizedeverychancetospeakinfrontofmyfamilyorfriends.ThemoreIpractised,themoreconfidentIbecame.Intheend,Iwonthecompetitionandgotaprize.Itwassogreatthatallmyeffortspaidoff.Ifeltsoproudofmyself.