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话题写作（一）健康生活【话题点睛】针对的话题主要是体育锻炼和健康饮食。体育锻炼主要涉及:开展体育锻炼的方式;鼓励多进行体育运动,强身健体等。健康饮食主要涉及:远离垃圾食品,健康饮食的好处及具体做法等。“民以食为天”,饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“SayNotoJunkFood”为题,根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。[写作要点](1)垃圾食品尽管美味,但对健康无益,而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾;(2)远离垃圾食品,还应选择正确的生活方式,如:①三餐要有规律,少吃零食、快餐;②多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物,以提供身体必需营养;③多参加户外活动……典例分析[写作要求](1)词数:80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2)内容必须包括上述所有要点,可适当发挥。[参考词汇]过多包装overpackaging;有规律地regularly;营养nutritionSayNotoJunkFoodNowadays,moreandmoreattentionhasbeenpaidtofoodsafetyandhealth.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldsaynotojunkfood.Inaword,ahealthydietwithlessjunkfoodcanhelpmakeusstrongerandstronger.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是号召大家健康饮食,少吃垃圾食品。写作内容可以从以下几方面展开:(1)垃圾食品虽美味,但既不健康,又不环保;(2)倡导健康的生活方式,如按时吃三餐,多吃水果、蔬菜,多做户外运动等;(3)总结概括健康的生活方式给我们带来的好处。2.确定时态:一般现在时3.确定人称:第一人称/第二人称【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.为了保持健康的生活方式,我们应该远离垃圾食品。(stayawayfrom)Tokeepahealthylifestyle,weshould.2.垃圾食品的确对我们的身体有害。(doharmto)Junkfoodsurelyourbody.3.健康的饮食能有助于使我们越来越强壮。(比较级+and+比较级)Ahealthydietcanhelpmakeus.4.从此次经历中我意识到我必须停止吃垃圾食品。(stopdoingsth.)FromtheexperienceIknowIjunkfood.stayawayfromjunkfooddoesharmtostrongerandstrongermuststopeatingⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.Havemorefruitandvegetables.Theycanprovidethenutritionweneed.(改为定语从句)2.Thereisnodoubt.Junkfoodsurelydoesharmtoourbody.(合并为一句)Havemorefruitandvegetableswhichcanprovidethenutritionweneed.Thereisnodoubtthatjunkfoodsurelydoesharmtoourbody.【连句成文】SayNotoJunkFoodNowadays,moreandmoreattentionhasbeenpaidtofoodsafetyandhealth.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldsaynotojunkfood.Thereisnodoubtthatjunkfoodismadedeliciousandattractive,butitsurelydoesharmtoourbody.Meanwhile,theoverpackagingleadstomuchmorerubbish.Togetawayfromjunkfood,weshouldfocusonhowtokeepahealthylifestyle.Therearemanytipstofollow.First,eatregularly—threemealsadayontime.Tryasfewsnacksandlittlefastfoodaspossible.Second,havemorefruitandvegetableswhichcanprovidethenutritionweneed.What’smore,domoreoutdooractivities.Aslongasyouarebusywithsomethinginteresting,youwillmoreprobablygetawayfromjunkfood.Inaword,ahealthydietwithlessjunkfoodcanhelpmakeusstrongerandstronger.【参考谚语】1.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。2.Thefirstwealthishealth.健康是人生第一财富。3.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果,医生远离我。拓展积累【相关短语】saynotojunkfood拒绝垃圾食品;getawayfromjunkfood远离垃圾食品;keepahealthylifestyle保持健康的生活方式;makeusstrongerandstronger使我们越来越强壮;takeanactivepartinP.E.积极上体育课;developgoodhabits养成良好的习惯;stayuptoolate熬夜到很晚【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Nowadays,moreandmoreattentionhasbeenpaidtofoodsafetyandhealth.2.TodayIamgladtotellyousomethingabouthowtokeepahealthylifestyle.3.Healthisimportantbutnotallthestudentshaverealizeditsimportance.4.It’sknowntousthatahealthylifestyleleadstoahealthylife,soit’simportantforustokeepahealthylifestyle.文章发展、过渡句1.Firstofall,it’sagoodideatohaveabalanceddiet.2.Doingsportscanmakeushealthyandstrong.3.What’smore,weneedenoughsleeptokeephealthy.4.Lastbutnotleast,beinghappyisanotherwaytokeephealthy.文章结尾句1.Ithinkallthesesuggestionsabovewillbehelpfultous.2.Ifyoufollowtheusefuladvice,Ithinkyouwillkeephealthy.3.Ihopeeveryonecaneathealthily,dosportsandhaveabetterlife.4.Allinall,ahealthylifestylecanhelpyourelaxmoreinbothstudyanddailylife.A会工作、会学习、会运动、会娱乐就是会生活。良好的运动习惯是生活的重要组成部分。请你根据以下要点提示,以“SportsMakeMeStrongandConfident”为题,写一篇短文。[写作要点](1)每天早晨6:30起床,做半个小时的早操;晚饭后散步1小时;(2)步行上学;(3)主动上体育课,积极参加课外活动;(4)身体健壮,精力充沛;运动会常得第一。实战演练[写作要求](1)80—100词。开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;(2)内容合理,要点齐全,语句正确、连贯,书写规范,可适当发挥;(3)不得出现真实姓名及校名。SportsMakeMeStrongandConfidentEverybody,menorwomen,youngorold,shouldhaveagoodhabitofdoingsports.SoshouldI,andsoIdo.Onepossibleversion:SportsMakeMeStrongandConfidentEverybody,menorwomen,youngorold,shouldhaveagoodhabitofdoingsports.SoshouldI,andsoIdo.Inthemorning,Iusuallygetupat6:30,anddomorningexercisesforhalfanhour.Afterbreakfast,Iwalktoschool,whichisalsoakindofexercise.Inschool,ItakeanactivepartinP.E.Sometimesweplayfootballandvolleyball.Sometimesweplaybasketball,tabletennisorbadminton.Footballismyfavoritesport.Ialsotakepartinafter-classactivities.Intheeveningaftersupper,Ioftentakeawalkalongthestreetnearmyhouseforanhourwithmyparents.Ilikedoingsports,becauseitmakesmehealthy,strongandenergetic.Ioftengetthefirstprizeintheschoolsportsmeeting.Iwillkeepthegoodhabitsallmylife.B[2019·乐山]为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品,政府出台了陪餐制,要求从4月1日起,学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。[提示](1)学生吃得健康、安全;(2)及时发现就餐问题;(3)食堂提供食品多样;(4)父母更加放心。[注意](1)词数:80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)参考词汇:规定regulation(n.);食堂cafeteria(n.);营养的nutritious(adj.)AnewfoodsafetyregulationwasputintouseonApril1toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolleaderstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias.Onepossibleversion:AnewfoodsafetyregulationwasputintouseonApril1toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolleaderstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias.Thankstotheregulation,somethinggreathastakenplaceinourschool.First,weeatmorehealthilyandsafelythanbefore.Second,ifthereisanyproblemaboutfoodsafetyorothers,ourschoolleadersareabletoknowandsolveitquickly.Also,thecafeteriaworkersaretryingtoprovidedifferentkindsoffoodforus.Inotherwords,ourparentsneedn’tworryaboutourdietanymor