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话题写作（二）计划愿望【话题点睛】主要涉及的话题有假期计划、活动计划、人生目标等。涉及的要点有:(1)读书、旅游、度假等活动的安排;(2)课外活动、学校郊游、运动会等活动的时间、地点、人物、活动内容与形式等;(3)职业规划以及实现人生目标的具体措施等。【参考谚语】1.Timeandtidewaitfornoman.岁月不待人。2.Neverdothingsbyhalves.做事不要半途而废。3.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。4.Nevergiveup!永不放弃!常用表达【相关短语】giveaway赠送;makenewfriends结交新朋友;sharewith与……分享;lookforwardto期盼;haveabetterfuture有一个更美好的未来;befriendlyto对……友好;takeupthechallenge接受挑战【亮点句型】关于计划与愿望1.Weplantosendourcardsonwhichwehavewrittenourthankstoourteachers.2.IamgoingtoasummercampinJulywhereIcanrelaxmyselfandmakenewfriends.3.HerearemysummerplansthatIwanttosharewithyou.4.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyouall.5.Ihopethechildreninpoorareaswillhaveabrightfuture.假设你是LiMing,你的笔友Lisa想了解在毕业之际,你将为母校做些什么有意义的事。从下表所列的五项内容中,至少选择两项,用英语给Lisa写一封电子邮件。典例分析······DoSomethingforMySchoolvolunteertodo(cleanuptheschool…)givesomethingaway(suchasbooks…)givesuggestions(organizemoreactivities…)maketheschoolmorebeautiful(planttrees…)writetoyoungerschool-mates(howtousetime…)…[要求](1)邮件中必须包括所选内容括号内的提示,并适当发挥;(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;(3)词数:80-100;邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Hello,Lisa,Howisitgoing?It'stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是计划为母校做一些事情,给的提示比较充分,结合提示写即可,注意任选两条即可。如:(1)和同学一起做志愿者,打扫校园;(2)捐书给校图书馆。2.确定时态:一般将来时3.确定人称:第一人称【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】Hello,Lisa,Howisitgoing?It'stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.HerearemyplansthatIwouldliketosharewithyou.Firstofall,Iwillvolunteertodosomecleaningwithmyclassmates,suchascleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloors.Tokeepourschoolclean,wewillaskourschoolmatesnottolittereverywhereatschool.Also,Iwillgiveawaymybookstotheschoollibrarysothatouryoungerschoolmatescanreadmoregoodbooks.AndIwillcallonmoreschoolmatestodoso.It'sreallyhardformetosaygoodbye.Iwishmyschooltohaveabetterfuture.Yours,LiMing【名师点评】1.用“HerearemyplansthatIwouldliketosharewithyou.”简洁明了地点明文章的主题,既跟读者分享为母校做事的计划,又引出下文。2.句式多样:不定式作目的状语,sothat引导的目的状语从句,简单句和复合句结合使用,使文章错落有致,给人良好的阅读体验。[2019·辽阳]初中生活即将结束,你将步入人生下一阶段。在今后的生活中,为了成为一个更好的自己,你对自己有哪些承诺?请从以下几个方面进行说明,并可适当发挥。[要求](1)语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。(2)文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。(3)短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。实战演练Myjuniorhighschooldayswillbeover.Beforesettingoutonmynewjourney,Iwanttomakeapromisetomyself.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Myjuniorhighschooldayswillbeover.Beforesettingoutonmynewjourney,Iwanttomakeapromisetomyself.Inmynewschool,IknowIwillmeettrouble.Maybe,Ican'tunderstandthenewknowledgequickly.I'llkeeponstudyinghardasusual.I'llaskmynewteachersforhelpintime.I'llhavemanynewclassmatesandfriendsaswell.Iwillbefriendlytothem.I'llbereadytohelpthemanytime.Ithinkwe'llgetonwell.We'llmakeprogresstogether.Iknowmyparentsarebusyandgreat.They'regettingoldandI'mgrowingup.Ishouldcareformyself.I'lltrytolearnhowtocook.Onweekends,I'llwashmyclothesanddosomehousework.IknowIwillbeindependentonedayandIneedtochangemyselfsoon.