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话题写作（三）校园生活【话题点睛】关于校园生活方面的话题有很多:学生的学习生活;校园活动;兴趣小组;对校园活动的看法及建议等。学校正在创建“安全校园”,请你根据下面图表提示写一篇演讲稿,号召同学们提高安全意识,珍爱生命。典例分析[提示](1)短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,并适当发挥;(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;(3)词数:不少于80。【思路点拨】1.主题是校园安全问题,属于校园生活类。写作内容可以从以下几个方面展开:(1)陈述安全的重要性,并引出下文;(2)分别指出在学校、在家、在大街上(公共场所)应该如何做才能确保安全;(3)最后再次陈述安全的重要性,与第一段呼应。2.确定时态:一般现在时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.我们应该做什么来保护我们自己呢?(protectoneself)Whatshouldwedoto?2.我们应该学会保护自己远离危险。(protectsb.from)Weshouldlearntoourselves.3.首先,我们在学校里应该保持安全。(keepsafe),weatschool.4.我们应该遵守交通规则。(besupposedto)Wethetrafficrules.protectourselvesprotectfromdangerFirstshouldkeepsafearesupposedtofollowⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)5.It'simportanttouseelectricitycarefully.Itisimportantnottoplaywithfire.(用and合并为一个句子)6.Wepaymoreattentiontosafety.Ourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter.(用if合并为一个句子)7.Wehavetolockthedoor.Weleavethehouse.(用when合并为一个句子)Itisimportanttouseelectricitycarefullyandnottoplaywithfire.Ifwepaymoreattentiontosafety,ourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter.Wehavetolockthedoorwhenweleavethehouse.【连句成文】Safetyisveryimportant.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldlearntoprotectourselvesfromdanger.Whatshouldwedotoprotectourselves?Hereissomethingweshoulddo.First,weshouldkeepsafeatschool.Wecan'tfight.Weshouldn'truninthehallways.Second,whenweareathome,itisimportanttouseelectricitycarefullyandnottoplaywithfire.Wehavetolockthedoorwhenweleavethehouse.Third,weshouldbecarefulonthestreettoo.Wearesupposedtofollowthetrafficrules.Wecan'tplayontheroad.Ifwepaymoreattentiontosafety,I'msureourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter.【词汇集锦】1.学校设施school,library,classroom,playground,lab,college,university…2.学习用品notebook,schoolbag,pen,pencil,pencilbox,tape,tapeplayer,CD,map,dictionary,desk,chair…3.学习科目subject,Chinese,English,music,science,physics,chemistry,history,biology,geography,math,art…拓展积累4.学校人员teacher,student,monitor,headmaster,headteacher…5.学校活动test,learn,listen,absent,exam,homework…【亮点句型】校园生活1.Schoolisaplacewherewecanlearnanddomanymeaningfulthings.2.Schoolisaplacewherewecanopenupeyestotheoutsideworldwiththehelpofourteachers.3.Ireallyenjoymycolorfulschoollifebecausetherearemanykindsofcolorfulactivities.4.OurschoollifeissorichandmeaningfulthatIenjoyitverymuch.5.Whatanenjoyableschoollifewehave!6.Ican'tbelievehowfastthetimewentby!7.EventhoughIamsadthatjuniorhighisover,Iamlookingforwardtonewexperiencesinseniorhigh.8.Agoodrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentscanhelpyouimproveyourstudy.学习困难的表达1.Ifinditdifficulttoincreasemyreadingspeed.2.Ihavesometrouble/problemsinmemorizingEnglishwords.3.It'sdifficultformetoimprovemylisteningskills.4.AnotherthingIfinddifficultiswriting.5.Idon'tknowhowtoincreasemyvocabulary.学习方法的表达1.ThebestwaytolearnEnglishisbyusingitasmuchaspossible.2.Readingalotishelpfulforustoincreaseourvocabulary.3.Shehelpedyoutoworkouttheanswersyourselfnomatterhowdifficulttheywere.4.You'llmakemistakesalongtheway,butthekeyistolearnfromyourmistakesandnevergiveup.5.Theharderyouwork,thebettergradesyouwillget.A[2019·哈尔滨]假如你是英语校报的编辑李平,请你根据以下信息,给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信,欢迎他们来到新学校,并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。[写作要点]1.欢迎他们来到新学校。2.介绍学校:(1)课程有趣;(2)有多名外教;(3)活动丰富。3.请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学生提出具体建议。实战演练[写作要求]1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4.至少80词。Dearnewfriends,It'smypleasuretowriteyouthisletter.Welcometoournewschool.Ourschooliscleanandbeautiful.Theclassroomsarebigandbright.Allthesubjectsareveryinteresting.IamgoodatEnglish.Therearemanyforeignteachersinourschool.Inoursparetime,wecancommunicatewiththemandimproveouroralEnglishskills.Ourafter-classactivitiesarealsorichandcolorful.Therearedifferentclubsinourschool.Youcantakepartinallkindsofactivitiesyoulike.Bestwishes!Yours,LiPingNowyouaregoingtobemiddleschoolstudents.Howtobeaqualifiedmiddleschoolstudent?Atfirst,youshouldfollowtheschoolrules.It'salsoimportanttohavegoodstudyhabits.Youmustlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Ithinkyoushouldlearntosharethingswithyourclassmatesandhelpeachother.B[2019•德州]假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生,你的学校正在参加全市文明校园的评选。以下内容是学校根据《山东省中小学文明校园评比细则》列举的部分信息。请你根据表格内容,写一篇短文,向社会宣传自己的学校,并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事,为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。1.Teachers'team(师资)①experiencedteachershelpusmakeprogress②friendlyheadteachersgrowasaperson2.Schoolfacilities(设施)①abiglibraryreadbookstolearnmore②aplaygrounddosports③somesciencelabsfindsomethingnew3.Schoolenvironment(环境)①differentkindsoftreesandflowersbecleanandbeautiful②safetyeducationclassesprotectourselves4.?……[要求]1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;3.80—100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。I'mfromNo.3MiddleSchool.Myschoolismakingitsefforttobeacivilizedschool.Letmeintroduceit.Therearemanyexperiencedteachersinmyschool.Theyhelpusmakeprogressinmanyways.Ourfriendlyheadteachersoftencommunicatewithourparentsandteachustogrowasaperson.Abiglibrarystandsinthecenterofmyschool.Itholdsalargenumberofbooks.Wecanenjoybookshereandlearnmoreabouttheworld.Aplaygroundandsomesciencelabsareinmyschool.Wecandosportsandfindsomethingnewafterschool.Ithelpsuskeepfitandhaveacolorfullife.50%ofourschooliscoveredwithplants.Therearedifferentkindsoftreesandflowers.Itiscleanandbeautiful.Weoftenhavesafetyeducationclasse