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话题写作（六）情感表达与观点态度【话题点睛】观点态度类书面表达属于议论文范畴,通常是给出热点且有争议性的话题,让学生阐述自己的观点,如：对学生上网、学生参加课外娱乐活动、学生吸烟、课程设置、课堂活动方式等话题发表观点。写此类文章时应注意：(1)要把别人的观点写全;(2)要根据事实阐述自己的观点;(3)恰当使用一些表达观点的句式：Ithink/Ibelieve/Ihope…;Ontheonehand…,ontheotherhand…;Firstly…,Secondly…;inmyopinion…1.烦恼类—haveproblems/trouble;havetoomuchhomework;alone;feellonely;bestrictwith;feelbored;sleepy;betiredof;nervous;worried;havetrouble(in)doing;feelstressed;angry;shame;sad;unhappy;afraid;beafraidofdoing;beafraidtodo;drivesb.mad…2.愉悦类—happy;happiness;glad;excited;love;enjoy;beproudof/takepridein;pleasure;bepleasedwith;amazing;becrazyabout;laugh;smile;cheer;surprise…词汇集锦3.观点态度类—expected;curious;active;inactive;incorrect;up-to-date;seriously;impatient;pleasure;personal;asamatteroffact;(in)formal;befor…;beagainst;worried;humorous…4.常用表达类—Ithink/believe/hope…;Ontheonehand…,ontheotherhand…;Firstly…;Secondly…;Inmyopinion…;Thanksto…1.Theremaybesomethingunpleasantinourlife.2.Whynottalkaboutthesefeelingswithyourfamily?3.WhenIfeelsad,thebestwaytorelaxmyselfistoexercise.4.Ilikehelpingothersbecauseitmakesmeveryhappy.5.Ithinkgoingonlineisgoodforme.6.Theysaythey'llvolunteerinthehospital.7.IhopewhatIsaidwillbevaluabletoyou.8.Inmyopinion,doingsomesuitablehomeworkisnecessaryandhelpful.9.Somepeoplethinkgoingabroadisverygood.10.Themorechanceswehave,themoreprogresswe'llmake.常用表达根据汉语意思完成句子。1.谢谢你深深的爱。谢谢你为我所做的一切。Thankyouforyour.Thankyouforallthatyouforme.2.我宁愿在家里看电视也不愿到外面踢足球。IwatchTVathomethanplaysocceroutside.3.当我第一次在公开场合做演讲时,我感到非常紧张。IwhenIfirstmadeaspeech.基础写作deeplovehavedonewouldratherfeltverynervousinpublic4.我很少在网上购物,因为我认为这不够安全。IseldombuythingsonlinebecauseIit's.5.依我的观点,做适量的作业有必要并且有帮助。Inmyopinion,it'stodosomesuitablehomework.6.有些人认为,学生不应该在学校使用手机。Somepeoplethinkstudentsshouldn'tatschool.7.我认为考试是有用的,但是太多的考试是有害的。Ithinkexaminations,buttoomanyexaminations.don'tthinksafeenoughnecessaryandhelpfulusemobilephonesareusefulareharmful/bad8.丰富多彩的课外活动对学生的身心有好处。Colourfulafter-schoolactivitiesstudents'bodyandmind.9.有些父母认为孩子们的爱好会妨碍他们的学业。Someparentsthatchildren'shobbiescanoftheirschoolwork.10.我们应该允许青少年选择他们自己的服饰。Weteenagerstheirownclothes.aregoodforthinkgetinthewayshouldallowtochoose许多孩子都热衷于上网,但上网对学生而言有利有弊。请你根据下表提供的信息用英语写一篇小短文,描述上网的优点和缺点,谈谈自己的看法以及自己上网会怎么做。典例分析优点缺点快速获得大量的信息;正确使用网络有助于学习;广交朋友经常玩游戏、聊天,浪费时间和金钱并且不利于学习;可能上当受骗你的看法和做法：……[注意]词数：80左右。[参考词汇]disadvantagen.缺点,cheatv.欺骗,goonline上网Todaymanystudentsareinterestedingoingonline.Butithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.【思路点拨】1.谋篇布局：通过对表格的分析可知文章可以分两部分来写。一部分写上网的优点和缺点,另一部分写自己的看法和做法;2.时态：一般现在时;3.人称：第三人称(描写上网的优点和缺点),第一人称(表达自己的观点);4.重点词汇和句型：(1)advantage,disadvantage,information,cheat,playgames,begoodfor,goonline,plantodo(2)when引导的时间状语从句,if引导的条件状语从句,(that引导的)宾语从句(Ithinkgoingonline…)。【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】Todaymanystudentsareinterestedingoingonline.Butithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Asfortheadvantages,itcanhelpyougetalotofinformationquickly.Itisalsoausefullearningtoolandcanhelpyoumakefriends.However,playinggamesandchattingonlinemaywastelotsoftimeandmoney,soitisn'tgoodforourstudy.Alsoyoumaybecheatedwhenyougoonline.Ithinkgoingonlineisgoodforme.Iplantogoonlineforanhoureveryday.Ifyoumakeaplan,youcanfinditveryuseful.【名师点评】1.结合要点,具体说明了网络的优点和缺点。2.提出自己的观点时,用“Ithink…”过渡,过渡自然,行文流畅。3.when/if引导的从句以及含情态动词的被动句(youmaybecheated…)的使用更是让文章增色不少。A[2019·宁波]回顾初中三年,有许多事令人难忘。校英语报HaveYourSay栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李华,请你选择其中一个话题．．．．．．,并结合具体事例,用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意,参加此次征文活动。要点如下：实战演练say“thanks”tosay“sorry”to1.benotgoodat…2.encouragemeto…3.makegreatprogress4.…1.arguewith…2.nottalktoeachother3.regretdoing…4.…[注意](1)短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点,并适当拓展;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(3)词数：80—100。书信格式已给出;(4)首句供参考：Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I'dliketosay…Dear,Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I'dliketosayYours,LiHuaPossibleversion1:DearAlice,Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I'dliketosaythankstoyouforhelpingmewithmyEnglish.WhenIwasinGrade7,IwasnotgoodatEnglish.Ijusthidbehindmytextbookandneversaidanythinginclass.OnceIdidverybadlyinanEnglishtest,andIlostheart.However,youhadapatienttalkwithmeandencouragedmetobemoreactiveinclass.Sincethen,Ihaveworkedharderandmadegreatprogress.Ifeelluckytobeyourstudent.Thankyouagain.Wishyougoodluck.Yours,LiHuaPossibleversion2:DearAlan,Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,I'dliketosaysorrytoyouforarguingwithyou.WhenwewereinGrade8,welostthechancetogetthefirstprizeinthefootballmatch.Ineverstoppedcomplainingtoyouthatitwasyouwhomissedthegoal.Butyoushoutedbackthatyouwerenottheonlyreason.Youwalkedoffangrily.Fromthenon,wedidn'ttalktoeachother.Ihavebeenregrettingdoingso.Soonwewillgraduatefromourschool.Let'sforgetaboutthepastandbecomegoodfriendsagain.Yours,LiHuaB[2019·天水]“你养我长大,我陪你变老。”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出,成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业,是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点,写一篇英语短文。[要点](1)给我生命,一直照顾我成长;(2)努力工作,为我提供良好的生活和教育条件;(3)拥有爱心,教我学会……(4)今天,我要为你们……(自主发挥,至少两点)。[注意](1)词数：80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.Onepossibleversion:Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.Yougivemelifeandtakecareofmeallthetime.WhenIhaveproblemswithmy