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话题写作（七）情感表达【话题点睛】(1)要求学生结合自己的经历或者感受进行写作;(2)常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。今天是父亲节。假定你是李华,请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。[要点]•表述你与父亲之间的感情;•为父亲制作一张卡片;•帮助父亲做点事;•陪父亲散步等。[注意](1)词数:80左右;典例分析(2)请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;(3)邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。DearJohn,It'sFather'sDaytoday.It'saspecialday,isn'tit?What'syourplanforFather'sDay?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是因为父亲节而想到的自己和父亲的一些事情,主要有:(1)与父亲的感情;(2)父亲节的计划。2.确定时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。3.确定人称:第一人称和第三人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.我们应该做一些特别的事情来表达对父亲的爱。(something)Weshoulddotoshowourloveforourfathers.2.无论何时我遇到困难,他总是在我身边。(whenever)Idifficulties,heisalwaysthere.3.爸爸喜欢在晚饭后带我去散步。(take…forawalk)Myfatherlikestoafterdinner.4.周末我喜欢和爸爸下象棋。(playchess)Ilikemyfatheronweekends.somethingspecialWhenevermeetwithtakemeforawalkplayingchesswithⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。)5.OnceImeetwithdifficulties,heisalwaysthere,readytohelpme.(用whenever改写句子)6.I'lltakeawalkwithhimafterdinnerandthenplaychesswithhim.Helikesplayingchessbest.(用for连接两个句子)WheneverImeetwithdifficulties,heisalwaysthere,readytohelpme.I'lltakeawalkwithhimafterdinnerandthenplaychesswithhim,forhelikesitbest.【连句成文】DearJohn,It'sFather'sDaytoday.It'saspecialday,isn'tit?Ithinkweshoulddosomethingtoshowourloveforourfathersonthisspecialday.MyfatherandIaregoodfriends.WheneverImeetwithdifficulties,heisalwaysthere,readytohelpme.TodayIwillmakeabeautifulcardforhimwithmythanksandbestwishesonit.ThenIwillhelphimwashthecarthisafternoonandcookhisfavoritefoodintheevening.Besides,I'lltakeawalkwithhimafterdinnerandthenplaychesswithhim,forhelikesitbest.I'msurehe'llbeveryhappy.What'syourplanforFather'sDay?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【词汇集锦】1.烦恼类—haveproblems/trouble;havetoomuchhomework;alone;feellonely;bestrictwith;feelbored;sleepy;betiredof;nervous;worried;havetroubleindoing;feelstressed;angry;shame;sad;unhappy;afraid;beafraidofdoing;beafraidtodo;drivesb.mad…2.愉悦类—happy;happiness;glad;excited;love;enjoy;beproudof/takepridein;pleasure;bepleasedwith;amazing;becrazyabout;laugh;smile;cheer;surprise…拓展积累3.表达类—express;expression;feel;feeling;sense;worryabout;beworriedabout;besurprisedtodo;toone'ssurprise;Whynotdo…;Whydon'tyoudo…;What/Howaboutdoing…;lookforwardtodoing…【相关短语】thanksfor…因……感谢……;makenewfriends结交新朋友;lookafter/takecareof照顾;keepintouch保持联系;befriendlyto对……友好;bringback带回【个人感受】1.Theremaybesomethingunpleasantinourlife.2.Igetmuchhelpandlovefrommanypeopleinmylife.3.WhenIhaveproblemswithmystudy,myteachersaresopatientandhelpful.4.ThepersonIlovemostismymother.5.HownervousIwaswhenIwastoldtogiveaspeech!6.I'dliketotalkaboutmytroublethatI'mfacingthesedays.7.Thereisalwayssomethingunforgettableinmylife,especiallythestorybetweenmyfriendandme.8.Myjuniorhighschooliscomingtoanend.NowI'dliketoshowmythanksforyourdevotiontheseyears.【个人愿望】1.Smilingtoourselvescanbringbackourconfidenceandbeattheunhappyfeelings.2.Weshouldlearntosmiletoothers,anditwillhelpusgetclosertoothers.3.Ibelieveourworldwillbemorewonderfulandourlifewillbehappierandhappier.4.WhenIgrowup,IwilldowhatIcantomakemymotherhappy.【参考谚语】1.Asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑,十年少。2.Joyandsorrowarenext-doorneighbors.悲喜常相伴。3.Laughteristhebestmedicine.笑是最好的药。4.Worrykillsmorementhanwork.忧虑比劳累更伤人。A[2019·遂宁]在成长过程中,青少年面临越来越多的烦恼,主要体现在精神压力太大。请以此为话题写一篇80词左右的短文。[要点提示]1.导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因:(1)学业;(2)与他人相处。2.减少压力的措施:(1)积极参加课外活动;(2)多与他人交流沟通。3.简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法。(至少一点)实战演练[注意]1.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文章必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯;3.不可逐词翻译,应有独自的见解并适当发挥;4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。Weteenagershavemoreandmorepressurewhilegrowingup.Herearetwomainreasons.Oneistheproblemsinourschoolwork.Theotheristheproblemsingettingonwithotherpeople.However,toomuchpressureisnotgoodforteenagers'development.Sohowtodealwiththepressure?Takingpartintheafter-schoolactivitiesisaveryusefulway.Besidesthisone,morecommunicationoftenworks.Allinall,weshouldtryourbesttodealwiththestressandkeephealthyinbodiesandmind.B[2019•长沙]假如你是李华,你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的,有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他,谈谈你对此事的看法,并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。[要求](1)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)邮件中不得出现真实的人名和校名。DearHenry,I'velearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.It'snoteasybeinginyoursituation,andit'snormaltohavethesefeelings.Anyway,don'tbetoohardonyourself.Youknow,basketballisaboutteameffort.It'sneverjustoneperson'sfault.Whatmattersisthatyoushouldlearnfromthegamesaswellasyourmistakes.Besides,youneedtothinkabouthowyoucandobetternexttime.Asawhole,teammatesshouldsupportandbelieveineachother.Whydon'tyousitdownandcommunicatewiththem?Andyoucouldpromisethatyouwillsparenoeffortstobetteryourskills.Ifallofyoupulltogether,you'resuretowinthenextone.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua