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话题写作（三）安全问题【话题点睛】该话题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等,常以要点提示的方式来考查。【参考谚语】1.Cautionistheparentofsafety.小心驶得万年船。2.Safetyisacommodity.安全就是商品。3.Safetyfirst.安全第一。常用表达【相关短语】callthepolice报警;askteachersforhelp向老师求助;goupstairs/downstairs上/下楼;withoutpermission未经许可;keepawayfrom远离……;howtoprotectourselves如何保护我们自己;followtheschoolrules遵守校规;obeythetrafficrules遵守交通规则;bestrictwith对……要求严格【亮点句型】安全与自我保护1.Ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceoraskteachersforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.2.Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskills,especiallyforteenagers.3.It'sdangeroustoswimintheriveralone,sodon'tgototheriverwithoutpermission.4.Allinall,weneedtolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.安全规则及建议1.Weshouldn'tcrowdorpusheachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschool.2.Tobesafer,weshouldkeepawayfromtheInternetbar,andgotoschoolandgobackhomeontime.3.Whenfacinganaccident,thefirstandmostimportantruleistostaycalm.4.Friendscanmakeourlifecolorful,butwemustbecarefultomakefriends,especiallyonline.树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课,下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生,写一篇文章,内容包括:①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。典例分析ImproveChildSelf-protectionMakechildrengrowhealthily1.Abouttrafficrulesruntheredlight×crossthezebrawalk(斑马线)√2.Aboutfoodeatfruitandvegetables√eatfastfood×3.Aboutmakingfriendsmeetstrangersalone×helpeachother√?[要求](1)语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;(3)词数:80-100,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.ButhowdoIprotectmyselfandgrowuphealthily?Nowletmesharemyexperienceandideaswithyou.First,Ialwaysobeythetrafficrules______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是如何践行《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》内容。写作内容可从以下几个方面展开:交通安全、食品安全及交友安全等。2.确定人称:写作时以第一人称为主,偶尔涉及第三人称。3.确定时态:介绍如何践行手册内容,通常用一般现在时,偶尔涉及将来时。【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.ButhowdoIprotectmyselfandgrowuphealthily?Nowletmesharemyexperienceandideaswithyou.First,IalwaysobeythetrafficrulesandIneverruntheredlight.Whenthetrafficlightisred,Iwon'tgountilitturnsgreen.Ialwayscrossthezebrawalkbecauseit'ssafe.Second,Iofteneathealthilyandsafely.It'simportanttoeatmorefruitandvegetables.Eatingtoomuchfastfoodwilldoharmtomybody.Third,Inevermeetstrangersalone,especiallyfriendswhoImakeontheInternet.Atthesametimeifwearetruefriends,weshouldhelpeachother.What'smore,I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Nowsummeriscoming.It'sdangerousforustoswimalone,especiallyindeeplakesorrivers.Sodon'tdothat.Inshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.【名师点评】1.文章根据要点提示,逐一地阐述了如何保护自己,远离危险,并做到了内容的适当展开,详略得当。2.本文结构合理,思路清晰,值得我们学习。开头:引出话题。正文:提出自我保护的方法。结尾:总结提醒。全文句式多样化,简单句和复合句相结合使用,使文章错落有致,给人良好的阅读体验。A[2019·建湖二模]随着汽车数量的增加,道路安全问题变得越来越重要。假定你是李华,是校学生会主席,请你根据下面的写作提示,给校报的英语专栏写一篇英语稿件。[写作提示]实战演练[注意](1)可适当加入细节,使行文连贯;(2)词数:100左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(3)不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。Dearboysandgirls,IamLiHua,chairmanoftheStudents'Union.I'dliketocallyourattentionto___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:Dearboysandgirls,IamLiHua,chairmanoftheStudents'Union.I'dliketocallyourattentiontotheimportanceofobeyingthetrafficrules.Nowadays,withthenumberofvehiclesincreasingontheroad,trafficproblemshavebecomepartofourlife.Somepeopleruntheredlightatthecrossingandothersridetheirbikesontheroadway.Somedriversdrivetoofastinthestreet.Allthebehaviorpresentspotentialdanger.Ifwedon'tobeythetrafficrules,theremightbemoretrafficjamsandaccidents.Tokeepthetrafficsmooth,Isuggestallthestudentsshouldobeythetrafficruleswhenwalkinginthestreettomakesurewearesafeandavoidtrouble.Also,Ithinkit'snecessarytolaystressonthetrafficsafetyeducation.Let'stakeresponsibilityforourselvesandothers.Let'stakeactionnow!Yours,LiHuaB[2019·河池改编]“人生没有彩排,生命没有重来”,你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以“Keepawayfromthedanger!”为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是李华,大家推选你参加这次比赛。请根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。[写作提示][要求](1)所有的提示词都须用上,包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;(2)演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;(3)词数:100左右(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。Keepawayfromthedanger!Hello,everyone!I'mLiHua.Thedangerisaroundus.Sowemustlearnhowtokeepawayfromthedanger.First,wemustn'tgoswimmingwithoutourparents'orteachers'permission.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,wemusttryourbesttokeepawayfromthedanger!That'sall.Thankyouforlistening!Onepossibleversion:Keepawayfromthedanger!Hello,everyone!I'mLiHua.Thedangerisaroundus.Sowemustlearnhowtokeepawayfromthedanger.First,wemustn'tgoswimmingwithoutourparents'orteachers'permission.Ifwego,wehavetowearlifejackets.Ontheway,wehavetowalkonthepavement.Wecan'tplaywithourmobilephoneswhenwecrossthestreet.Abou