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话题写作（六）情感表达【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。【参考谚语】1.Asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑,十年少。2.Joyandsorrowarenext-doorneighbors.悲喜常相伴。3.Laughteristhebestmedicine.笑是最好的药。4.Worrykillsmorementhanwork.忧虑比劳累更伤人。常用表达【相关短语】thanksfor…因……感谢……;makenewfriends结交新朋友;lookafter/takecareof照顾;keepintouch保持联系;befriendlyto对……友好;bringback带回【亮点句型】对学校的感受1.I'dliketothankyouforgivingmeunselfishloveandhelp.2.Youalwaysencouragedmetostudyharder.3.Althoughyouwereverystrictwithme,Iunderstoodwhatyousaidintheend.4.I'msothankfultoyouforyourkindhelpthatI'llworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.对家庭的感受1.I'dliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.2.I'msuremyparentswillgetonwitheachothersoon.3.Weshouldhavegoodhabitsandtryourbesttotakeexerciseeveryday.4.I'llspendmoretimestayingandcommunicatingwithyou.5.WhenIfailedanexamandfeltstressed,youweretheonetoencourageme.6.Ibelieveifwedoso,wecanhaveahappylife.假如你是李华,初中生活即将结束,在步入高中学校学习之际,你思绪万千。请你根据下面表格的提示,写一封信表达你对父母的由衷感激及今后的点滴回报。[提示]典例分析父母为我生活的照顾饮食起居精神的支持交友、学习、压力我为父母感恩、陪伴、理解父母[注意](1)内容必须包含表格中所提供的所有信息,可适当发挥;(2)词数:80-100(开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数);(3)文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学校的名称。DearMom/Dad,Myjuniorschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Now,I'dliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourslove,LiHua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是表达你对父母的由衷感激及今后的点滴回报,结合提示写即可,注意真实情感的表达,可从以下方面展开:(1)父母为我的付出,如照顾我、陪伴我、鼓励我等;(2)我对父母的回报,如陪伴、沟通、理解。2.确定时态:一般过去时(谈论父母对我的付出)和一般将来时(谈论我对父母的回报)。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】DearMom/Dad,Myjuniorschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Now,I'dliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.SinceIwasborn,youhavebeentakinggoodcareofme.Everyday,youwerethefirsttogetupandpreparebreakfastforme.Onmywaytoandfromschool,youwerealwayswithme.WhenIfailedanexamandfeltstressed,youweretheonetoencourageme.WhenIdidn'tgetalongwithmyfriends,youtoldmetolearntobecaring.Now,Ihavegrownup.I'llspendmoretimestayingandcommunicatingwithyou.AndI'lltrymybesttounderstandyouanddowhatIcanforyou.Yourslove,LiHua【名师点评】1.本文表达了对父母的感恩之情,处处流露着真情实感。一方面体现了父母的无私付出,另一方面体现了子女对父母的感恩回报。2.文章较多地运用了时间状语从句,在短语上的运用也很到位,如takecareof,prepare…for…,onone'swayto,failanexam,feelstressed,getalongwith等。如今多数中学生缺乏感恩之心,不知道如何感恩,对待家人、老师、朋友等很冷漠,行为方式和价值观令人担忧。作为一名中学生,请你根据下图中所提供的信息以“LearntoExpressThanks”为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿。实战演练[要求](1)演讲稿应该包括图中的所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(2)词数:80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(3)不能出现真实的人名和地名。LearntoExpressThanksGoodmorning,boysandgirls!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“LearntoExpressThanks”.Wefindmostmiddleschoolstudents_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:LearntoExpressThanksGoodmorning,boysandgirls!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“LearntoExpressThanks”.Wefindmostmiddleschoolstudentsdon'tshowanysenseofthanks.Theytakeeatingwellandwearingfashionableclothesforgranted.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldlearntoexpressthanks.Weshouldthankourparentsforsupportingustogotoschool.Andweshouldexpressthankstoourhard-workingteacherswhoteachusmuchknowledge.Besides,weshouldthankourfriendsbecausetheyalwaysgiveusencouragementandhelp.Inaword,weareverylucky.Andweshouldlearntoexpressthanks.Inthefuture,Iwillstudyhardertorepaymyparentsandteachers.