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话题写作（七）情感表达【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。【参考谚语】1.Asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑,十年少。2.Joyandsorrowarenext-doorneighbors.悲喜常相伴。3.Laughteristhebestmedicine.笑是最好的药。4.Worrykillsmorementhanwork.忧虑比劳累更伤人。常用表达【相关短语】thanksfor…因……感谢……;makenewfriends结交新朋友;lookafter/takecareof照顾;keepintouch保持联系;befriendlyto对……友好;bringback带回【亮点句型】学校的感受1.I'dliketothankyouforgivingmeunselfishloveandhelp.2.Youalwaysencouragedmetostudyharder.3.Althoughyouwereverystrictwithme,Iunderstoodwhatyousaidintheend.4.I'msothankfultoyouforyourkindhelpthatI'llworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.家庭的感受1.I'dliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.2.I'msuremyparentswillgetonwitheachothersoon.3.Weshouldhavegoodhabitsandtryourbesttotakeexerciseeveryday.4.I'llspendmoretimestayingandcommunicatingwithyou.5.WhenIfailedanexamandfeltstressed,youweretheonetoencourageme.6.Ibelieveifwedoso,wecanhaveahappylife.Ⅰ.根据汉语意思完成句子。1.在我去上学和回来的路上,你们总是和我在一起。toandfromschool,youwerealwayswithme.2.我将会尽我最大的努力去理解你,并且为你做我所能做的。I'lltounderstandyouanddowhatIcanforyou.3.我担心他们,并且非常害怕失去我的家人。I'mthemandlosingmyfamilyverymuch.基础写作Onmywaytrymybestworriedaboutafraidof4.坚持你的梦想,你一定能做到的!yourdreamandyoucanmakeit.5.父亲鼓励我,并在必要时给我帮助。Fathermeandgavemeawhennecessary.SticktoencouragedhandⅡ.用括号内所给提示将下列句子译成英语。1.自我出生起,父母就一直无微不至地照顾我。(takegoodcareof)2.我们应该学会与家人好好相处。(getalongwellwith)3.学生不应该被允许花太多时间玩电脑游戏。(beallowedtodo)SinceIwasborn,myparentshavetakengoodcareofme.Weshouldlearntogetalongwellwithourfamily.Studentsshouldn'tbeallowedtospendmuchtimeplayingcomputergames.4.他们总是因为一些不必要的事情争吵。(becauseof)5.没有老师的帮助,我就不会通过这次考试。(without)Theyalwaysarguewitheachotherbecauseofsomeunnecessarythings.Withouttheteacher'shelp,Icouldn'tpasstheexam.[要点](1)给我生命,一直照顾我成长;(2)努力工作,为我提供良好的生活和教育条件;(3)拥有爱心,教我学会……;(4)今天,我要为你们……(自主发挥,至少两点)[注意事项](1)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数:(2)文中不得出现其实的地名、校名、人名等信息。典例分析[2019·天水]“你养我长大,我陪你变老。”父母一直在为我们的成长默默付出,成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业,是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点,写一篇英语短文。Youraisemeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是表达对父母的感激,同时也表达出对父母的爱。可以从以下几个方面展开:(1)父母的付出,如照顾、帮助、鼓励、教育“我”等;(2)“我”对父母的回报,如努力学习、希望父母永远幸福、健康等。2.确定时态:一般现在时(谈论现在父母为“我”付出)和一般将来时(“我”将要对父母的回报)3.确定人称:第一人称【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】Youraisemeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.Yougivemelifeandtakecareofmeallthetime.WhenIhaveproblemswithmystudyandlife,youarealwayspatientenoughtohelpmeandencourageme.Inordertoletmeliveapleasantlifeandreceiveagoodeducation,youalwaysworkhardfrommorningtoeveningeveryday.Youarealsothepeoplewhohaveaheartfulloflove.Youarereadytohelppeopleinneed.Itisyouwhoteachmetobeakindperson.Inthepast,Ineversaid“Iloveyou”toyou.TodayIwillgraduate,Iwanttosayittoyouloudly.Iwillstudyhardertogetbetterresults.Ihopeyouwillbehappyandhealthyforever.【名师点评】1.本文表达对父母的感恩之情,处处流露着真情实感。文章后面具体描述了在成长过程中,父母是如何对“我”付出的,体现了父母对子女无私的爱。在短文的结尾处,作者表达了要努力学习取得好的成绩来回报父母的付出,首尾呼应。2.文章中运用了一些从句和短语,如when,who,takecareof,inorderto等,体现了作者扎实的基本功。实战演练A分享是一种行为方式,也是一种良好的品质(quality)。人生处处充满分享,懂得分享非常重要。分享快乐,快乐加倍;分担烦恼,烦恼减半。请根据以上观点,结合思维导图所示,以“MySharingExperience”为题,写一篇90词左右的短文。[要求](1)短文必须包括所有要点提示,语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;(2)标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数;(3)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。[参考词汇]befullof,cut…inhalf,thanksto,overcomeMySharingExperienceSharingisawayofbehavioraswellasagoodqualityofpeople.Lifeisfullofsharing.Ithinkit'simportanttosharehappinessandsadnesswithothers.WhenIwasten,wemovedtoanewdistrict.Facingthestrangesurroundings,Ifeltlonelyandupset.Itwasmyneighbour,Tim,whohelpedmefindpleasureagain.Heshowedmearoundandintroducednewfriendstome.Healsosharedhisfavouritebooks,musicandlearningmethodswithme.Wesoonbecamegoodfriends.Thankstohissharing,Ibegantosharewithothers.Asweknow,whenhappinessisshared,itwillbedoubled;whenaproblemisshared,itislikecuttingitinhalf.Sharingbringsuspleasure,confidenceandcouragetoovercomedifficulties.Let'sopenourheartstosharewithothersinourfuturelife!B[2019·苏州]假定你是苏华,最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误,倍感懊恼,他给你写了一封邮件向你诉说,为帮助他排解困感,请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历。用英语回信开导他。To:SuHua@China.comFrom:Nathan@Australia.comSubjects:LearningfrommistakesDearSuHua,I'munhappythatI'vemadesomemistakesrecently.They'retroublingmealotthesedays.Ireallyneedyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseshareyourexperiencewithme?·Doyouagreethateveryonemakesmistakes?·Canyoutellmeoneofyourmistakes?（续表）·Howdidyoudealwithyourproblem?·Whathaveyoulearnedfromthemistake?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Bestwishes,Nathan（续表）[注意](1)词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;(2)回复必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;(3)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。DearNathan,I'msorrytoknowthatyouarenothappythesedays.Youneedn'tworrytoomuch.It'struethateveryonemakesmistakes.Takemeforexample.Oneday,IspentsomuchtimeplayingfootballwithmyfriendsthatIforgottodomyhomework.Isaidsorrytomyteacherandfinisheditthenextday.Ifounditimportanttoachieveabalancebetweenschoolworkandhobbies.Itdoesn'tmatterwhetherornotyoumakemistakes.Whatmattersmostistocorrectandlearnfromthem.Inthisway,Ihopemyexperiencecanhelpyouout.Bestwishes,SuHuaotherswillunderstandyou.Thenyouwillfeelmuchbetter.