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话题写作（四）假日旅行【话题点睛】针对的话题主要涉及节日习俗、节假日活动、旅游日记、旅游路线等。【参考谚语】1.Travelbroadensthemind.旅游开阔思维。2.Hewhotravelsfarknowsmore.远行者见识广。3.Readtenthousandbooksandtraveltenthousandmiles.读万卷书,行万里路。常用表达【相关短语】enjoythesunshine享受阳光;oneofthebiggestmountains最大的山脉之一;haveapicnic野餐;aseveryoneknows众所周知;befamousfor因……闻名;haveagoodtrip旅途愉快;havefundoingsth做某事很有趣;haveagoodtime玩得愉快【亮点句型】旅途经历1.Yangzhoudishesmaybeoneofthereasonswhysomanypeopleareattractedbythecity.2.Whenwestayedthere,wegotlotsofhelpfromlocalpeople.Theywereveryfriendlytous.3.Onlyinthiswaycanyouenjoyyoursummerholidayhappily.4.ItissaidthatHawaiiismorebeautifulthananyotherplaceintheworld.5.Thesubwayisoneofthemostconvenientwaystotravelinthiscity.旅途收获1.Travelingcannotonlyhelpusseethebestsightsbutalsobroadenoureyestotheoutsideworld.2.Travelingislikeastory.Wecanmakefriendswithothersandgethelpandlovefromothers.3.Travelingislikeawar.去年暑假你是在哪里度过的呢?是外出度假还是待在家里?都做了些什么呢?请以“MyLastSummerVacation”为题写一篇短文,描述你去年的暑假生活,80-100词。[要求](1)条理清晰,语言流畅,语法正确,内容充实;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。典例分析【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:短文内容应围绕时间、地点、人物展开,还要兼顾当地的天气、风土人情,以及旅行后你的见闻感受等,具体如下:(1)开门见山:交代地点和人物;(2)介绍旅游地的天气以及具体的活动;(3)扣题:表达感受,去年暑假玩得十分开心。2.确定时态:一般过去时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】MyLastSummerVacationLastsummervacationIwenttoTaiwanwithmyparents.Taiwanisreallybeautiful.Theweathertherewasgood.ItisalwayswarmandhumidbecausetheseaisaroundTaiwan.Inthenorth,it'scoldinwinter,butinthesouth,itisstillwarminwinterandyoucanenjoythesunshineeveryday.ThetyphoonseasonisfromJunetoOctober.TherearemanymountainsinTaiwan.AliMountainisoneofthebiggestmountainsthere.WewenttoclimbAliMountainoneafternoon.Thereweremanytreesintheforestthere.Theywereverytallandmanyofthemwerereallyold.Ihadgreatfuninmylastsummervacation.【名师点评】1.文章分为三个部分:开头——正文——结尾。结构合理,要点全面。2.正文部分全面介绍了台湾的气候及作者和家人的一些活动,描写全面、详细。3.句式多样化,并巧妙运用连词。because引导的原因状语从句,therebe句型等,使文章流畅自然。假如你是莉莉,你的英国笔友戴尔给你发了一封电子邮件,告诉你他想在今年暑假进行一次中国之旅,但是他对中国不是很了解。请你根据下面的图示,给他回复一封电子邮件,至少选择三个方面给他的旅行提出建议,帮助他度过一个愉快的假期吧!实战演练[要求](1)语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;(3)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearDale,Thanksforyourlastemail.I'mveryhappytoknowyouarecomingtoChinaforthesummervacation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LilyOnepossibleversion:DearDale,Thanksforyourlastemail.I'mveryhappytoknowyouarecomingtoChinaforthesummervacation.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutChina.First,therearemanykindsofdeliciousfoodandfamousplacesinChina.Whenyoucome,you'dbettertastethem.Youcantakeacamerawithyouandtakephotosofthefamousplaces.Then,Chinesepeoplearefriendly.Whentheymeet,theyusuallyshakehands.SoyoucanshakehandswhenyoumeetChinesepeople.Next,wespeakChineseinChina.Soifyoucan'tunderstandwhatwesay,youcanasktheguidesforhelp.Finally,itisveryconvenienttotravelinChina.Butifyouwanttotakeatrainoraplane,you'dbetterbookaticketinadvance.IhopeyouwillhaveagoodtimeinChina.Yours,Lily