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话题写作（一）健康生活【话题点睛】针对的话题主要是体育锻炼和健康饮食。体育锻炼主要涉及:开展体育锻炼的方式;鼓励多进行体育运动,强身健体等。健康饮食主要涉及:远离垃圾食品,健康饮食的好处及具体做法等。【参考谚语】1.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。2.Thefirstwealthishealth.健康是人生第一财富。3.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果,医生远离我。常用表达【相关短语】saynotojunkfood拒绝垃圾食品;getawayfromjunkfood远离垃圾食品;keepahealthylifestyle保持健康的生活方式;takeanactivepartinP.E.积极上体育课;developgoodhabits养成良好的习惯;stayuptoolate熬夜到很晚【亮点句型】体育锻炼和饮食健康1.Intheschool,ItakeanactivepartinP.E.2.Ilikesports,whichmakemehealthy,strongandfullofenergy.3.Weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsandcorrectbadonesinourlife.4.Tokeepahealthylifestyle,weshouldgetawayfromjunkfood.5.Inaword,abalanceddietcanhelpmakeusstrongerandhealthier.“民以食为天”,饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“SayNotoJunkFood”为题,根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。[写作要点](1)垃圾食品尽管美味,但对健康无益,而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾;(2)远离垃圾食品,还应选择正确的生活方式,如①三餐要有规律,少吃零食、快餐;②多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物,以提供身体必需营养;③多参加户外活动……典例分析[写作要求](1)词数:80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2)内容必须包括上述所有要点,可适当进行发挥。[参考词汇]过多包装overpackaging;有规律地regularly;营养nutritionSayNotoJunkFoodNowadays,moreandmoreattentionhasbeenpaidtofoodsafetyandhealth.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldsaynotojunkfood.Inaword,ahealthydietwithlessjunkfoodcanhelpmakeusstrongerandstronger.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是号召大家健康饮食,少吃垃圾食品。写作内容可以从以下几方面展开:(1)垃圾食品虽美味,但既不健康,又不环保;(2)倡导健康的生活方式,如按时吃三餐,多吃水果、蔬菜,多做户外运动等;(3)总结概括健康的生活方式给我们带来的好处。2.确定时态:一般现在时3.确定人称:第一人称/第二人称【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】SayNotoJunkFoodNowadays,moreandmoreattentionhasbeenpaidtofoodsafetyandhealth.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldsaynotojunkfood.Thereisnodoubtthatjunkfoodismadedeliciousandattractive,butitsurelydoesharmtoourbody.Meanwhile,theoverpackagingleadstomuchmorerubbish.Togetawayfromjunkfood,weshouldfocusonhowtokeepahealthylifestyle.Therearemanytipstofollow.First,eatregularly—threemealsadayontime.Tryasfewsnacksandfastfoodaspossible.Second,havemorefruitandvegetableswhichcanprovidethenutritionweneed.What'smore,domoreoutdooractivities.Aslongasyouarebusywithsomethinginteresting,youwillmoreprobablygetawayfromjunkfood.Inaword,ahealthydietwithlessjunkfoodcanhelpmakeusstrongerandstronger.【名师点评】1.从垃圾食品的特点谈起,美味但不健康,进而过渡到主题:远离垃圾食品。2.正文部分从三个方面进行论证,结合了参考词汇,并适当拓展。3.句式多样化,并巧妙运用连词。Thereisnodoubtthat…句型、同位语从句、不定式作目的状语、which引导的定语从句、aslongas引导的条件状语从句等使文章生动。meanwhile,first,second,what'smore,inaword这些连词(短语)使文章衔接自然。一日之计在于晨。同学们,沐浴在晨光中,行走在上学路上,当我们有充足的时间安排一天的学习生活时,你会发现每天早起一点点会给我们带来许多好处。请你根据图示,以“It'sgoodtogetupearly”为题,写一篇短文。[写作要求](1)短文需包含所有提示要点,并适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;(3)词数:80-100。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。实战演练It'sgoodtogetupearlyGettingupearlyisagoodhabit.It'sgoodforusinmanyways._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:It'sgoodtogetupearlyGettingupearlyisagoodhabit.It'sgoodforusinmanyways.Firstly,wecanhaveenoughtimetoplanadaybetter.Secondly,doingexerciseisgoodforourhealth.Also,breathingthefreshairisgoodforourbodiesandourmoods.Acheeringmoodmaybringusgoodluck,anditcanhelprememberimportantthingseasily.Thirdly,havingbreakfastcanhelpprotectourstomachs,makeushavegoodmoods,andhavemoreenergytodoallkindsofthingsbetter.Finally,ourmemoriesareclearinthemorning.Makefulluseofit,andthenwecangetmore.Inaword,themorningisthekeyofaday.Everyoneshouldgetupearlyeveryday.