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话题写作（七）快乐成长【话题点睛】话题主要包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。涉及的要点:1.成长体验及感悟;2.成长烦恼与困惑;3.关于更好地成长的方法与建议。你的初中生活即将结束。此时此刻,正是回顾过去,展望未来之际。请写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对初中三年学习生活的感受和对高中生活的向往。短文须包括如下要点:(1)师生关系;(2)学业成就;(3)生活乐趣;(4)感受初中;(5)向往高中。典例分析[注意](1)语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚;(2)词数:100左右。【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是回顾初中生活,展望高中生活。文章有两个要点:(1)回顾初中生活;(2)展望高中生活。2.确定时态:一般现在时和现在完成时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.我甚至一度进入我们班的前三名。(getinto;thetop)Ieveninourclassonce.2.我已经在常规课程上取得了巨大进步。(makeprogress)I’veinregularacademicclasses.3.我也喜欢做其他的事情,包括参加各种俱乐部。(including)Ialsoenjoymyselfindoingotherthings,.gotintothetopthreemadehugeprogressincludingjoiningvariousclubsⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.They’veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.It’squiteunbelievable.(用形式主语it改写句子)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Theyhelpedmemakehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.(用withone’shelp改写句子)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________It’squiteunbelievablethatthey’veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.Withtheirgreathelp,I’vemadehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.3.Myseniorhighschoolwillbemoremeaningful.(用Ibelieve改写句子)___________________________________________________________________________Ibelievethatmyseniorhighschoolwillbemoremeaningful.【连句成文】I’llgraduatefrommyjuniorschool.Atthemomentoflookingbackatthethreeyearsandlookingforwardtotheseniorhighschoollife,manywordshavecometomymind.Thefirsttopopintomymindaremyteachers.It’squiteunbelievablethatthey’veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.Franklyspeaking,wearemorethanteacherstostudents,butfriends,Isuppose.Withtheirgreathelp,I’vemadehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.What’smore,Ievengotintothetopthreeinourclassonce.Besidesstudy,Ialsoenjoymyselfindoingotherthings,includingjoiningvariousclubs,doingsportswithmyniceclassmatesandthestaff.However,thosegoldendaysfulloflaughterandtearsaregone.Inaword,myjuniorschoollifeisanunforgettableexperience.AndIbelievemyseniorhighschoollifewillbemoremeaningful.【参考谚语】1.Timeflies.时光易逝。2.AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。3.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上无难事,只要肯登攀。4.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.天助自助者。拓展积累【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Asweknow,therearemanywaystorealizeourdreams.2.Everycoinhastwosides.Thereisnotonlysadnessbutalsohappinessinourlife.Butwhatshouldwedotohaveahappylife?3.Thereisnodoubtthateveryonehastofacedifficultiesinhislife.Weshouldtreattheminaproperway.4.Peoplealwayssaythatlifecan’tgoonwellallthetimebecausewewillmeetallkindsofdifficulties.文章发展、过渡句1.Firstofall,weneedtorealizethatdifficultyisapartoflifeandweshouldgetusedtoit.2.Next,weshouldbepositivetofindoutwaystodealwiththedifficultieswemeet.3.Ontheotherhand,weshouldfindthehappinessaroundusbyheart.4.What’smore,weshouldbelieveinourselves.文章结尾句1.Nomatterwhatwesuffer,weshouldstillbelievethattheharvestaftertheeffortisbeyondourexpectation.2.Nomatterwhatyoudo,themostimportantthingistoenjoytheprocessinsteadoftheresult.3.Thepleasurewegetmakesusproud.4.Inmyopinion,whenwefacethedifficulttime,weshouldconsideritasatestforusandwhenwegetthroughit,wewillgainvaluableexperience.AWriteatleast60wordsonthetopic“There’sAlwaysHope”.(以“常怀希望”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文)。面临困惑的时候,经历变化的时候,感觉挫败的时候,遭遇逆境的时候……来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等,总能让人常怀希望。请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解(可结合自身或他人的经历)。实战演练____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．。)Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表达仅供参考)getoutofdifficultygive…ahandneverlosehopeOnepossibleversion:There’sAlwaysHopeHopeisalwaysthere,inourhearts.Justkeepitinmindandwe’llachieveallourdreamsoneday.WhenIwasinGrade7,Ialwaysdidverybadlyinmaths.AndIevengotsevenpointsinamathstest.Thatmademefeelverysad.Iwantedtogiveitupatthattime,butmyparentsandmyteachertriedtoencourageme.Theysaidtome,“Neverlosehope!Webelieveyou’llbecomethetopstudentlaterifyoudoyourbesttostudymaths.”Ifollowedtheiradvice,andIputmyheartintomathsallthetime.Finally,Isucceeded!NowadaysI’mconfidentinallmysubjects.Forme,thekeytosuccessissimplebutpowerful—there’salwayshope.B[2019·北京改编]自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。[要求](1)词数:不少于50词(文中已给出内容不计入总词数);(2)所给提示词仅供选用;(3)请不要写出你的校名和姓名。[提示词语]self-disciplined(自律的),plan,goal,habit,improve[提示问题]·Whatdidyoudotobeself-disciplined?·Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromdoingso?Self-disciplineplaysanimportantroleinourlife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________