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第12讲过渡在写作中的应用一、魔法导航(一)恰当地使用过渡语。过渡语可增强句子之间的连贯性,它主要包括起连接作用的副词和起过渡作用的插入语等。如:(1)Meanwhile(同时),somebeautifulpaper-cuttingworks,collectedfromalloverthecountry,willbeexhibitedthere.(2017课标全国卷Ⅱ)(2)Theincreaseinthebox-officeincomecanbeattributedtoseveralfac-tors.①Firstly/Tobeginwith/Tostartwith(首先),thequalityoflifehasimprovedandwatchingfilmsisregardedasagoodmeansofentertain-ment.②Inaddition/Besides/What'smore(另外),filmingtechnologyhasadvancedandmorequalityfilmsareonoffer.③Moreover/Also(此外),theInternetplaysavitalrole.表时间atfirst,then,afterwards,before,after,intheend,later,inthefuture,immediately表顺序first,second,then,lastly,finally,lastbutnotleast表并列或递进besides,what'smore,inaddition,also,moreover,furthermore,worsestill表个人观点inmyopinion/view,frommypointofview,asfarasI'mconcerned表总结inaword,ingeneral,tosumup,allinall,insummary,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,inbrief表转折或对比however,onthecontrary,yet,bycomparison,bycontrast,ontheotherhand表因果therefore,thus,asaresult,so同学们要熟记下表中在写作中常用的过渡语:(二)正确使用段落主题句和总结句。段落主题句和总结句可以使文章首尾呼应,在意义上形成一个整体,从而在宏观层次上达到增强句子连贯性的目的。如:April12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit'sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.【评析】在段落的开头作者用一个句子点出了段落中心思想,在文章的结尾再次用一个句子表达了自己参加“绿色行动”的感受,从而升华了主题。另外,在中间部分作者通过合理运用inthemorning,uponar-rival,aftergettingtheworkdone,beforeleaving和seeingthelinesoftrees等过渡语把活动的整个过程以时间顺序有机地融为一体,很好地体现了文章的连贯性,值得大家学习和模仿。二、学以致用1.完美文章在横线上填上合适的过渡语或过渡句使上下句连贯。(1)Inordertostudywell,weneedtoplaysportssothat/inorderthatwecankeepfit.(2)Manypeoplesuggestthattheparentsshouldlistenmoretotheirchil-dren,sotheywillunderstandthembetter.(3)I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyouwillbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.(4)Therearebasicallytwowaystogetworkdone.Oneistoworkindi-vidually.Inthisway,peoplecandecidebythemselveswhentostartworkandhowtodoit.What'smore,theywillbeabletolearnhowtosolveproblemsontheirown.Peoplemayalsochoosetoworkinateam,wheretheycanlearnfromeachotherandhelpeachother.Besides/Inaddition,theymayworkoutbetterwaystogetworkdonebydiscussion.2.话题写作【本期话题】地点介绍【写作微练】请根据下面的提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。1.我们的祖国位于亚洲的东部,面积约为960万平方千米,人口约为13亿;2.历史悠久,文化丰富;3.有很多闻名世界的旅游资源,如长城、九寨沟等;4.在过去的三十年发生了巨大变化。注意文章的连贯性。答案Onepossibleversion:LocatedintheeastofAsia,ourhomelandisagreatcountrywithalonghis-toryandrichculture.Itcoversanareaofabout9,600,000squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout1.3billion.Inaddition,therearealotofworld-famoustouristsitesinChina,suchastheGreatWall,Jiuzhaigouandsoon,whichattractagoodmanyvisitorsallovertheworldeveryyear.Muchtoourpride,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcountryinthepast30years.三、实战提能假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意:1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。文章体裁应用文主要人称第一人称和第二人称主体时态一般现在时要点分解1.表达帮助Sharon的意愿2.说明自己能胜任辅导的理由3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议4.提出自己学习英语的具体需求我会审题我会联想1.词汇铺路(1)乐意willing(2)胜任bequalifiedfor(3)获得二等奖winprize(4)建议advice/suggestion/tip(5)养成……的习惯formthehabitof(6)合理使用makeproperuseof我会表达Hi,Sharon,ThisisLiXia.IlearnedfromyourpostthatyouwanttoimproveyourMandarin.LiXia答案Onepossibleversion:Hi,Sharon,ThisisLiXia.IlearnedfromyourpostthatyouwanttoimproveyourMandarin.Iammorethanwillingtolendahelpinghandtoyou.IamconvincedthatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.IhavesuchagoodcommandofMandarinthatnotonlywasIelectedthebroadcasteroftheradiostationofourschool,butIalsowonsecondprizeintheMan-darinContestheldinourcitylastyear.WhenitcomestoimprovingMan-darin,myadviceisthatyoushouldlistentoMandarineverydayandprac-ticespeakingitwheneverpossible.Justasthesayinggoes,practicemakesperfect.Bytheway,IdohopeyoucanhelpmeimprovemyEnglishwritingability,especiallytheproperuseofvocabularyandsomeimportantgrammar.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.LiXia美句必背1.LearningthatyouwanttoimproveyourMandarin,Iammorethanhappytolendyouahand.2.SogoodwasmyMandarinthatIwaselectedthebroadcasteroftheradiostationofourschool.3.HowIwishthatIcouldimprovemywritingabilitywiththehelpofyou.实战提能