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考点5读写任务_如何写好正文和结尾考点5读写任务:如何写好正文和结尾 China'sextracurriculareducationsectorforprimaryschoolstudentshasdevelopedrapidly,especiallyinlargecities.Thepiano,painting,chess,skatingandotherlessonshavesprungupinmajorshoppingdistricts.Ex-pensivesummercampsclaimingtobroadenchildren'shorizonsarealsopopular.Spendingonchildren'seducationisrisingeachyear.AsurveyofShanghaiearlyeducation(uptoage6)conductedbytheShanghaiAssociationforQualityfoundthattheparentsof60percentofchildrenunderage6hadmadethemattendextracurricularclasses.Forchildrenbetween4and6,theproportionexceeded70percent.InternationalmarketresearchcompanyNielsenfoundthatpeopleborninthe1980sarethebiggestconsumersinChina.Asmostofthemaremar-ried,spendingonfamilyoccupiesalargeshareoftheirexpenses—child-ren'seducationinparticular,whichaccountsfor55percent.[写作提示]根据短文内容及要求用约30个单词写出概要,短文介绍了当今家长不惜重金让孩子上各种课外辅导班,想给孩子一个好的起点。但教育专家对此不赞成,认为这是盲目地追随潮流,过度安排孩子。所以概要中要说明此现象。Someparentsonsocialmediacomplainthattheyarenotraisingchildrenbut“cashburners”.AccordingtoLiuChenglian,afamilyeducationexpert,someparentsspendwhateverittakestogivetheirkidsanedge,butsometimestheyjustblindlyfollowatrendandoverscheduletheirchildren.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120个单词阐述你对家长花重金让孩子上课外班的看法,并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。本题还要求用约120个单词阐述你对家长花重金让孩子上课外班的看法,并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作时要观点明确,论据充分且要有代表性。还要注意高级词汇和句型的运用来增加文章的文采。本文是说明现象并表明自己的观点,写作时用一般现在时,以第一人称和第三人称为主。参考范文:Asisillustratedinthereport,Chineseparents,especiallythoseborninthe1980s,havespentalargesumofmoneyonextracurriculareducationtogivetheirchildrenanedge,butexpertsdon'tagreewithit.Ifullyunderstandthatparentswishtheirchildrentohavecompetitiveadvantages,yetIdon'tbelieveit'sawisechoicetocramintoomanyexpensiveclasses.Firstofall,spendingtoomuchmoneyonextracurriculareducationdoesnotnecessarilybringaboutwhatparentsdesire.Secondly,somuchextracurriculareducationmightaffectchildren'snormallife,thusdoingharmtotheirdevelopmentorevenmentalandphysicalhealth.Besides,parentsmaybeoverburdenedwithextraexpensespaidforchildren'seducationandunabletomakeendsmeet,furtherweakeningthequalityoflife.Accordingly,Isuggestparentsreflectonthetrendofextracurriculareducation,choosingasuitablewayfortheirchildrentogainanedge.(2019江苏南师附中、天一中学、海门中学、淮阴中学期初调研)请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Whichismoreimportant?Collegemajororcollegename?HerearesomeopinionscollectedfromawebsitefromtheUnitedStates.Collegemajor.YoucangotoHarvardwithonlyaLiberalArtsdegreeandthatwouldhavebeenawaste.OryoucangotoastateschoolandgraduatewithanEngineeringdegreeanddosomuchbetteroutintherealworld.It'snicetogotoabig-nameschool,butintheend,whatyoumajorinwillplayabiggerroleinwhatyoudoaftergraduation.—MayYourmajorismuchmoreimportantunlessyou'reattendinganIvyLeagueschool.But,asoneoftheotherspointedout,arandomLiberalArtsdegreemightnotgetyouthebestjobevenifit'sfromHarvard(thoughyou'dprobablyhaveamuchbetterchanceatlandinga/anwriting/editorjobwithaHarvardEnglishdegreethanonefromarandomstateschool).—DSOfcoursecollegeismoreimportant.Graduatesfromwell-knowncollegescangetjobseasily,becauseemployerstendtofavorgraduatesfrombig-namecolleges.—Charlie[写作内容]1.用约30词概括文本信息的主要内容;2.说明你的观点是什么,并陈述理由(不少于两点);3.结合自身实际,谈谈你将来的选择及理由。[写作要求]1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。[评分标准]内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案[写作提示]这是一篇纯文本读写类作文。文章讨论关于大学和专业哪个更重要,引用了三位受访者的话,概括时注意适当提及。文章主要应该采用一般现在时,说明将来打算用一般将来时。[写作要点]1.用约30词概括文本信息的主要内容:(1)专业和学校哪个更重要;(2)有人认为学校更重要,也有人认为专业更重要。2.你的观点是什么,并陈述理由:(1)明确态度,认为专业或学校更重要;(2)给出理由。3.谈谈你将来的选择及理由:你是选择学校还是选择专业,并简单阐述理由。Onepossibleversion:Awebsiteconductedasurveyonwhethercollegemajororcollegenameismoreimportant,andresponsestoitvary.Somefavorcollegenamewhileotherssuggestcollegemajormattersmore.Inmyview,collegemajorfaroutweighscollegename.Firstandforemost,thechoiceofyourcollegemajorisbasedonpersonalinterests,whichfuelsastrongmotivationtoyouracademicdevelopment.Itistheareasyouaimtopursuethatdriveyoutogofurtheranddeeper.Moreover,closelyconnectedwithyourfuturejob,yourmajorgivesyouanedgeincareercompetitiveness.Equippingyourselfwithskillsandexpertiseneeded,apromisingcollegemajorismorerewardingfinancially,addingwingstoprofessionalprospects.Asawould-becollegestudent,Idobelievecollegemajorismoreimportantthancollegename.Agoodcommandofskillsinaspecificfieldwillarmmewithcorecompetitiveness,enablingmetodevelopbetter.