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话题写作（四）人物故事【话题点睛】针对名人或周围熟悉的同学、朋友或家人进行描写。主要涉及人物的经历、变化或自己对此人物的看法等方面。三年的初中生活,你对自己的表现一定有满意的方面和不满意的方面。假如你是林薇,请参照以下提示,给你的学弟学妹们用英语写一篇毕业留言,希望对他们有所帮助。典例分析提示内容提示词简单自我介绍姓名,班级……ClassThree对自己满意的方面勤学好问,养成良好的学习习惯……workhard,agoodhabitof对自己不满意的方面忙于学习,锻炼身体较少……bebusy,dolessexercise对学弟学妹们的建议或希望乐于助人,积极参加志愿活动……begladto,volunteeractivities[注意](1)参照提示适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名;(3)词数:80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。Dearboysandgirls,Yours,LinWei【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:(1)自己三年来的优点及收获;(2)自己存在的缺点及问题;(3)自己给学弟学妹们的建议。2.确定时态:讲述自己的优缺点时用一般现在时,讲述自己的收获或取得的成绩时用现在完成时和一般过去时。3.确定人称:讲述自己的情况用第一人称,提建议时用第二人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.我勤学好问,并且养成了许多良好的学习习惯。(habitof)Iamandhavedevelopedmanylearning.2.我的视力变得相当弱。(inone’seyesight)Ihavebecomequiteweak.3.我通常忙于辛苦的工作。(bebusywith)Iwasusually.hard-workinggoodhabitsofinmyeyesightbusywithhardworkⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.It’salsoapity.Ididlessexercise.(用that连成一个句子)2.Ialsohope.Youallcantakeanactivepartinsomevolunteeractivities.(合并为宾语从句)It’salsoapitythatIdidlessexercise.Ialsohope(that)youallcantakeanactivepartinsomevolunteeractivities.【连句成文】Dearboysandgirls,I’mLinWei.IcomefromClassThree.It’smyhonortosharewhatIhavegotandlostinthepastthreeyears.Iamhard-workingandhavemadegreatprogress.Ihavedevelopedmanygoodhabitsoflearning.Ididwellintheexams.However,Ialsohadsomeproblems.IspentmoretimeonlineandIhavebecomequiteweakinmyeyesight.What’smore,it’salsoapitythatIdidlessexercisebecauseIwasusuallybusywithhardwork.InthefutureIhopeyoucanunderstandthesaying,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Soyoushouldbegladtohelpthemifsomeoneisintrouble.Ialsohopeyouallcantakeanactivepartinsomevolunteeractivities,suchasbeingavolunteerinprotectingtheenvironment,helpingdisabledchildrenandsoon.Thankyou,mydearteachersandschoolmates.Wishmyschoolmorebeautiful,andmyteachersandschoolmatesahappylife!Yours,LinWei【参考谚语】1.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。2.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者,事竟成。3.Allthingsintheirbeingaregoodforsomething.天生我材必有用。拓展积累【相关短语】bebornin出生于;comefrom=befrom来自;begoodat=dowellin擅长;beofmediumbuild中等身材;beofmediumheight中等身高;getonwellwith与……和睦相处;attheageof在……岁时;makefriends交朋友【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Jimismybestfriendbuthehaschangedalotinthepast3years.2.Istillrememberoneofmymemoriesinthethreeyears’life,whichimpressedmeverymuch.3.Today,IwouldliketointroduceoneofthegreatestwritersnamedLaoShe.文章发展、过渡句1.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn’tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.2.Sincethen,shehaskepthelpingme.3.What’smore,shealwayslentmeahandandencouragedmetogetupwhileIfelldown.4.Wheneversheseesyou,shealwaysgivesyouafriendlysmilewhichmakesyoucomfortable.文章结尾句1.Ithinkpeoplesurelychangeastimegoesby.Eventhoughshehaschangedalot,wewillbethebestfriendsallthetime.2.Ihavelearnedalotfromhim.Iwilltrymybesttohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.3.Fromhim,Irealizethesecrettosuccessisnotwhenorwhereyouwereborn,butwhatyouaredoingandhowyoudoitinyourlife.4.Inshort,wecangetonwellwitheachotherandwewillenjoyourselveseveryday.A[2019·临沂]时光荏苒,初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较,你会有很多变化。请以“Ihavechangedalot!”为题,根据以下要求与提示,用英语写一篇短文,具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。[要求](1)短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息;(2)不少于60词。实战演练[提示](1)Whatdidyouusetobelike?(2)Whatisthemostimportantchange?(3)Andhowdidithappen?Tellastoryaboutit.Ihavechangedalot!Onepossibleversion:Ihavechangedalot!Timegoesby.Threeyearshaspassed.OfcourseIhavechangedalot.Letmeshowyoumychanges.Iusedtobereallyshortandthin.Iusedtobeshyandquiet.Iwasalwayssilentinclass.NowIhavechangedalot.ButoneofmymostimportantchangesisthatIbecomemoreoutgoing.Whatmademechangealot?IrememberwhenIwasinGradeEight,therewasanEnglishspeechcontestinourschool.Iwantedtotakepartinit,butIwasafraidofit.OurEnglishteacherMr.Wangencouragedmetotakepartinit.Heguidedmealot,andIpracticedaloteveryday.Finally,Iwonthefirstprizeinthespeechcontest.Ifeltveryproudandhappy.Sincethen,Ihavebecomemoreoutgoing.B[2019·天津]假如你是晨光中学的学生李华,平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点,描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情,并表达自己的想法。(1)一个男孩不舒服,开始呕吐。一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面。男孩表达感谢。(2)地铁到站,有人挤向座位,有人下不去车,有人因此争吵。(3)你认为……[参考词汇]开始呕吐begintovomit挤向座位pushtowardstheseat争吵haveaquarrel[要求](1)词数:80—100;(2)日记格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数;(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。WednesdayWhenItooktheundergroundbackhomeafterschool,InoticedOnepossibleversion:WednesdayWhenItooktheundergroundbackhomeafterschool,Inoticedaboyonthetrain.Hewasnotfeelingverywellandsuddenlybegantovomitonthefloor.Atthesametime,ayoungwomaningoodclothesnoticedhimandhelpedcleanthefloor.Theboywasverygratefulforherkindness.However,whenthetrainarrivedatthestation,somepeoplepushedtowardstheseatsassoonasthetrainstopped,whilesomeofthepassengerscouldn’tgetoffthetrain.Someoneevenhadaquarrelaboutit.Thesetwothingsimpressedmeverymuch.Ifweallactliketheyoungwomanandthinkmoreofothers,Ithinkourworldwillbeamuchmorebeautifulplace.