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话题写作（四）安全问题【话题点睛】该话题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等,此类试题常以要点提示的方式来考查。【参考谚语】1.Cautionistheparentofsafety.小心驶得万年船。2.Safetyatfirst.安全第一。常用表达【相关短语】callthepolice报警;askteachersforhelp向老师求助;goupstairs/downstairs上/下楼;withoutpermission未经许可;keepawayfrom远离……;howtoprotectourselves如何保护我们自己;followtheschoolrules遵守校规;obeythetrafficrules遵守交通规则;bestrictwith对……要求严格【亮点句型】安全与自我保护1.Ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceoraskteachersforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.2.Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskills,especiallyforteenagers.3.It'sdangeroustoswimintheriveralone,sodon'tgototheriverwithoutpermission.4.Allinall,weneedtolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.安全规则及建议1.Weshouldn'tcrowdorpusheachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschool.2.Tobesafer,weshouldkeepawayfromtheInternetbar,andgotoschoolandgobackhomeontime.3.Whenfacinganaccident,thefirstandmostimportantruleistostaycalm.4.Friendscanmakeourlifecolorful,butwemustbecarefultomakefriends,especiallyonline.Ⅰ.根据汉语意思完成句子。1.我们应该尽我们最大的努力来确保我们是安全的。Weshouldtryourbesttowearesafe.2.我们需要和同学友好相处。Weneedtoourclassmates.3.对我们来说,吃更健康的食物和遵守交通规则是重要的。It'simportantforustoeatmorehealthyfoodand.基础写作makesuregeton/alongwellwithobeythetrafficrules4.我们必须对自己严格要求。Wemustourselves.5.司机立刻拨打了120电话,救护车马上就到了。Thedriver120atonceandanambulancecame.bestrictwithcalledinnotimeⅡ.用括号内所给提示将下列句子译成英语。1.自我保护对于青少年来说是最重要的技能之一。(self-protection)2.如今学生的安全正变成我们所有人的焦点。(focus)3.无论你是谁,做什么,安全是最重要的。(nomatter)4.当我们交朋友时,尤其是在网上,我们应该小心一点。(becareful)Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.Todaystudents'safetyisbecomingthefocustousall.Nomatterwhoyouare,whatyoudo,safetyisthemostimportant.Weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.5.在学校,我们应该遵守校规。(followrules)树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课,下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生,写一篇文章,内容包括:①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。典例分析Weshouldfollowtheschoolrulesatschool.ImproveChildSelf-protectionMakeChildrenGrowHealthily1.Abouttrafficrulesruntheredlight×crossthezebrawalk(斑马线)√2.Aboutfoodeatfruitandvegetables√eatfastfood×3.Aboutmakingfriendsmeetstrangersalone×helpeachother√?[要求](1)语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;(3)80-100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.ButhowdoIprotectmyselfandgrowuphealthily?Nowletmesharemyexperienceandideaswithyou.First,IalwaysobeythetrafficrulesInshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是如何践行《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》中提及的三条事项,并补充一条其他事项,可从以下几个方面展开:交通安全、食品安全及交友安全等;2.确定人称:写作时以第一人称为主,偶尔涉及第三人称;3.确定时态:介绍如何践行手册内容,通常用一般现在时,偶尔涉及将来时。【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.ButhowdoIprotectmyselfandgrowuphealthily?Nowletmesharemyexperienceandideaswithyou.First,IalwaysobeythetrafficrulesandIneverruntheredlight.Whenthetrafficlightisred,Iwon'tgountilitturnsgreen.Ialwayscrossthezebrawalkbecauseit'ssafe.Second,Iofteneathealthilyandsafely.It'simportanttoeatmorefruitandvegetables.Eatingtoomuchfastfoodwilldoharmtomybody.Third,Inevermeetstrangersalone,especiallyfriendswhoImakeontheInternet.Atthesametimeifwearetruefriends,weshouldhelpeachother.What'smore,I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Nowsummeriscoming.It'sdangerousforustoswimalone,especiallyindeeplakesorrivers.Sodon'tdothat.Inshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.【名师点评】1.文章根据要点提示,逐一地阐述了如何保护自己,远离危险,并做到了适当展开,详略得当。2.本文结构合理,思路清晰。开头:引出话题;正文:提出自我保护的方法;结尾:总结提醒。全文句式多样化,简单句和复合句相结合使用,使文章错落有致,给人良好的阅读体验。实战演练A[2017·徐州]图中女子Nancy是个“手机控”,昨天她在街上因为使用手机发生了交通事故。请根据图片提示,写一篇90词左右的短文,简要描述这件事情,并谈谈自己的看法。[要求](1)短文已给出的部分不计入总词数;(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯、通顺;(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。[参考词汇]ambulance救护车stretcher担架Exercisingisimportant!Nancyiscrazyaboutusingamobile—sheusesitattable,inbed,evenatwork.Yesterday,whenNancywaswalkingonthestreet,shetookoutandwantedtotakeaphotoofherself.Shehopedtolookbestsoshemovedtothemiddleoftheroad.Soonacardroveby.ThedriversawNancyandtriedtostopthecar,butitwastoolate.Nancywashitandshefellover.Thedrivercalled120atonceandanambulancecameinnotime.Luckily,Nancywasn'tbadlyhurt.ShestillkeptontakingphotosofherselfwhenshewaslyingonMobileshavebecomepartofourlives.thestretcher!Onlywhenweusemobilesproperlycanweenjoytheconvenienceandpleasure.Otherwisewemaygethurt,justlikeNancy.B2020年3月30日是我国第25个中小学“安全教育日”。为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提髙自我保护能力,某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。HowtoKeepSafe饮食安全健康饮食,不暴饮暴食,不吃垃圾食品(junkfood)出行安全1.遵守交通规则,不乱横穿马路2.……水、火等安全1.不要独自下水游泳,不在河边玩耍……2.不要在家中玩火。若家中起火,不要害怕,立刻报警求救3.……你的观点至少两点[注意](1)词数90词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);(2)短文必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等具体信息。HowtoKeepSafeAsteenagers,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepsafe?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First,weshouldeathealthilyandsafely.Don'teattoomuch.Eatingsomejunkfoodwilldoharmtoourhealth.Second,weshouldobeythetrafficrules.It'sdangeroustowalkacrosstheroadcarelessly.Remembertorideyourbikesslowlywhenyougotoschool.Third,don'tgoswimmingaloneanddon'tplayneartherivers.Childrenmustn'tplaywithfireathome.Ifthehousecatchesfire,thefirstthingistocallthepoliceforhelpatonce.Inmyopinion,alltheteenagersshouldlearnh