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话题写作（一）人物介绍【话题点睛】(1)主要针对考生熟悉的著名人物或者同学、朋友;(2)主要涉及人物的外貌、简历、变化以及自己对该人物的看法等。1.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。假设你是李华,你的初中生活即将结束,某英文报社组织了一个“感恩老师”的活动。三年中,一定有一位老师给你留下了深刻的印象。请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一封电子邮件投稿。[要点提示](1)简要介绍这位老师的性格或特长;(2)说明这位老师是如何在学习或生活上帮助你的(至少列举一个事例说明);(3)感谢老师,祝福老师。典例分析[注意](1)词数:80左右;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)邮件中不能出现与本人相关的信息;(4)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearEditor(编辑),I'mhappyIcanhaveachancetoexpressmythankstomyteacher.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是描写一位老师,内容主要包括以下几点:(1)老师的性格或特长;(2)我记忆最深的一件事;(3)感谢老师,祝福老师。2.确定时态:一般现在时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.她总能让她的课堂变得生动而有趣。(make)Shecanalwaysmakeherclassesand.2.我担心这次考试的成绩。(beworriedabout)Itheresultofthisexam.3.她比我见过的任何老师都要认真。(anyother)SheismorecarefulteacherIhaveevermet.4.在她的帮助下,我的英语成绩已经有了很大的提高。(withsb.'shelp),myEnglishhasimprovedalot.livelyinterestingamworriedaboutthananyotherWithherhelpⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)5.Ihavemanysweetmemoriesofmyteachers.(用inthepastthreeyears改写句子)6.IlikemyEnglishteacherbest.(同义句转换)7.Shenoticedit.IwasworriedabouttheEnglishpronunciation.(改为宾语从句)Inthepastthreeyears,Ihavehadmanysweetmemoriesofmyteachers.MyfavoriteteacherismyEnglishteacher.ShenoticedthatIwasworriedabouttheEnglishpronunciation.8.Sheisthemostcarefulteacher.(改为比较级)9.Iwillneverforgether.SheteachesusEnglish.(改为定语从句)Sheismorecarefulthananyotherteacher.Iwillneverforgether,whoteachesusEnglish.【连句成文】DearEditor,I'mhappyIcanhaveachancetoexpressmythankstomyteacher.Inthepastthreeyears,Ihavehadmanysweetmemoriesofmyteachers.TheteacherIwillneverforgetisMs.Wang,whoteachesusEnglish.Sheisverykindandfriendly.Sheismorecarefulthananyotherteacher.Shecanalwaysmakeherclasseslivelyandinteresting.OnceshenoticedthatIwasworriedabouttheEnglishpronunciation,andshegavemesomesuggestionstoimproveit.Withherhelp,mypronunciationhasgreatlyimproved.Iwanttosaythankstoher,andwishherahealthyandhappylifeinthefuture.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【词汇集锦】1.年龄类—age;bebornon;one'sbirthdayis…;11yearsold;an11-year-oldboy…2.体貌类—身材:tall;short;beofmediumheight;fat;thin;slim;strong;weak…长相:beautiful;handsome;pretty;lovely;nice;cute;good-looking;ugly…头发:longhair;straighthair;curlyhair;blackhair;brownhair…面部:around/squareface;asweetface;abignose;twobrighteyes;smoothskin…拓展积累3.性格类—hard-working;helpful;clever;active;humorous;(im)patient;creative;confident;kind;(un)friendly;brave;outgoing;quiet;silent;serious;(im)polite;careful/careless;(dis)honest;shy;funny…4.兴趣类—habit;hobby;interest;(dis)like;hate;prefer;ratherthan;love;enjoy(doing)…;begoodat…【相关短语】bebornin出生于……;comefrom=befrom来自;begoodat=dowellin擅长;beofmediumbuild中等身材;beofmediumheight中等身高;getonwellwith与……和睦相处;attheageof在……岁时;makefriends结交朋友【亮点句型】人物外貌1.Heisatallmanwiththickglasses./Heoftenwearsapairofglasses.2.Mysisterhasaroundfacewithbrighteyesandasmallmouth.3.Sheisofmediumheight,neithertootallnortooshort.4.HehasthemostbeautifulblueeyesIhaveeverseen.人物性格1.Shegetsonwellwithherfriends.Everyonelikesherbecauseofherkindness.2.Aslongashemakesapromise,hewillneverbreakit.3.What'smore,heisanhonestboywhonevertellsalie/tellslies.4.He'sakindandhelpfulperson.He'salwaysreadytohelpothersintrouble.5.Heischeerfulandfriendly.That'swhyhehassomanyfriends.【参考谚语】1.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。2.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者,事竟成。3.Allthingsintheirbeingaregoodforsomething.天生我材必有用。A请根据下面表格提示以“My…andI”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括:人物的外貌、性格特点等以及你和他/她之间的故事。实战演练whooneofyourfamilymembers,teachersorfriends…whathe/sheislikeappearance,character,hobbies…astorybetweenyou…[注意](1)请补全标题;(2)短文应包括表格中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明,适当发挥;(3)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名;(4)词数:不少于80。MyFatherandIMyfatherisateacherofEnglishwhoisaboutfortyyearsold.Heisverytallandlooksyoungandhandsome.Thatpairofglassesoverhisbignosemakeshimlookveryknowledgeable.Myfatherisveryhumorousandlikesreadingverymuch.Healwaystellsmesomethingfunnyoreducational.MyfatherandIhavesomehobbiesincommon,suchaslisteningtoEnglishsongs,watchingEnglishmoviesandvideos.However,wedon'tagreewitheverything.OneweekendwhenIwatchedthepopularTVprogramagainwhichiscalledTheHappyFamily,hecameovertosayitwasmeaninglesstowatchsuchshows,andthatIshouldn'twastesomuchtimeonit.ButItalkedbacktohimbysayingitwasalwaysrelaxingandmeaningful.Idon'tthinkmyfatherisalwaysrightbutIbelievehealwayslovesme.B[2019•河南]假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。[要点](1)这个名人是谁;(2)你为什么想和他或她共进午餐;(3)你想和他或她谈什么。[要求](1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;(2)词数:80左右。I'dliketohavelunchwithRenZhengfei,thefounderofthewell-knownChinesetechcompanyHuawei.Mr.Renisconsideredasagreatmanwhoalwayshaseverythingmappedoutahead.Andunderhisleadership,Huaweihasbecomeahigh-techgiantworldwide.Overthelunch,Iwilllistentohissuccessstory.ThenIwillaskhimwhatisimportanttomakeithappen.Iftimepermits,I'llaskforhisadviceforusteenagerstoday.I'mexpectingthislunchalready.