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话题写作（三）快乐成长与思考感悟【话题点睛】成长的话题包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。成长话题的作文可能涉及的要点：(1)成长过程中,家长、老师、朋友对你的关怀与帮助,以及你的感恩与感悟。(2)成长过程中遇到的烦恼与困惑,如学习紧张、考试压力、处理同学关系、代沟等。(3)提出解决问题的方法与建议,如,培养自信,树立远大目标,多与家长、老师沟通,向身边的朋友倾诉等。1.烦恼类—havetoomuchhomework;alone;feellonely;bestrictwith;feelbored;sleepy;betiredof;nervous;worried;havetroubleindoing;feelstressed;sad;unhappy;afraid;beafraidofdoing;beafraidtodo;drivesb.mad…2.愉悦类—happy;happiness;glad;excited;love;enjoy;beproudof/takepridein;bepleasedwith;amazing;becrazyabout;laugh;smile;cheer;surprise…词汇集锦3.行动类—express;communicatewith;invitesb.to;takepartin/joinin;discusswith;encouragesb.todo;allowsb.todo;share…with…;geton/alongwellwith;growup…1.Weallwanttogrowhappilyandhealthily.2.You'dbettereatmorefruitandvegetablesinsteadoftoomuchmeat.3.Sharingwithfriendshelpsmebringbackmyconfidence.4.It'sdifficultforustogetonwellwithourparents.5.I'mnotallowedtoplaycomputergames.6.Withyourhelp,I'vemadegreatprogressinEnglish.常用表达根据汉语意思完成句子。1.我最大的问题是没有很多时间用于我的爱好。MyisthatIdon'havemuchtime.2.作为中学生,我们应该学会如何与他人融洽相处。Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldlearnhowto.3.每个人都有自己的做事方式,所以我们应该相互理解。Everyonehashisownway,soweshould.基础写作biggestproblemformyhobbiesgeton/alongwellwithotherstodothingsunderstandeachother4.太多的家庭作业使学生对学习失去兴趣。这也对他们的健康有害。Toomuchhomeworkmakesstudentsstudy.It'salso.5.当我取得进步时,我的父母总是很开心并且鼓励我做得更好。WhenI,myparentsarealwayshappyand.6.当你处于困境时,你应该向老师寻求帮助。Whenyou,youshouldhelp.loseinterestinbadfor/harmfultotheirhealthmakeprogressencouragemetodobetterareintroubleaskyourteacherfor7.在我看来,似乎现在的孩子们更依赖他们的父母了。Itmethatkidstodaytheirparents.8.放松并不是浪费时间。毕竟生活不应该只有学习和工作。Relaxingisn't.Anyway,lifeshouldn'tjustandwork.awasteoftimebeaboutstudyseemstodependmoreon伴随着身心的日益成长,如何与父母相处是初中生必须要面对和解决的问题。假如你是YangLing,下面是一封你的笔友May给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail的内容给她写一封回信,与她交流看法,并帮她排忧解难。典例分析DearYangLing,I'mafraidI'vegotabigproblemrecently.Mymothertalkstoomuchtome.Shealwaystellsme,“Becarefulwhilecrossingthestreet.”“Putonmoreclothes.”“Didyoudoagoodjobatschool?”andsoon.I'mannoyed(烦恼).WhatshallIdo?Yours,May[提示词语]listento,mother'slove,careabout,communicatewith,getalongwith,smile[写作要求](1)语句通顺,书写工整;(2)可用所给提示词语,也可以适当发挥;(3)词数：80-100。【思路点拨】1.要点：针对来信帮May分析并解决与妈妈相处的问题。要弄清：(1)May的问题;(2)你的分析;(3)你的建议;2.时态：一般现在时;3.人称：第一人称;4.重点词汇及句型：(1)asateenager,getalongbetterwithsb.,careabout,communicatewith;(2)if条件状语从句;(3)Ihope表达自己的愿望。【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】DearMay,Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangetalongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.Yourmothertalkstoomuch,becauseshecaresaboutyou.Maybeit'snotagoodway,butitshowsyourmother'slove.SoIthinkyoushouldlistentoherandbefriendlytoher.Ifyouropinionsaredifferentfromyourmother's,youcancommunicatewithher,andtellherwhatyouarethinkingabout.Ifyourmotherdoesn'ttakeyouradvice,justkeepsilentandgiveherasmile.Remember：Mumistheonewhoalwayslovesyoubest!IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.Yours,YangLing【名师点评】1.本文是一封书信,格式正确。作为一封回信,针对来信中的问题有分析有建议,很全面。2.运用了“Herearesomeideasforyou.”,顺理成章地引出分析和建议。正确合理地使用了祈使句和宾语从句。A人非圣贤,孰能无过?作为一名学生,在学习或生活中你是否也曾犯过错误、做过傻事?在认识到自己所犯错误或明白所做的傻事后,你又是如何改正的呢?请根据写作要点提示,以“TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUp”为题,用英语写一篇短文。[写作要点提示](1)简述你犯过的一次错误或做过的一件傻事;(2)谈谈你是如何在他人的帮助下或自己的努力下改正的;(3)你从中吸取了哪些教训或收获了哪些成长的经验。实战演练[注意事项](1)词数：90左右;(2)短文应包含提示的要点,可适当增加情节,以使行文连贯;(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;(4)已给标题不计入总词数。TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUpOnepossibleversion:TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUpEveryonemaymakemistakes.Mistakesmakeusgrow.Ifwelearnfromourmistakes,wewillhavelearntanothersecrettosuccess.Althoughmistakesareannoying,aslongaswefacethembravely,wewillsucceedsoonerorlater.TherewasonceatimewhenImadeamistakeinaMathsexam.Becauseofcarelessness,Ifailedtheexam.WhenIwasdepressed,itwasmyMathsteacherwhogavemeahandandtoldmethatmistakescouldalsoteachmealesson.WhatshetoldmeencouragedmetofacemyMathsproblembravely.Finally,myMathsgradesimproved.Takingmyexperienceintoconsideration,everyonecanconquertheunavoidablemistakesinourlifesolongaswehavefaithinourselves.Treasurethemistakes,andyouwillwinthetreasure.B[2019·临沂]时光荏苒,初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较,你会有很多变化。请以“Ihavechangedalot!”为题,根据以下要求与提示,用英语写一篇短文,具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。[要求](1)短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息;(2)不少于60词。[提示](1)Whatdidyouusetobelike?(2)Whatisthemostimportantchange?(3)Andhowdidithappen?Tellastoryaboutit.Ihavechangedalot!Onepossibleversion:Ihavechangedalot!Timegoesby.Threeyearshaspassed.OfcourseIhavechangedalot.Letmeshowyoumychanges.Iusedtobereallyshortandthin.Iusedtobeshyandquiet.Iwasalwayssilentinclass.NowIhavechangedalot.ButoneofmymostimportantchangesisthatIbecomemoreoutgoing.Whatmademechangealot?IrememberwhenIwasinGradeEight,therewasanEnglishspeechcontestinourschool.Iwantedtotakepartinit,butIwasafraidofit.OurEnglishteacher,MrWang,encouragedmetotakepartinit.Heguidedmealot,andIpractisedaloteveryday.Finally,Iwonthefirstprizeinthespeechcontest.Ifeltveryproudandhappy.Sincethen,Ihavebecomemoreoutgoing.