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第3讲增光添彩的定语从句一、魔法导航在英语写作中使用复杂的句式是提高表达档次、增加语言亮点的主要途径之一,而定语从句就是复杂结构中的重要一项。因此,在写作中巧妙地运用定语从句可为我们的文章“增光添彩”。书面表达中定语从句的常用形式如下:1.使用关系代词that、which、who、whom、whose或as引导的定语从句典句引领Thisremindsmeofmymotherwhohasbeendoingwhatevershecantoletmehavethebestthings.这使我想起了我的妈妈,她一直竭尽全力让我拥有最好的东西。雕词琢句(1)用定语从句将句子整合为复合句①Forinstance,neverspeakwithyourmouthfulloffood;itmaybesimilartoyourowncustom.→Forinstance,neverspeakwithyourmouthfulloffood,whichmaybesimilartoyourowncustom.②Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheldandofthemping-pongandfootball,aswellasrunningcompeti-tionsenjoygreatpopularity.→Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichPingpongandfootball,aswellasrunningcompe-titionsenjoygreatpopularity.③Teammembersareoftenofferedopportunitiestowatchtabletenniscompetitions.Itwillbenefitthemalot.(2017课标全国卷Ⅲ)→Teammembersareoftenofferedopportunitiestowatchtabletenniscompetitions,whichwillbenefitthemalot.④Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek.Duringitweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofourschoollife.(2017北京卷)→Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhichweinter-viewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofourschoollife.⑤IamgratefultoMr.White.WithouthishelpIcouldn'thavemadesomuchprogressinmyEnglishstudy.→IamgratefultoMr.White,withoutwhosehelpIcouldn'thavemadesomuchprogressinmyEnglishstudy.(2)用定语从句完成或翻译下面的句子①Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup,whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool(它已成为我们学校的新地标).(2018课标全国卷Ⅲ)②Thisunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitrunwildly(这让它疯狂地跑).(2018浙江卷)③Asisindicatedinthegraph(如图所示),thebox-officeincomeofChinesefilmsincreasedconstantlyfrom2012to2015,butitsgrowthsloweddownin2016.(2017江苏卷)④IwouldliketointerviewZhangHaidi,whoseexperiencehasinspiredmedeeply(她的经历深深地鼓舞了我).⑤ThissummerIintendtotakeupapart-timejobinaforeigncompany,throughwhichIwouldliketobroadenmyhorizons(借助它我想开阔我的视野)andgainsomeworkingexperience.(2016课标全国卷Ⅰ)⑥我建议你游览泰山,它的风光很美丽。(2017北京卷)IrecommendyoutovisitMountTaiwhosesightsareamazing.⑦任何感兴趣的学生都欢迎参加。Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate.⑧我非常珍惜你给我提供的那个和英国学生交流的机会。IcherishtheopportunityverymuchthatyouofferedmetocommunicatewithBritishstudents.⑨去年我参加了在北京举行的夏令营,这不仅开阔了我的视野,也提高了我的英语口语水平。Lastyear,IjoinedthesummercampinBeijing,whichnotonlybroad-enedmyhorizonsbutalsoimprovedmyoralEnglish.2.使用关系副词where、why和when引导的定语从句典句引领Thepictureshowsusatouchingmomentwhenalittlegirlcomestogreethermom.这张图片向我们展示了一个感人的时刻,一个小女孩过来迎接她的妈妈。雕词琢句(1)NextcamethemomentwhenIaskedthemtohaveatrythemselves(那时我要求他们尝试一下).(2018北京卷)(2)IwilljointheDragonBoatTrainingCampwhereIcantakepartinvariouskindsofactivities(在那儿我可以参加各种活动).(3)学校已经创造了一种可以让我们自由发展自己兴趣的氛围。Theschoolhascreatedanatmospherewherewecandevelopourownin-terestsfreely.二、学以致用1.完美文章结合括号中的提示,用定语从句完成下面的文章。Hi!Tom,Nicetoreadyoure-mailtoday.Inoticeyou'vebeguntouseChineseidiomsandusedmostofthemcorrectly.However,I‘mafraidthereis(1)onemistake(that/which)I’dliketopointout(我想指出来的一个错误).Itistheidiom“无所不为”,(2)whichmeans“doallkindsofbadthings”(它的意思是“做各种各样的坏事”).Areyoudoingallkindsofbadthingsathome?Iguess(3)theideathatyouwerereallytryingtosay(你真正的想法)isthatyou'vegotnothingtodothesedays.Inthatcase,youshoulduse“无所事事”.Weusuallyuse“无所不为”toexpresstheideathatpeopledaretodoanythingbad,and“无所事事”todescribe(4)thesituationwhere/inwhichpeoplehavegotnothingmeaningfultodo(人们没有有意义的事情可做的情形).HaveImademyselfclear?Anyway,I'mamazedat(5)theprogress(that/which)you'vemade(你已经取得的进步).Hopeyou'llfindajobsoon.Yours,LiHua2.话题写作【本期话题】学校生活【写作微练】根据下面的汉语提示,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。1.众所周知,课外活动对学生的健康成长非常重要。2.我们学校的课外活动丰富多彩,我最喜欢踢足球。3.它不仅锻炼了我的身体,而且还塑造了我的性格。4.在活动中,我还结交了很多兴趣相同的朋友。5.我认为,学生应该积极参加他们喜欢的课外活动。注意:至少运用三个定语从句。答案Onepossibleversion:Asweallknow,out-of-classactivitiesareofgreatimportancetothehealthygrowthofthestudents.Therearevariousout-of-classactivitiesinourschool,andplayingfootballismyfavorite,whichhasnotonlybuiltupmybodybutalsoshapedmycharacter.Inaddition,Ihavemadesomefriendswhohavethesameinterestasme.Allinall,Ithinkstudentsshouldtakeanactivepartinout-of-classactivitiesthattheylike.三、实战提能假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);(3)希望她有机会重访天津。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:第十三届全运会the13thNationalGames文章体裁应用文(电子邮件)主要人称第一人称主体时态一般现在时要点分解(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备;(3)希望她有机会重访天津。我会审题我会联想1.词汇铺路(1)志愿者volunteer(2)举行hold(3)表现performance(4)重访revisit(5)做准备makepreparationsfor/preparefor(6)了解learn/knowabout(7)在八月底attheendofAugust我会表达DearMrs.Green,I’msogladtohearfromyou.Yours,LiJin答案Onepossibleversion:DearMrs.Green,I'msogladtohearfromyou.Withthecollegeentranceexaminationdraw-ingnear,Iamengagedinpreparingforit.Asyouknow,Iamcrazyaboutsports.Therefore,Ipaycloseattentiontothe13thNationalGamestobeheldinTianjinattheendofAugust.AndthegoodnewsIdesiretosharewithyouisthatIhavebecomeavolunteerforit.Inordertohaveagreatperformance,Ihavemadealotofpreparationsforit.Afterclass,notonlydoIsurftheInternettoobtainmoreinformationconcerningthehistoryaswellas